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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no you're not. you say shit like that all the time and when someone calls you on it, that's when you apologise. think before you speak that's all.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    OK, OK I'm sorry. He laught as to make clear he wasn't.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • steppenwolfsteppenwolf Posts: 164
    And there it was: forgiveness denied, a cruel cigarette, my path interupted again.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey found it hard having hamish around sometimes. the boy needs a jolt.


    ' do you even know your brother is gay?'

    the look hamish gave davey indicated that in fact he did not know this. either that or he didn't believe it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • steppenwolfsteppenwolf Posts: 164
    Evidence, facts, these investigative things, was at the center of it all: guilt and innocence; not belief or faith, and this was troublesome.
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Are you shiting me Davey?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'and i'd have what to gain from lying?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey come fuckin´on man, I am starting to believe you if this is a joke you better tell me because I´m freaking out here.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' christ hamish. you can not be that unobservant. look to be truthful i don't know for sure whether he is gay, but i know that he swings both ways. he's your brother so why would you have a problem with it. besides it's nobody's business anyway.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I live in the same house as he does Davey. It will be weird. I don´t know it´s just so fucking gross.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey shook his head at the stupidity of his friend.

    'what are you worried about? you think johnny's gonna fuck you up the arse while you sleep?'

    the look on hamish's face said that he thought that it was a distinct possibility. davey clapped his hand on hamish's shoulder and laughed.

    'don't worry mate, you're probably not his type anyway.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    It's still gross. Fuck why do you tell me this, don't you know that ignorance is bliss?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' and what happens when you run into johnny and he's got a guy with him?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Shit man I don't want to think about that.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well you're gonna have to. pass me that pile there will you.'

    hamish looked down at the table they were standing at and lifted a stack of proof sheets. handing them to davey, he held back the top one looking at it more closely. they were of anna's artwork.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    We will see it when we get there, or at least I will, just as long as he doesn't come into my home.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' so you're going to ban your brother from bringing his boyfriends into his own home? do you practise being a jerk or does it just come naturally?'

    davey took the proofs hamish had given him and walked across the room depositing them on the top of a filing cabinet.he turned and looked at hamish.

    'have you seen anna lately?'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey that's cool two Counting crows songs combined in one question. You are so talented Davey. You should do something with the shit you say.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey bit his tongue to stop from ripping into hamish.

    'it's only amusing when i know what you're on about hamish. i don't listen to shit music so you're going to have to help me with the counting crows. how did you say anna was doing?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Last I heard just fine.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya could hear vincent stomping down the hall. she was trapped in the kitchen so all she could do was hope he forgot she was in the house. so such luck. his form filled the doorway. it amused him that his wife was cowering against the bench.

    'so tell me again what that bitch told you freya.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Who? told me what?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    vincent smirked.

    'don't get cute with me. i know you went to see your sister the other day. i want to know what bullshit she's been filling your head with.'

    when vincent stepped inside the kitchen, freya tried to back up but she had nowhere to go. when he grabbed her arm, the look on her face was one of utter terror. her skin squeezed beneath his fingers turned white.

    'you're not going anywhere until i find out.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Find out what? Stop this you´re hurting me Vincent.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    vincent wasn't one for playing games. he let freya go and when she tried to stand up straight, he let fly with a backhander that sent her sprawling onto the tiles. he stood over her.

    'don't play games with me. i'm not in the fucking mood for your bullshit. i know she said something to you. tell em or so help me god......'

    vincent didn't finish his threat cause the phone rang. he swore and went into the living room. he grabbed the phone and ripped it out of the wall. freya thought this was as good as chance as any to get out of there. but as she tried to get past vincent he reched out and grabbed her hair throwing her into a chair. she sat there staring at this man she thought she loved. he squatted down in front of the chair and rested his hands on freya's thighs. his touch excited and repulsed her at the same time. as she felt his hands move higher, freya knew she was in deep trouble.she was no match for vincent. he always used sex to get what he wanted. and she knew if she let him he'd do it here now.

    'i've got all day baby.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I went to see her. She just got back home, is that so strange. She can´t stand you Vincent why would we talk about you. She goes out of her way not to.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'she must have told you why'

    freya closed her eyes as she felt vincent's hand between her legs. she moved them together to stop it's advance. vincent squeezed her thigh until she opened her legs again.

    'come on you don't want me to hurt you do you? i know something is wrong freya, you haven't let me near you since you went to see her.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Freya caved, she was afraid of Vincent. she wanted to leave. What could she say to make it so she could. She told me horrible things, Vincent. I don´t want to talk about it. It was very offending to you. She told all these horrible leis, you know how she is.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    vincent was leaning in very close to freya now, he spoke softly near her ear.

    'come on baby tell what she said. you need to tell me otherwise i can't defend myself.'

    when vincent kissed her neck, freya thought she was going to throw up. she went with it just so he wouldn't hit her again.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    She told me you fucked her. There I said it. Does that satisfy you? Why would you make me repeat sucha gruesome lei?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
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