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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    what the fuck? i had no idea what johnny was on about. i thought i did apologise. well i apologised for what i thought i had done.


    'and i don't need this johnny. i thought i did apologise. i can't think about this right now.'

    i left johnny standing on the corner and walked across the road.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What was he thinking the whining idiot. I’m feeling like shit and he’s raving on about his problem.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    johnny walked away. he couldn't believe anna didn't get it. he understood that she wasn't totally with it but surely she could not understand how important his admission had been. and how difficult it had been for him to tell her. to tell anybody. she thought it was just about her making a move on him and him rebuffing her. sure he could have told her what he was pissed off about but he wanted her to realise it on her own. he must have been more deep in thought than knew cause when johnny looked up hamish was talking to him.

    'didn't you hear me call out to you? you look a thousand miles away. you okay? umm i think we need to talk about some stuff.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What stuff? Are you still worked up over that Anna thing the other day? I told you I am not intrested in her that way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no. this has nothing to do with anna for a change. it's about you actually.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I am not really in the mood for any of your wierd behavior Hamish. I think I'd rather just say bye bye, and be on my way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i'm not being weird. i was talking to davey the other day and he said a few things that made me think. are you sure you're not interested in anna cause you two have a knack for jumping down my throat. you could even be at each other's throat all day and probably not get tired of the abuse.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What is it then, Hamish come on spit it out.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish looked around, not really wanting to get into his brother's sexuality whilst standing on the street.

    'can we go somewhere and talk?'

    it wasn't johnny's feelings he was thinking about. more the fact that he didn't want anyone thinking that he might be gay. as if it could rub off or something.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Tell me what you want Hamish, or else I'm off.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'davey said that you...that you are.. are you gay?'

    there he said it. hamish didn't know if it was a relief or not.

    'davey seems to think you are. well that you at least bat for both teams. you don't do you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why would you be happier if I rooted for the away team?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'just fucking tell me would you.'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hamish my deeply beloved brother; I am just as queer than you are.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'so it's true then? you're not going to give me a straight answer.'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I can only give you queer answers, but that is kinda the same thing ain't it? Yes Hamish I like men. I love to taste them, I love to kiss them, in fact I love them in every way you wish Anna would love you. Does that answer your question, Hamish? Is that straight enough?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' don't bring anna into this. it's got nothing to do with anything.'

    that wasn't necessarily true, but hamish didn't need reminding about how anna wouldn't give him the time of day, other than being friends.

    'i want you gone from the house johnny. is that straight enough for you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Have you seen me around these last few days? I wouldn't spend any more time with you than absolutly nessesery. Goodbye oh enlighted one, gift that you are, the all maker had a good day when he made you, Hamish my boy. You dude are a gem, that you are. See you around pussy.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish watched his brother walk away from him and possibly out of his life. obviously johnny had more balls than he ever gave him credit for. he'd noticed that lately. now he knew why. the thought of his brother with other men repulsed him. he certainly didn't want to be thinking about what it was they did together. did johnny have a boyfriend? hamish shuddered at the prospect of that possibility. he turned in the direction of anna's.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hallo are you up yet? Jeff you lazy ass why are you in bed still?
    Johnny opened up the curtains of Jeffrey's bedroom, a room that was now basically theirs only Jeffrey didn't know that yet. Hey there sleepyhead, rise and shine lover.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    jeffrey rolled over and looked at johnny.

    'i've got to work tonight you know.'

    as johnny sat on the edge of the bed next to jeffrey, jeffrey moved his head and rested it on johnny's leg.

    'so how'd it go with the miss. not good by the looks of you.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    That would be the understatement of the year. It didn't go anything like I had hoped it would. She didn't have a clue what so ever about why I was angry with her.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well i hate to tell you this darling but sometimes you can be vague. and from what you've told me about anna, she needs you to be absolutely clear about stuff. you want to climb in here with me?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    That probable means you won't get out though.
    Anyway I don't want to make it easy for her. She has to know that what she did was wrong. I don't want an apology because she thinks I want to hear it. She needs to mean it, I want to know that she is sorry.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    jeffrey a wrapped his arm around johnny as he laid down beside him.

    'cut her a break will you. she's going through some stuff just the same as you are.can we take this shirt off you'

    johnny didn't resist as jeffrey helped him off with his t shirt.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    All well and good Jeffrey, but I sometimes can't stand that fact that everything needs to be about her. I love her very much, but that is hard to handle.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'she's the one with the illness not you. i'd be more concerned about that homophobe brother of yours.'

    jeffrey tried to get johnny interested in something other than talking about anna. he ran his hand down his lover's back, resting his hand on johnny's hip inside his jeans.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh that. I don't really care for the little roach. I met him on the way back here.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    trying to have a conversation with jeffrey when he was obviously horny was extremely difficult. johnny rolled over to face him.

    'you don't particularly want to be talking right now do you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well,.... it's just that you're so freakin' hot when you're all worked up. Jeffrey broke out in laughter at the face Johnny made. Go on they Johnny you whimpering nancyboy make us a cup of coffee and I'll get dressed. Jeffrey curled his lips as to make the whole scene even more ridicules. Johnny went to the kitcken while saying whom is calling whom a nancyboy?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
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