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karma defect
karma defect Posts: 5,483
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
How long before the tention finds it's way out into a shamelessly giving yourself to the trip, a refined mystery of woven madness and majestic grace.
« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i stared out into the darkness without a star to light the night sky, i had to think that it wouldn't be too long.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Gazing away, the trip had started and I was sucked into the dark, a viod of some kind.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as davey spoke i rolled my eyes and tried to ignore him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    as davey spoke i rolled my eyes and tried to ignore him.
    He was the one thing that still tied me, and I so longed to let it all just slide.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i tapped my foot to music only i could hear i wondered,would he miss me when i left.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • melodious
    melodious Posts: 1,719
    starz looking down upon me reminding me of evolving experiences to come...;)
    i would miss the daze of familarity now changing like shadows in twilight
    all insanity:
    a derivitive of nature.
    nature is god
    god is love
    love is light
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yet the woven madness of these exclusive, radiate cords couldn't fade the memory of Davey.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    thinking of recent times when i couldn't get enough of him i smiled, closed my eyes and allowed myself to be lulled by the humming of the tyres.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    If only he could join me in this deep sinking, this majestic grace, I wish he'd understand.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ah but he did,that was the problem; he understood too well.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She has to go her own way, he thought, or else I'll lose the grip I have on her and lose her alltogher.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    it was a difficult decision for him, but the kiss he gave her under the streetlight really was a goodbye kiss.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    it was a difficult decision for him, but the kiss he gave her under the streetlight really was a goodbye kiss.


    And as he walked away a tence yearning grow from within, how could this be right?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i watched davey walk down the path, i wondered what the fuck just happened?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • GazzBot24
    GazzBot24 Posts: 29
    Then all of a sudden it occured to me... "Holy crap, I forgot to return that DVD I loaned from Blockbuster"
    "Recently as I was waiting on a dream...."
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I couldn't comprehand and had lost my feel, the glory that had only moments ago seemed to be mine for the taking had now sliped though my fingers.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    that son of a bitch he wasn't going to get to end this game.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She decided there and then to take hold of the situation once more, she wasn't going to be played for a fool.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    now where the fuck was that DVD?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • GazzBot24
    GazzBot24 Posts: 29
    The End?

    Based on a true story
    "Recently as I was waiting on a dream...."

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