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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    If I look anything close to how I feel, I can't say that I'm sexy right now. But I guess that's the price of having one too many Cognac's.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'ah so you were going for the pretentious drunk last night then?'
    hear my name
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    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well I don't know about the pretentious part, but yeah I felt like a drink,...... or two.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'listen. about last night. i appreciate what you were trying to do.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well she wasn't and she got hit by a car as well. I really couldn't have felt any worse. I'm sorry dude, I don't know what came over me. How is she anyway?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'it's difficult to tell with anna a lot of the time. the car thing didn't do her any harm fortunately.it's just all the other crap that's hard to wade through. i think it's over for good.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well, that's for the best. You probable feel like shit right now. Maybe even worse than my head hurts. Still it is better for the both of you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as davey poured hot water into two mugs, he doubted it.

    'you may have to keep convincing me of that. i just hated leaving her. but she was too insistant to argue with.'

    dunking a teabag into each of the mugs, he jiggled one of them and then turned to hamish. davey crossed his arms over his chest and tried to think of something positive that came out of last night.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well I know you're in pain dude but that is no excuss for this. What the hell are you talking about? Dude you were gonna make coffee. How can I talk to you about this stuff if I don't get my morning coffee.
    Hamish stood up from the coutch and walked to the kitchen. Do you want any? Huh..., no, no tea is fine for me.
    Why were you trying to argue with her, I thought you just wanted a good heart to heart and end this thing? You seemed ready for that last time we talked.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'yes cause as you know it's so easy to talk to anna when she doesn't want to know. even more so when she's headed someplace else. i just ended up holding her through the night. well until i slunk off before she woke. sometimes i just feel like if i could shake her, she'd snap out of it. make her see what she does to people.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh, ..my,.. god! That's it Davey! You are fucking brilliant. Lets go over there and try this great idea. I'm sorry Davey, but give it a rest will you. It's never gonna work. This is a blessing for you both, you need the space.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'it's frustration talking you dick. fuck hamish sometimes i wonder how women put up with you. oh that's right they don't.'

    davey walks out of the kitchen.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey no need to get all hostile on me mate. Remember tough love is love as well. What would you have me say Davey. Do you wish to hear me say go on boy, fight for your true love. That’s the only girl that you’ll ever meet. I need to be straight forward on this, she’ll be the death of you if you don’t leave.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i'll just assume that's a metaphorical death you're talking. i know you don't think i'm that weak.'

    davey raised his brow challenging hamish to disagree with him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    After a short and a for Hamish uncommon think through of what he would reply, he said with a smile; "No, no but she could creep up on you while you were sleeping". He was jumping up and down with a big grin on his face and the knife he picked up out off the sink waving over his head. She could cut of some little souvenir.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey just looked at hamish.

    'she's not crazy hamish'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh come on lighten up Davey. I was only trying to get you to smile. If you must know, I do fear for you when you're with her.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well you don't have to worry about that anymore do you?'

    davey went into the kitchen and put him mug on the sink. coming back into the living room he moved towards the font door.

    'i've got a shoot. we'll talk later. come by after work.'

    davey checked himself

    'you still do have a job don't you?'

    without really waiting for a reply davey left.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yeah I got a job, Hamish jelled will the door was already closed.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard was a little surprised to see anna. when she entered his gallery, he was supervising the hanging of quite a large canvas. he managed a smile, but kept his attention on the job at hand.

    'so what can i do for you anna'

    anna had moved to where she could see what gerard was hanging.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say

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