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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    karma defect wrote:
    I didn’t meant to imply you were selling out. I just,… well you know, you’re never exactly full of prise about the Gérard-type of person. And you do see them here often, witch can’t be said about you. Me going with ...., and you being out of practice? I take it you’re selling some art again then. I sincerely doubt you can’t pull one over on him, he always was a sucker for you Ann, you don’t need me with you. I’m going to Dizzy’s nice and quiet there now. Why don’t you come after….? We could talk….?


    i couldn't help but smile. all these years and davey didn't get me as much as he thought he did. or i thought he did for that matter. and right now i couldn't be bothered explaining it to him.

    i don't need you as some negotiator or for moral support.
    just forget you ever saw me davey.

    i walked away determined not to look back.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I could feel his doubt whether if he should follow me, I was glad he didn’t. Who did he thought I was, a weakling I didn’t need him. As I walked on to Gérard’s loft I decided their and then that this had been the end. If even he didn’t take me seriously, then what was the use of him. As I rang his Gérard’s door bell I tried to regain my composure, I’ll let them all pay in three fold.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna.
    i closed my eyes at the sound of davey's voice.
    as i turned to face him, the door to gerard's loft flew open.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Now what! I could feel the anger swell as it fed of my tormented soul.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey went to speak but gerard got there first.


    'well well if it isn't my favourite couple'.


    i rolled my eyes and davey smiled.


    'i'm in the middle of something but on come in'


    i looked at davey and then followed gerard inside.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    We went through a few staircases followed by a narrow hallway that ran all the way to the back of his loft and there you could enter.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard was on the phone, but he motioned for us to sit down. in all honesty i didn't expect to have to deal with davey today. seeing him on the street was a blessing or a mistake. i haven't decided yet. admittedly, he's always in my thoughts and i hate myself for that. i know how strange that might sound. it does to me. but i hate that being with him, needing him makes me ache and that the only way i can get past that, is to hurt someone in return. be it physically or mentally, davey,freya, me or anyone who is unfortunate enough to cross my path at the wrong time. i want to be able to give up some control of my life to someone else, but i can't seem to grasp the concept without trying to sabotage it. i look at davey now and all i want to do is be alone with him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    However strong the desire was, it didn’t make it so we would get along. The time spend between us just ended up time being spend fighting.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i must have been staring, lost in thought cause when davey spoke, it took me a few seconds to realise it. i refocussed and looked at him.

    huh? what?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I said, annoyed by my being distracted he repeated, Why did you just walk away back there Anna?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i don't think here, now is the place to get into it'.

    i looked over my shoulder to see where gerard was.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    It doesn't matter where we are it will never be the right time for you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'then what the fuck are you doing here davey. WHY did you follow me here?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What the fuck am I doing here? ......You practically forced me up here. What was I to do let you walk of like that?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i practicallyforcedyou here. have you always been this full of shit?'

    i stood up, now wanting to be anywhere but here. i started towards the door. i wanted to have it out with davey but i had a hard enough time keeping myself together. i must have been out of my mind to think we could be like we were before. i can't be around anyone right now.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Tough luck Anna! Yeah you forced me up here. You always drop a bomb on someone and then walk of. You extend me the fucking courtesy to reply. You don't walk out on people like that. You just don't
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i walked out.
    fuck him. god how could i not see that davey was as tired of me as i was. anyway i doesn't matter.
    what is that? are those tears?. come on anna keep it together. at least until you get home.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I felt a hand on my shoulder that tried to stop me. I turned around to tell him to let go, only to find that it wasn't Davey that stopped me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'what gerard?'

    i shrugged his hand off my shoulder.

    'you came to see me remember?'
    'now is not a good time'
    'when is it ever with you anna?'
    'i don't need to hear it from you too gerard'
    'god you're shaking. come on back.'

    i hesitated. gerard wrapped an arm around my shoulder.

    'he's gone.'

    i let myself be led back to gerard's loft.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I'm sorry Davey my young friend you will have to leave now, Anna isn't feeling to well and she can't see you. Gérard toke me by the hand and walk me into the kitchen, he stepped back out and closed the door behind him.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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