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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    well we can't have one of those bullshit interventions cause it's too confrontational and anna's turned that into a fine art. i honestly don't know. did you talk to freya about this the other day at the hospital?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I didn't say much of anything that night, I was angry and sad, I just said that I wanted out, That she had to take care of her, ....that, ..that I couldn't have no more.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    what about the husband, what's his name?...vincent? surely he's not useless. i remember he went to school with anna.
    hamish noted a change in davey's facial expression. it was as if at the mention of vincent's name he'd had his face slapped.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I take it you don't like him that much, care to elaborate?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna doesn't like him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey answers to the asking faciale expression Hamish shows; I don't know if it's true, but Anna says he has beaten up Freya or at least did so once, Anna throw a fit about it, but I don't know what to think of it. She's not willing to move past it even though Freya says it never happend.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    you know anna better than anyone, do you think it's true? it's not really something she'd make up. not that she ever makes up anything anyway.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No she wouldn't lei about that. She could be mistaking, I don't no it's so hard to imagine someone being abusive. If I had say, I'd say she's right.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i woke up with a start. i don't know how long i was asleep, but it's dark out. i think davey was shocked by the painting. but my god it felt good doing it. the best thing though would be that when i said i put my soul and blood into it they'd think i was being metaphorical. not that i give a shit what they think,. art critics are like movie critics, they sit around some bar somewhere and talk shit about things over more than a few glasses of chardonnay and think they make a difference. i'd love to know what marx thought of the 'art scene' nowadays. there was a lot of pretentiousness around. me? i'm not pretentious at all. hah.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    i woke up with a start. i don't know how long i was asleep, but it's dark out. i think davey was shocked by the painting. but my god it felt good doing it. the best thing though would be that when i said i put my soul and blood into it they'd think i was being metaphorical. not that i give a shit what they think,. art critics are like movie critics, they sit around some bar somewhere and talk shit about things over more than a few glasses of chardonnay and think they make a difference. i'd love to know what marx thought of the 'art scene' nowadays. there was a lot of pretentiousness around. me? i'm not pretentious at all. hah.


    She waked seemingly happy, thinking; I should give that snobby little cock of a Gérard a call. Talk about pretentious.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    yes gerard. now there was an easy mark. even davey was amused when i messed with that little shit. thinking about davey makes me smile. i guess smiling doesn't half suck afterall. i'm such an idiot. screwing things up with davey was so dumb. i could call him. yes i could do that. no he's probably with hamish. i don't have that number. i should just go see him then. yes?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Throughing the door shut with a bang I ran down the street not really sure were I was going, not really sure what to do. Should I go to him, or I could go and surprices that giant amongst mortals, Gérard never could stand my charme. Might just sell him some of my work, who knows, I could use the cash.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    lost in my own world, singing songs in my head, i walked in the direction of gerard's loft. DAVEY!! this had to be serendipity. i called his name again. he looked across the road, but ignored me. he couldn't get away quick enough. i ran across the road narrowly escaping being hit by a 4 wheel drive. a second car stopped short, the driver abused me. i ignored him. i had to catch davey.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey I hollered while running down the street, hey Davey wait up!!! It's me Anna ....wait up.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    it's me ? who was i kidding? he knew who i was. i stopped. what was i doing. chasing after a man. i don't do that. i never have. and not now, not even with davey.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Just as I was cursing myself for placing myself in this position Davey turned around. I wanted to tell him about my plan to sell some art, it was so long ago since I done so. As he walked slowly towards me he spoke and with down so blowing away all of my enthusiasm. Are you following me Anna?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    it was the smile that undid me. i was always a sucker for davey's smile. i smiled back and without thinking or hesitation i wrapped my arms around him and kissed his cheek. i let go and looked him.

    no, i said with a smile, why would i, you know me better than that?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    With a slightly sarcastic tone that I didn’t catch on to until later he remarked that he did and went on to ask; What are you doing in this neck of the woods? He pulled me back against his chest and stared at me looking uncertain. It seemed that he was trying to find some words to what he wanted to say, I could tell that what he finally said wasn’t what he wanted to say. Didn’t fancy seeing you here in the heart of sell out city.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    you think walking down a particular street is selling out?
    davey looked at me as if he were preparing to defend himself. i could have really hammered him but...

    actually if you must know i was on my way to gerard's. haven't seen the little shit in a while and i'm out of practice.

    i noted with some pleasure that davey hadn't let go of me. standing here like this it occurred to me that i never wanted him to. but the moment passed.
    i pulled away and took both his hands in mine, and stepping backwards issued a challenge..

    come with me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I didn’t meant to imply you were selling out. I just,… well you know, you’re never exactly full of prise about the Gérard-type of person. And you do see them here often, witch can’t be said about you. Me going with ...., and you being out of practice? I take it you’re selling some art again then. I sincerely doubt you can’t pull one over on him, he always was a sucker for you Ann, you don’t need me with you. I’m going to Dizzy’s nice and quiet there now. Why don’t you come after….? We could talk….?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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