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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    He walked over to me and without any notice at all he just pulled me to his chest and kissed me. I was a bit surprised by him doing so, but I couldn’t help kissing him back.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'davey stop'

    i pushed him away, but he still had a hold of my wrist. i couldn't stand anyone grabbing my wrists. or touching my feet for that matter. he must have realised and let go. what was i doing? davey ran his fingers along the scars on my arms. shivers ran up my body. this was the man i was suppose to spend the rest of my life with. maybe i would. who knew how long my life would be. if i sent him away now i'd just spend the rest of the night thinking about him. if i asked him to stay he would. so what was the problem?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why can't it ever be easy, god I'd like to be normal one day.
    I realized that we just stood there and I broke the silence by saying; Come.
    I took his hand and he followed me on to the balcony.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'what are we doing out here? ou're not going to expect me to follow you over the balustrade are you?'
    i couldn't help but laugh at the idiocy of that question.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes please follow me to down below. That would really make my day. Come on you're the romantic type, I'll even let you be Julia. He looked kind of silly as he didn't know what to say. I helped him out of his misery after I laughed at his expense. No you stupid boy you wanted this remember, now shut up and hold me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i don't know how long davey held me but when he spoke,it threw me a little.

    'come inside'

    what could i do but follow. as he held my face in his hands, brushing the hair from my eyes, i could think of no other plaec i wanted to be.

    'i would have done anything for you anna,anything. but if this is what you want, then your wish is my command.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    He kissed my neck while picking me up from the balcony and walking inside. I remember bumping into the door as we entered my living room. By then I had ripped his shirt of and we were crawling over the ground. I gave little bites in his nipple as he tried to pull my sweater over my head. He rolled me over and kissed me, with my arms still in my sweeter I pulled him closer.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    then it hit me. what we were doing. no no this was all wrong. as davey tried to kiss me i pulled back.

    'wait i don't want this davey. we're trying to close a circle not leave it open. this just doesn't feel right to me, will you just hold me?'

    davey didn't answer. i don't think he trusted himself to speak. but he did hold me. he wrapped his arms around me and held me close. i could feel his breath on my neck. and when he fell asleep his gentle snoring lulled me into sleep. i don't know how long he held me though. when i woke up to the sound of the garbage truck under the open balcony doors, i was alone. and not for the first time in my life i felt truly alone. and i was okay with that.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What the fuck are you doing here. Hamish stood in the door opening a bit moody looking like he had a night of drinking under his belt. Whatever happened to hallo Davey good morrow? Yeah, yeah, come in and make some coffee while you’re at it.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    as they waited for the kettle to boil, davey kept stealing glances at his friend.

    'you look like hell you know?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    If I look anything close to how I feel, I can't say that I'm sexy right now. But I guess that's the price of having one too many Cognac's.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'ah so you were going for the pretentious drunk last night then?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well I don't know about the pretentious part, but yeah I felt like a drink,...... or two.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'listen. about last night. i appreciate what you were trying to do.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well she wasn't and she got hit by a car as well. I really couldn't have felt any worse. I'm sorry dude, I don't know what came over me. How is she anyway?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'it's difficult to tell with anna a lot of the time. the car thing didn't do her any harm fortunately.it's just all the other crap that's hard to wade through. i think it's over for good.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well, that's for the best. You probable feel like shit right now. Maybe even worse than my head hurts. Still it is better for the both of you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    as davey poured hot water into two mugs, he doubted it.

    'you may have to keep convincing me of that. i just hated leaving her. but she was too insistant to argue with.'

    dunking a teabag into each of the mugs, he jiggled one of them and then turned to hamish. davey crossed his arms over his chest and tried to think of something positive that came out of last night.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well I know you're in pain dude but that is no excuss for this. What the hell are you talking about? Dude you were gonna make coffee. How can I talk to you about this stuff if I don't get my morning coffee.
    Hamish stood up from the coutch and walked to the kitchen. Do you want any? Huh..., no, no tea is fine for me.
    Why were you trying to argue with her, I thought you just wanted a good heart to heart and end this thing? You seemed ready for that last time we talked.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'yes cause as you know it's so easy to talk to anna when she doesn't want to know. even more so when she's headed someplace else. i just ended up holding her through the night. well until i slunk off before she woke. sometimes i just feel like if i could shake her, she'd snap out of it. make her see what she does to people.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh, ..my,.. god! That's it Davey! You are fucking brilliant. Lets go over there and try this great idea. I'm sorry Davey, but give it a rest will you. It's never gonna work. This is a blessing for you both, you need the space.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'it's frustration talking you dick. fuck hamish sometimes i wonder how women put up with you. oh that's right they don't.'

    davey walks out of the kitchen.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey no need to get all hostile on me mate. Remember tough love is love as well. What would you have me say Davey. Do you wish to hear me say go on boy, fight for your true love. That’s the only girl that you’ll ever meet. I need to be straight forward on this, she’ll be the death of you if you don’t leave.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i'll just assume that's a metaphorical death you're talking. i know you don't think i'm that weak.'

    davey raised his brow challenging hamish to disagree with him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    After a short and a for Hamish uncommon think through of what he would reply, he said with a smile; "No, no but she could creep up on you while you were sleeping". He was jumping up and down with a big grin on his face and the knife he picked up out off the sink waving over his head. She could cut of some little souvenir.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey just looked at hamish.

    'she's not crazy hamish'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh come on lighten up Davey. I was only trying to get you to smile. If you must know, I do fear for you when you're with her.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well you don't have to worry about that anymore do you?'

    davey went into the kitchen and put him mug on the sink. coming back into the living room he moved towards the font door.

    'i've got a shoot. we'll talk later. come by after work.'

    davey checked himself

    'you still do have a job don't you?'

    without really waiting for a reply davey left.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yeah I got a job, Hamish jelled will the door was already closed.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard was a little surprised to see anna. when she entered his gallery, he was supervising the hanging of quite a large canvas. he managed a smile, but kept his attention on the job at hand.

    'so what can i do for you anna'

    anna had moved to where she could see what gerard was hanging.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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