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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i could have so much fun with this one. i wonder if he'd be up for a little mindfuck.
    i laughed. he looked at me, furrowing his brow.

    'what's so funny?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    You are sweetie, you are. I laughed and was aware of how I mocked him with my laugh.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    he turned and walked away. maybe i underestimated him. wouldn't be the first time i'd made that mistake with a man. i followed, so i could lock the front door behind him. pushing the kitchen door open, he found him standing there as if he were expecting me. now who was mindfucking who? we stood looking each other in the eye, neither one of us willing to back down. almost imperceptibly, a smile formed on his face. he quickly hid it.

    'if you want something mark, you're gonna have to ask. i'm not a mind reader.'

    using his first name gave me a thrill.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    And what would it be that I need to ask?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i don't know. what is it you want to ask me?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I think you know, but for sake of the conversation, I would like to ask you to finish up your story of that night.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    a game player. i like it. i smiled in recognition.

    'no. i told you that story detective. i'm not repeating it. not here and not now. if that's all you're for, then i suggest you leave. you know where the door is.'

    i left him where he stood and walked back into the kitchen to boil the jug. leaning against the bench, i wrapped my arms around my body.
    what the fuck was i doing? i couldn't do this with him. not now. i needed to do something. to react somehow, i know that. and i guess the best defense for me, was a good attack. or so i always thought.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    You told me a story yes. It wasn't the whole storythough. You were some what hostile and unwilling to talk. I can understand that you were. I thought you might be willing to talk again now that you are calm and not in the office. You know you have something to gain from it. However if you aren't interested then I suppose you are right, I'd best be on my way. It's up to you. I would like to say that it is all the same to me but it's not. This is not a game to me miss Parker. And yet it is your turn.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'who said it was a game detective? i was raped. by a neaderthal who thinks he can do whatever he pleases and who beats up on my sister. i don't need to be shown where the lines are drawn thank you. now i think you should leave.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    If that's the way you feel, I'll go. Goodnight.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    having anna turn up at his place last night stirred many emotions in davey. he was trying to put her behind him and he knew that wasn't ever going to be easy. the only other time he had seen her so vulnerable and lost was when she lost the baby. though lord knows he didn't handle that very well. he also wondered why she didn't go to arlo instead of coming to see him. he knew she was a comfortable with him, but surely there was more to it than that. the more he thought about anna, the more confused he got. he crossed the room to where his files were and opened the second bottom drawer. this was where he kept photos that he wanted to keep private. not exactly a secure location, but then who would go through his stuff. he pulled out a sheet of paper that was A3 size. davey looked at the sleeping form that was anna. she was naked and nearly five months pregnant. she had fallen asleep on a mattress on the floor one day after they had made love. the sunlight streamed through the window. her hand rested protectively on her tummy. it was a tight shot that started just above her brow and ended just as her belly started to curve under. it was one of his favourite shots of her.
    the phone rang bringing davey out of his reminiscence. he left the photo on the bench as he went to answer the it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ola amigo! Do I have good news for you? Yes! You win a photo shoot with top model. Yes.

    Is that you Dex? Yes I thought it was you. What's up?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'you know i saw your girl yesterday. she didn't look too good.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ah yes she told me about that meeting.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'she was looking for my brother. don't know if she found him though. what's up with her she seemed a bit freaked out by me. i don't know why. i'm an alright guy. i wasn't gonna hurt her or nothing'

    davey realised that perhaps dex was a little high. he did tend to ramble on when he was under the influence.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Dex my friend you know you are too much for any girl to handle. I am sure she was blown away by your charmes.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    what davey said sailed right over dex's head. davey heard him sigh and then dex swore as something smashed. then dex dropped the phone. davey had to stop himself from laughing as he listened to dex try and retrieve it. but he realised it wasn't a funny situation.

    'what? i'm not too much of a girl. am I? why am i a girl? what?'

    dex was clearly not thinking straight.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    It's nothing Dex. Have you been to Tommy today.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    there was no reply and davey had to wonder if dex even knew he was still on the phone.

    'is isabelle there with you dex?'

    dex seemed to stir, but still said nothing.

    'DEX!'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'is isabelle there with you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Of course she is here. We were just about to,..... when you called.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'think i could maybe talk to her a sec?'

    davey didn't know what good it would do. he had only met isabelle on a few occasions. she was barely out of her teens and she was as flighty as dex was fucked up.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why do you want to talk to her? You're not trying to steal her are you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    junkie's were such a pain in the arse.

    'she's a little young for me mate.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What are you saying what's for me isn't good enough for you? This attitude is really disappointing Davey, I thought you were a cool guy. I guess I was wrong.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey let out a sigh.

    'look dex i don't want to get into an argument with you. i was kind of in the middle of something when you rang. so unless there's something specific you wanted i have to go.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh yeah I was asked if you would like to come to the party next Friday. Do you? It would be soo coll if you could make it. It's gonna be really fab. We're gonna play and everyone will be there. You just have to be there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh yeah I was asked if you would like to come to the party next Friday. Do you? It would be soooo cool if you could make it. It's gonna be really fab. We're gonna play and everyone will be there. You just have to be there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey thought it strange toby hadn't mentioned it when he spoke to him earlier. but hey sometimes these things got pulled together quickly.

    'if i have nothing on then sure i'll be there.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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