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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i sighed.

    'you really want to talk about this now?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No not per se. What do you want to talk about?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i smiled.

    'i don't want to talk at all arlo. but if you'd rather talk about nudes than being one. then fine by me. i like painting nudes because it's when we're most vulnerable. there's nothing to hide behind. plus the naked body is a beautiful thing. don't you think?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    It can be, yes.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    arlo stepped towards me and pushed the cardigan off my shoulders. he took my hand in his and kissed it's palm. as he started to unwrap the bandage, i tried to pull my hand away. but arlo held fast. he dropped the bloody bandage to the floor and kissed my wrist. it hurt a little but i could live with it.
    he continued kissing up my arm. when he got to my neck, he spoke.

    'tell me anna. why do you hurt yourself like that?'

    he didn't stop kissing me and he expected me to be able to answer.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I wanted him to shut up. I didn't afraid that he might stop. For a few seconds I wasn't able to say anything, I didn't know if I wanted to answer him. Did I trust him? I should have answered that question with no. I should have told myself to shut up.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i wanted this man. and i really wanted to feel his skin against mine. did he need to know why i did what i did? i don't know. maybe? it occurred to me that i might not get what i wanted if he didn't get what he wanted. shit they call that consideration don't they? or compromise? i don't really know. all i know is this is new to me. i always took what i wanted. davey never asked for anything in return.

    'it helps me cope'

    there i said it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    He move to my back and kissed me between my shoulder blades moving down my spine.

    You are gonna have to do better than that Anna.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i closed my eyes as i felt his lips through the cotton of my dress. as i unzipped my dress and let it fall, i turned so that arlo's lips kissed me just below my belly button. he looked up at me.

    'why do you want to know arlo?'

    i leant down and with my hands holding his face i kissed his lips. as he squeezed my butt i realised that right now i would have told this man anything he wanted to know. though that didn't mean i was going to make it easy.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    It seems relevant in order to understand you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    we continued this conversation while we explored each other's bodies. generally i wasn't one for talking. but talking during sex. now that was completely foreign to me. telling me his sister killed herself just as i reached orgasm is not something i ever want to repeat. when i rolled away from him and told him i didn't think it was fair to tell me that piece of news right then, he shrugged and said he didn't think it was fair of me to be so demanding of people i supposedly love and give nothing in return. he said that if i was going to stop talking to him and offer nothing, then tell him so he could leave now and avoid all the angst.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Damn it what was this. Why didn't I just react. I didn't dare afraid that the wrong word would cross my lips. I just lay there perfectly still not able to speak, again.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    but arlo was not going to leave me with my own thoughts. he continued to stroke me and lay little butterfly kisses along my body.

    'so tell me anna. do you want me to stay?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    That is not a yes or no question Arlo. How can I answer that now. I don't really know if I feel comfortable with the assumption you just made. All I know is that I want you to stay. So yes on that last part, for the rest I don't know for certain what you ask of me.

    God I was rambling, what had I just said? Not too much I hoped.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    arlo propped himself up on his elbow, his head resting on his hand.

    'sure it's a yes or no question. but what i want from you anna, is honesty. i don't want to wake up next to you one morning and come to the realisation that we've wasted our time. i could forgive you almost anything but if you're not honest with me and yourself, well then i may as well thank you for the great sex and walk out the door now. i can't go through another relationship based on deception. i did that with sascha.'

    with that little speech out of the way, arlo excused himself and disappeared into the bathroom.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I didn't knew what to make of him. This hadn't worked out as I had expacted. Why did this guy get to me, I didn't even know him a few hours ago. Some drinks and a nice smile later and I am this weak. And who was Sascha? Some ex-lover who gave him a hard time.
    Does Davey think of me that way? Was our relationship based on deception by me? Damn it this is not what I need right now.

    I got out of bed and walked on to the balcony. Maybe it was better if Arlo left, I can't handle his brainpicking right now.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i didn't even hear him approach,but his arms around me felt real good. this was going to be challenge for me, that's for sure. and he wasn't even afraid of walking around with no clothes on. if that had've been davey, he would have at least wrapped a robe around himself. turning around and kissing his chest, i stated the obvious.

    'you know you're naked, right?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yeah I know. Why, does it make you shy Anna.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'hardly. it's just that....'

    i had to stop there. i didn't want to mention davey.


    '..... well it's kinda cold out here, that's all.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well we will get to see just how cold it is then. He smiled and sat down next to me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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