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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna pulled away from gerard. and reached for her kimono. she wrapped it around her body and looked gerard with some confusion and a little anger in her eyes.

    'no. no. this is my home. i'm not gonna let him drive me away. my whole life is here.'

    she started to pace and gerard thought it prudent to let the matter drop.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Do you want me to see if I can make an apointment with the hairdresser for today?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'what i need is to see dr mcintyre. do me a favour gerard, tell beth and my sister that i'm okay. but i want to be left alone for now.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    with the strength of a right and a crossover tune
    the living spirit of power is here in the room
    a moment from yesterday returns
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    and, damn, how it burns.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    'what i need is to see dr mcintyre. do me a favour gerard, tell beth and my sister that i'm okay. but i want to be left alone for now.'


    OK I will, but I don't want to leave you. If it is what you want then we will go. Make me a promise though, I want you to call me tonight.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna looked gerard dead in the eye.

    ' you know me better than that. i don't promise. but if i'm not asleep and i feel like talking then i will call you. how's that?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    You don't have to talk to me I just want to hear you and that's it, no big story needed. Just don't be a stranger.

    He kissed me and walked into the next room.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i heard the three of them talking but not really what they were saying. i heard beth raise her voice and freya cut her off. i stood in my doorway while gerard and beth left. as she walked back across the room, freya looked up and saw me. she smiled but didn't approach. i silently thank her for that. i wanted a drink so bad i could taste it. i wanted to see arlo.
    going back into my room i pulled on a pair of jeans and a hoodie. i grabbed my sneakers and carried them into the living room. freya was sitting on the sofa and i sat down next to her, pulling on my shoes.

    ' i need to see arlo.'

    i stood up half expecting her to stop me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I thought I would go into the city and pick you up a matras. Would that be alright with you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no it's not alright with me freya. just leave it for now okay?'

    i started towards the door again.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well excuse me. You don't have to react with that tone. I just thought it would help you, but do it yourself then.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i stopped and took a deep breath. i turned to face freya.

    'i'm barely hanging on here freya. i know you only meant to help, but i need to do things my way, at my own pace. can you understand that?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh yes and your own way is the bitchy way, that is right I almost forgot.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i was not going to get into this with her. not now.

    'i don't know if i'll be back tonight.'

    i left, closing the door behind me. fuck her. she is not going to make me feel guilty when it was her husband that attacked me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I was so preoccupied that I didn't notice until late that I was walking in the wrong direction. Somewhere I had missed a turn and I had just kept on walking in the same direction. I stood at the docks when a truck made me wake from my drifting. I had no idea how long I had walked, but it must have been at least an hour.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i watched the boats plough along the water. i don't know what it was with humans and water, but i've always found it soothing. i shoved my hands deep into my pockets and wondered how long i could hold my breath. i could just throw myself in and sink to the bottom. the water is so murky that i wouldn't be able to see a thing. and that means no-one would be able to see me. nuh. i was too good a swimmer to try and drown myself. i didn't want to die, but i sure as hell wanted to hurt someone. better it be me than someone else. i closed my eyes and thought of arlo. a boat sounded its horn and made me jump. i turned away from the water and started back towards arlo's end of town.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    When I turned the corner that lead me into his street I hesitated. Did I really want to do this?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • upinsmokeupinsmoke Posts: 10
    But i had no choice about the way that i felt she found me
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i needed to see arlo. whether i wanted to tell him what had happened is something else altogether. i knew i'd tell him, i just didn't know how he'd take it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hell I didn't know how I'd take it when I tell him. Don't freak out Anna.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    when i got to arlo's building i sat on the stoop to compose myself. i rested my head in my hands, my elbows on my knees. i drifted off. coming back to reality when i heard a voice beside me.

    'it can't be all that bad.'

    i looked up to see dex sitting on the steps.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    How long have you been sitting there? I didn't notice you, sorry.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'long enough to see that something's going on with you anna. he's not home you know.'

    the way dex fidgetted was annoying to anna at the moment and she wished she was alone.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Any idea where he might be at?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna stood up not really wanting to wait for an answer. dex reached out and touched her arm and anna pulled away violently.

    'don't touch me.'

    she looked at dex a little unsure of what was going on.

    'i've got to go'

    she stood up and started down the steps.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I was afraid he would follow meand started to ran down the street. I heard some jelling behinde he, but I couldn't make out what was said.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i turned the corner and was gone. i should've known dex wouldn't follow me. he was in worst shape than i was. my insides started to ache as i tried to catch my breath.

    where was arlo? maybe dex was lying. maybe arlo was at his place. maybe i should go back and see. no i couldn't. what would i say to him. how could i tell him what had happened? i should be able to go to him, but i don't think i can


    i could feel my heart beating a mile a minute. i had to get myself under control. i started to walk again. away from arlo's and away from my place.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I didn't care where as long as it got me away from there and from myself. I wanted to walk off, leave everything behind and just disappear.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    it was just after 3 am when davey got home. he had barely closed the door behind him when he heard a knock. who the fuck could this be? davey thought he could ignore it. but it was obvious that whoever it was, was waiting for him to get home. he opened the door and found anna in the hallway. her arms were wrapped tight around her body and she was shivering.

    'oh anna. beth told me what happened. come in.'

    against his better judgement, davey reached out to anna. she stepped back so he couldn't touch her. he looked at her trying to gauge her mood. she seemed a little spacey to him. understandably.

    'anna.'

    she didn't move. davey took the initiative and moved to take her hand. she didn't resist this time. davey led her inside. seating her on the sofa.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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