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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Just wait in my house Hamish. Dex is dying. I have to go.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'you're such a drama queen davey. i'll come with you.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    No I can't handle your shit now. One baby is enough. Just wait.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    wandering around davey's place when he wasn't there, gave hamish the opportunity to look at his friend's work without worrying about saying the wrong thing or pulling the wrong expression. though davey always did good work. and now that davey wasn't there, hamish could look through his files. davey only allowed the perusal of work that was visible. not that there wasn't plenty of that. hamish was just wanted to see what davey hid away.
    he was looking through some proofsheets, when he heard the front door creak open.

    'hello? davey?'

    the voice was unfamiliar to hamish.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    The tone of the hallo suggested that something was going to happen and so Hamish played all. Hi, he answered keeping it short hoping to not give away that it wasn't him.
    A girl coming to Davey's apartment this was new. Davey certainly hadn’t told him about it.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Super VedderSuper Vedder Posts: 1,531
    Suddenly a badger came running out of a wall with a small gun and demanded all their money..................
    Black, the greatest without a doubt........
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    The tone of the hallo suggested that something was going to happen and so Hamish played all. Hi, he answered keeping it short hoping to not give away that it wasn't him.
    A girl coming to Davey's apartment this was new. Davey certainly hadn’t told him about it.

    'i just wanted to apologise for before. it wasn't really fair to put you in that posit....ion......'

    when cassandra saw that it wasn't davey she was addressing she stopped short. hamish naturally, being the dog that he was, thought that this woman standing in front of him, in nothing much more than a sheer piece of cloth covering her body, was the most interesting development in his friends life since davey had slept with tanya.

    'you're not davey.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    No, and I haven't been him for quite some time now. Maybe I could be of service though.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    cassandra sized hamish up easily.

    'i doubt you could be of any service to me.'

    with that she turned on her heel and started to leave.when she got to the door, she stopped and looked back at hamish.

    'you see davey, tell him cassandra apologises.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well why don't you wait here? He'll come back eventually.

    Hamish had a desperation in his voice that was hard to miss.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    cassandra smiled. she looked hamish up and down and decided that although he was good looking enough, his desperation was a total turnoff.

    'oh honey. you know what? maybe when you grow up more, we can talk. though i can't imagine you'd have anything interesting to say.'

    with that cassandra left davey's place. hamish stood glued to the spot. shot down by a woman who was certainly worth some amount of trouble. Now he knew why davey was in a rush to get whereever it was he was going. Of course cassandra was only half the reason for davey's mania, but to hamish she was the only reason to be concerned about.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey stood infront of Arlo's place pounding on the door for a minute and there still wasn't an answer. Now he was really worried.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • writersuwritersu Posts: 1,867
    How could I have let this go on for so long? Why did I stay when all along I kept thinking of that night so long ago.
    Baby, You Wouldn't Last a Minute on The Creek......


    Together we will float like angels.........

    In the moment that you left the room, the album started skipping, goodbye to beauty shared with the ones that you love.........
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'dex! dex! open up man.'

    davey could hear someone moving around inside. it seemed like an eternity before the door opened. and when it did, anna stood in front of him.

    'what are you doing here?'

    both said it at the same time. davey frowned and then shook his head trying to get it clear.

    'i was just talking to dex before. he didn't sound in the best shape. is he here anna?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
    and she said the end was near
    I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    No he's not. I was just waiting on Arlo here, he went to the store. He'll be back in 10 minutes or so. Why what is wrong?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'what'd you mean he's not here? i was just talking to him on the phone.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes you may very well have been, but are you telling me there are but two phones in the world, yours and this one?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey grabbed anna by the shoulders. it shocked her and sent a rush through her at the same time.

    'god you can be a damnable woman sometimes anna. so where the fuck does he live then?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    i shoved his hands of me, and told him to keep his hands off me. How the hell should I know where the guy lives. You ask Arlo he should know.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey backed off a little.

    'i'm sorry. i shouldn't have grabbed you like that.'

    he sighed and rested his hands on his hips.

    'dex called me and he sounded like he was high. i mean really high. it just gave me a bad feeling and i thought maybe he..... i don't know..... he couldn't even tell me if isabelle was with him.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey just sounded really weird not in the normal stoned way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i don't know what to tell you davey. i don't know where dex lives. just come in and wait for arlo. he won't be too much longer i imagine.'

    anna stood aside to allow davey entry into arlo's place. he hesitated.

    'i'm not gonna bite you.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    No I reckon you won't, but I am afraid it might be too late.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'there's nothing you can do until arlo gets back.'

    the phone rang. anna looked into the apartment and then back at davey.

    'i got to take this. come in if you want.'

    anna left davey standing and went to answer the phone. when davey heard her speak curiosity go the better of him.

    'oh thank goodness. you know davey's here looking for him. said he was talking to him earlier. he was quite concerned...yeah yeah i'll tell him..okay i'll see you then.'

    when anna hung the phone up she turned and found davey standing right behind her.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • What happened? He is alright, isn't he?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'dex is fine. well as fine as he ever is. you're too much of an old woman sometimes davey.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • No he was really weird. Should I have ignored that feeling?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    not wanting to get into any kind of debate with davey, anna walked away. for the second time he grabbed her.

    'don't walk away from me anna. i wasn't imagining the situation dex was in.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Well he's alright, so you can let go of my arm.

    He is just been arrested, that is all.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
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