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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    OK mate check ya later.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey hung the phone up and went back over to the bench. he picked up the photo of anna and placed it back in the drawer.
    without so much as a slight hesitation, he grabbed his keys and his jacket and walked out the door.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    He knocked on the door of his neighbour and stood there tapping with his feet impatience.

    Hey Mich! I need to ask you a favour mate. Can I barrow your car yet again?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey lifted his hand again to rap on the door. it opened before he made contact and in front of him stood a woman he had never seen before. he caught his breath. she was his height and looked him straight in the eye. her eyes appeared to be as black as her hair. she smiled and asked if there was something she could help him with. every smart arse quip in his head vanished. he hesitated and she laughed. the dress she was wearing was so thin davey could see through to her skin. she was naked beneath it and the sight of her body stirred a carnal desire within him he'd not felt since anna.

    'is mich around?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Lets see Mich? Mmmh, yes I do believe he is. Do you want me to call him for you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well. only if he's not tied up with something.'

    davey managed a small smile.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I could untie him for you, no problem.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    when she smiled, davey couldn't help but laugh. she extended her hand.

    'i'm cassandra by the way.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I am Davey, I live next door.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    cassandra hadn't let go of davey's hand. and he wasn't in any hurry to let go of hers.

    'you want to come in, davey from next door?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I would love to come in.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    walking into mich's place was like walking to into another world. where davey's place was flooded with light, mich had hung heavy drapes over all the windows to block out any light. bookcases lined the walls, yet still books spilled out into piles on the floor. the space was lit by candlelight. as davey followed cassandra deeper into....what he didn't know. he couldn't see the smile on her face, but it was there. it was there because cassandra knew, as she always did, that any guy walking behind her would be watching her arse. some people would call her a tease. but they'd be wrong. cassandra always went through with what it was she started.
    cassandra stopped and turned to face davey.

    'he might be sleeping. he gets tired easily sometimes.'

    davey stayed where he was as he watched cassandra approach the bed mich was lying on. she climbed onto it from the end and crawled towards mich. the view davey got turned him on more than he was prepared to admit. this woman that he didn't know was putting on a show for him and she was doing it with her lover right there. though admittedly he might be asleep. still davey couldn't help what he was feeling.
    davey couldn't take his eyes off her as she walked back towards him. she rested her hand lightly on his chest.

    'he's sleeping. is there perhaps something i might be able to do for you?'

    without really waiting for an answer or even needing one, cassandra kissed davey on the lips. then she left him where he stood brushing her hand across his stomach, daring him to follow.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey held on to her finger lightly following her back to the bad where Mich supposedly was asleep.

    Well do you want to come in? She asked.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    she sat on the edge of the bed. davey wasn't sure what was going on. cassandra closed her eyes and leaning her head back, traced her fingers down her throat and down her body until they disappeared between her legs. she sighed then opened her eyes and looked at davey. she smiled.

    'he's not gonna wake up.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Sure he is Davey that is the point. Why? Do you think I can't handle the two of you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey said nothing.

    'no one's forcing you to stay davey. if you want to leave then leave.'

    davey didn't move.she doubted he would. and he didn't disappoint her. cassandra reached out and took his hand in hers. pulling him closer she kissed his belly.

    'take your shirt off.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey did and at that moment Mich rolled over. Davey hesitated afraid that he might wake up.

    Well come on Davey, I want to feel your naked body.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    cassandra stood up and pressing herself again davey, rested her hands on his lower back. as she kissed his lips, she felt his hands on her bare arse.

    'you stay davey, we go all the way. if you don't think you can do that for whatever reason, you should leave now.'

    davey said nothing but responded by sliding his hand between cassandra's legs. she gasped. then smiled, shifting her leg so it wrapped around his thigh.

    'good boy.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • StoneG82StoneG82 Posts: 806
    is this forum supposed to display poetry or porn?

    :D
    "What’s Orphans? I don’t know. Orphans is a dead end kid driving a coffin with big tires across the Ohio River wearing welding goggles and a wife beater with a lit firecracker in his ear." - Tom Waits
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    can't it do both? :D
    and when does sex become porn?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    StoneG82 wrote:
    is this forum supposed to display poetry or porn?

    :D

    if you like i could write some porn for you. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    cassandra stood up and pressing herself again davey, rested her hands on his lower back. as she kissed his lips, she felt his hands on her bare arse.

    'you stay davey, we go all the way. if you don't think you can do that for whatever reason, you should leave now.'

    davey said nothing but responded by sliding his hand between cassandra's legs. she gasped. then smiled, shifting her leg so it wrapped around his thigh.

    'good boy.'


    Davey kneeled down while he push her back onto the bed.

    Come on girl open up for me.

    He let his hands slide down from her ankles to her thighs spreading her legs gently so he could see what he longed for. He gave little bites in her thigh bringing her a slit pain and prolonging the moment. He lay his hand between her breasts and softly caressing her skin he moved his hand down to her bellybutton and further down to her vagina. With his fingers he opened her reviling her clit and as he went with his tongue towards the spot that she was craving for him to go she closed her legs locking his head between her thighs. He sucked her clit in his mouth circling round it with his tongue.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    she grabbed his hair. arching her back she urged him on. still davey couldn't stop thinking that mich was going to wake up any minute. he stopped and looked up at cassandra. she loooked at him, a frown on her face.

    'i can't do it here cassandra.'

    he stood up and picked her up off the bed. carrying her into the other room he unceremoniously dumped her on the sofa. she wasn't happy with this change of venue and moved away from him trying to be decorous, though what she was wearing left nothing to anyone's imagination.

    'what is that? you can't control what goes on anymore, so you quit?'

    cassandra said nothing. davey walked back to the bedroom and came out pulling his tshirt on. he didn't look at cassandra.

    'call me when you're really ready to play cassandra.'

    with that davey disappeared out the front door.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Went he lost the control in there to his penis he forgot about what he wanted to do. And he still didn't have the car that he came to borrow. Now he had to walk to the subway and that would take a whole lot longer. He didn't know if it made sense going to check on Dex. Lord knows it wasn't his responcability. He just could shack the feeling something terable was going to happen, and now he had lost all that precious time. Dex was so weird on the phone, he just had to go down there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Went he lost the control in there to his penis he forgot about what he wanted to do. And he still didn't have the car that he came to borrow. Now he had to walk to the subway and that would take a whole lot longer. He didn't know if it made sense going to check on Dex. Lord knows it wasn't his responsibility. He just could shack the feeling something terrible was going to happen, and now he had lost all that precious time. Dex was so weird on the phone, he just had to go down there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    when he stepped out onto the street, davey ran smack bang into hamish. hamish smiled. davey did not.

    'howdy stranger. watcha doing in such a hurry?'

    davey didn't really want to deal with hamish right now.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Are you with your brothers car by any chance?
    If not I have to go.
    You wait inside, you know where the key is.
    Well are you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'are i what?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    With your brothers car. Jeez Hamish I don't have time for this game.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i haven't seen johnny lately. what's up with you anyway?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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