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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I feel sure, other than that I don't care.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna couldn't remember the last time she was at davey's. as soon as they were through the door, anna had her dress off. she stood there looking at davey. he smiled trying to ignore the bandages on her left wrist.

    'my god anna, you are still beautiful to me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I gave him my sexy temptress posed look and said; Just to you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey ignored the comment. he moved to her and kneeling, he kissd her belly. he felt anna's hand in his hair. he knew what she wanted him to do. she was impatient like that. he'd make her wait just a little longer. he stood up again and traced her lips with his thumb. she bit it. unbuttoning davey's shirt, anna bit his nipple. he whinced but took the pain. he closed his eyes and his head fell back as anna drew her tongue down his body. then she stopped. davey opened his eyes and looked down at her. taking her hand, davey pulled her to her feet and lead her to his bedroom.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    He throw her on the bed and stood there just watching her lay there covered in nothing else than her sweet smell while he took off the rest of his clothes.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    all his instincts that told him this was not a good idea disappeared from his mind when he felt anna's legs wrapped around his hips. her heel resting on his arse like it belonged there. as he kissed her neck and shoulders, anna ran her nails up his back. he arched his back away, but there was nowhere to go. he was in it now and neither of them was gonna stoop this. not now.
    he brushed the hair from her forehead and looked into her eyes. he told her he loved her. she smiled like she was a cat that had swallowed a canary. she didn't care if he meant it or whether it just came out.

    'then show me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I'll hold.

    Freya had been on the telephone for over twenty minutes. Even though she had quit enough of waiting she wanted to see this through.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya stared at the hideous wallpaper. she thought back to when she had lost her virginity in a motel room just like this. to vincent of course. she thought he was so fine back then. and he wanted her, not anna. or so she thought back then. now she figured her sister had blown him off, so freya was the consolation prize. the story of her life.
    there was a banging at the door and freya screamed. she dropped the phone and got on her feet.

    'who is it?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hallo miss It's the cleaning Lady. Is this a bad time for you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    well that would depend now, wouldn't it/

    a cleaning lady. who would have thunk it. freya opened the door.

    'no it's fine. come in.'

    freya went and picked up the phone. all she heard was the dial tone. she put it back on the hook, picked up her handbag and left the room. she didn't know where to go. she didn't want to talk to anna right now and have to deal with her smugness. freya started towards the airport road. she'd seen a few bars she could drown her sorrows in.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    This was starting to look like a absolute desaster. Off course she had the car which she could sell. It was in her name only for taxdeductible reasons, but she was ever so greatful for it now. Selling the car however would be her last resort. It was more save to move around this way and if needed she could sleep in it.
    With no clue what so ever she just drove off.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    it took anna three hours to get dressed. usually it took her a minute. thinking of davey she smiled and ran her hand over her belly. she turned her back to the mirror and looked at her arse. not bad. she had decided on a red dress and flat sandles. she wanted to feel like a girly girl tonight. plus she wanted to show davey exactly what it was he was missing out on. oh yeah she could be a bitch at times. but tonight was her night, so she didn't much care what anyone thought. she left her hair to tumble down her back.anna pulled on a cardigan to cover her arms and grabbed her keys.
    it was a warm night so the walk to gerards would be pleasant. he had offered to pick her up but she declined.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    On the way over there I felt exited. This would be a great happening everyone had worked really hard to make this a success. I hadn't felt this good in a long time. I'm fairly sure the sex had something to do with that. I looked into a window to make sure every think looked as it should one last time before I walked into the street.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    half way to gerard's, i started to get anxious. it felt like someone was following me. i tried to dismiss it as just paranoia, but i don't imagine things like this. quickening my pace just a little didn't much help. i had walked these streets countless times. i knew the shadows, i knew how long it would take between streets and how long it would take to get to gerards. i spotted a bar. it was only three blocks to gerards.i need to calm my nerves before i face all those people.

    just one drink won't hurt

    it was an hour later and i was still in the bar. time to make a move. when i got back onto the street it was raining softly. looking up into the night sky, the rain fall on my face. it felt nice. i was hoping it would sober me up a little. not that i was drunk. i just felt..... nice and mellow.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    When I got there I looked more like a cat that nearly drowned than the hot fox I was aiming for. I tried to fix as much as I could before entering.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    the only advantage about getting wet was that my hair got a kink in it that i liked. usually my hair was dead straight. a few people said hello to me as i climbed the stairs, but i didn't really know them. they looked familiar.maybe. everyone looks familiar after a few drinks.
    i found gerard in a corner talking with people i knew i didn't know. i was just about to approach him when i heard a shriek.

    'ANNA !!!!'

    i turned and saw this blonde dervish coming straight at me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Beth!? What are you doing here? What a great surprise. When did you get back? I'm so happy to see you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i got back like an hour ago. i was gonna crash with gerard but then he told me he... i mean you had a showing and well voila here i am."

    beth couldn't contain herself. she wrapped her arms around anna, squeezing her tight. she kissed anna's cheek. then she held her friend at arm's length and smiled.

    ' so where's the boy?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I must have looked kinda silly, because at first I didn't have a clue what she meant. Than it occurred to me she was talking about my pregnancy.
    I didn't know what to say and I was saved when Gérard came over and asked ; What can I get you to drink Anna. The star of the show can't be seen without a glass of Champaign.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    I must have looked kinda silly, because at first I didn't have a clue what she meant. Than it occurred to me she was talking about my pregnancy.
    I didn't know what to say and I was saved when Gérard came over and asked ; What can I get you to drink Anna. The star of the show can't be seen without a glass of Champaign.

    no that can't be right. adalita was nearly two years ago. god i hadn't drunk that much. beth was talking about davey

    i looked at gerard.

    'i don't drink champagne you know that.'

    a wave of sadness came over me. it was the baby and it was davey and it was the sudden realisation that i didn't want to be here.

    'i need some air.'

    without waiting for any response from either gerard or beth, i started for the terrace doors. a hand reached out and stopped me. it was davey. i really really didn't need this right now. when i looked up he was standing in front of a large canvas.it was one i had done not long after losing the baby. when i looked at davey, just for minute i thought i saw something in his eyes.

    'please let me go davey.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey Anna wait up for me I'll come with you.
    Then we stood there the three of use.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    beth was the first one to speak.

    'hey davey how're you doing?'

    she still didn't know we'd broken up. but she did notice davey's hand, tight around my arm.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Now is not a good time Beth.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    the tone in davey's voice made beth hesitate. she looked at him and then she looked at me.

    'what is going on? and don't try and blow me off cause i'm not going anywhere'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Davey let go off me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i pulled my arm out of davey's grasp, i turned to beth.

    'there's so much you don't know beth.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    We walked on to the balcony that was empty due to the rain.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    beth crossed her arms defiantly across her chest.

    'davey and i aren't together anymore. we haven't been for nearly five months.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    OH my god! How did this happen?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well just after you left i kinda ended up in hospital again. davey just got tired of all the drama and left. can't blame him really. if i could i wouldn't even live with me.'

    i tried you make light of the situation, but i didn't much feel like smiling. beth looked at me. she was trying to work out exactly how much i left out. obviously a lot. i looked up to see hamish hovering near the open doors. shit when did he get here. i turned my back to him. but hamish being hamish he took that as an invitation to butt in. especially when he saw beth. i swore and beth looked up to see hamish coming towards us.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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