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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey Johnny, I was hoping you could give me a ride up state again. I'll even throw a pick nick in for you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    johnny looked at his brother. what was it with hamish and picnics?

    'so anna's coming home tomorrow then?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes she is.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'is there anything i should know about? i get some vibe off you two and i'm kinda wondering whether it's such a good idea'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What are you talking about. Oh wait a minute is this another sort of autistic character flaw of yours. Yeah that's right you people pick on on stuff like that. But I'm sorry Corkey your wrong.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    sometimes johnny felt like kicking his brother's arse. hamish said stuff without thinking and it usually hurt someone.

    'no dickhead. it's just all these years i know you've wanted to move in on anna but davey was there. now he's out of the picture, it seems a perfect opportunity for you to fill the void. i just don't want to be stepping on any toes.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Jesus Johnny mind your own bizz. Why don´t you go worry about yourself.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    johnny could feel himself getting agitated. he hated when people attacked him like this. and he especially hated it when it came from hamish. he turned his back on his brother. he heard hamish catch a laugh in his throat.

    'oh wait a minute. don't tell me that you have feelings for anna. she's way out of your league johnny boy. you've got to know that. right??'

    did he know that? johnny wasn't so sure. he knew what anna was like and he knew that they were friends. fuck hamish.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Think what you like Hamish, but I think I don´t want to give you a ride up state.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' you think? since when do you think johnny? just give me a ride.'

    when hamish stepped towards his brother, johnny backed away.

    'anna needs me to pick her up.'

    johnny had to smile at that comment. what anna needed was someone with a car. he doubted it had to be hamish. he had a car. hamish didn't. sucked in brother. it was johnny's turn to smile.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hamish my dear sweet brother, you can piss off. I´ll pick up Anna, and I don´t need you. if I want to feel miserable I can do that on my own. I certainly don´t need you to help me with that.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    sitting in the passenger seat of johnny's forty year old mustang, anna turned sideways so she could see his profile.

    'so tell me johnny. what was the fight about? that's got to be why you're here alone, right?'
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes that´s right.

    For some reason he didn´t say more than that. He just smiled mysteriously and started the car.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    pulling up in front of her building gave anna a felling of mild dread. or apprehension. she wasn't sure which. johnny touched her shoulder.

    'you okay?'
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Mmmh, I don´t know Johnny I´m afraid to go in. The place is probable the state I left it in. Would you come up. I don´t want to be alone in that depressing dump.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    standing just inside the front door, anna could see the expanse of her loft before her. she could see he shredded canvas leaning against the wall that hid the kitchen from view. she could see paint dried on the floorboards where she knew it hadn't been before. she could also see the painting she'd done of davey. she smiled at the thought of her lover.a nd then stopped herself when she remmbered he was no longer a part of her life. johnny dropping her bag on the floor brought her out of her reminiscing.

    'what a fuckin' mess anna'
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I was about to get offensive when I remembered myself. I saw his smile and realized he was only messing with me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'can you stay while i take a shower? i don't want to be alone.not just yet.'
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    this could be the day
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    If you make it a long one I´ll be back when you get out. Oh and do remember to leave the water running for a bit. It has been a long time since you used it.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no, don't leave. where are you going anyway?'

    what do you want from him anna. you've got to let go of people go. only you can do this.

    ' i'm sorry johnny. sure do what you have to do. it's not my place to make demands on you.'

    without waiting for johnny to reply, anna walked down the hall towards the bathroom. she sat on the edge of the bath looking at the dried blood. her blood. covering her face with her hands, anna cried.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Johnny stood behind me and saw the bathroom as I did. Anna, I was only going to get you some grossies, but now I think it´s better if you came with me. You could shower at my house. Hell stay over and in the morning we will clean this shit up. Yeah?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no i don't want to see hamish. i don't want to see anyone. i'll be okay. just do what you have to do.'

    she could see that johnny wasn't exactly convinced.

    'trust me johnny, i'm fine. really. just don't take too long.'

    anna turned on the water so johnny would have to make a move. the pipes hammered from lack of use. pulling her t shirt over her head did the trick. johnny left the bathroom.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    When I finished I found Johnny already back and cleaning my fridge. A fresh pot of coffee waiting to be pored.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' how can you believe anything that little psycho says freya? you know me. do you think that i'd cheat on you?'

    freya couldn't believe the gall of this man. of course she thought he'd cheat on her. she'd take anna's word over his on this. of all the things her sister could be accused of, vindictive was not one of them.
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    Saying nothing in reaction on his remark she just walked of into the next room.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    vincent followed freya and grabbed her by the arm. he swung her around to face him. she tried to pull away but he was much too strong for her.

    'don't you walk away from me freya. tell me you believe me'
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    No I do not believe you. And I´ll tell you why, I know it´s true Vincent, I just know.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    the look that came over her husband's face was one not even freya had seen before.

    'so it's true then. fuck you vincent. did you have a go at anna is that the reason she hates you so much.'
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    What are you talking about Freya, I would fuck your sister even if I got paid to do so.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya looked at vincent trying to gauge his mood or whatever. she watched as his eyes flickered.

    'you're a liar vincent. i don't want to be anywhere near you.'

    with that freya walked past vincent and out the front door. he didn't follow her. she stood on the path and tried to get her head together. all these years she had known. but it took anna to say it in anger to get through to her. looking back at the house, she saw vincent in the window. she put her head down and started in the direction of... she didn't know. anywhere but here?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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