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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish was learning fast. he wouldn't say anything to antagonise beth. she knew too much about him. he smiled.

    'just leave beth. please just go.'

    just then tanya appeared in the doorway.

    'not now tanya.'

    tanya didn't move. she stared at beth almost daring her to say something. she must have overheard the conversation. how could she not?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Is something wrong sweetie?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish loooked at tanya. he could see this situation blowing right up in his face. tanya had no idea what she was in the middle of. hamish walked to tanya and ushered her out of the kitchen.

    'no. it's nothing. just a difference of opinion between friends. beth was just leaving. weren't you beth?'

    hamish looked back at beth hoping she'd take the hint.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Sure I'll leave and let you bath in your own ignorance. Or is it better explained as selfishness?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'who i choose to sleep with is not your business beth.'

    beth was almost through the door when she heard tanya say something. it was almost a whisper. but one of those whispers where the person says it loud enough for the other to hear but quiet enough to deny having said anything of consequence at all.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What was that sweetheart?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    with beth in her face, tanya suddenly felt less valorous. she didn't know beth and so didn't know what she was capable of. but still she wasn't one to back down from any challenge. she looked beth right in the eye.

    'i called you a bitch.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well you should know what that is. So you might be right. I'll take your expert opinion on that, if there is one woman who has personal knowledge on being a bitch it is you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    tanya smiled.

    'i'm missing something here, i know i am. why am i such a threat to you?

    hamish sighed. he almost had beth out the door and now he had a situation that was fast getting beyond his control.

    'am i invading some sort of sacred turf here. is it that have a thing for hamish and can't imagine him wanting to be with anyone else? tell me. what?

    tanya defiantly folded her arms across her chest.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Whatever. Maybe Hamish wants to paint the picture for you. Goodbye!
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as soon as beth was over the threshold, tanya slammed the door behind her. she turned to hamish, who was looking more than a little repentant.

    'look hamish i don't want to know what that was all about. it probably really has nothing to do with me.'

    the look that came over his face told tanya that she was wrong.

    'do you want to tell me what's going on? it was a great night of sex but anything further than that i wasn't looking for. if i don't need to know. don't tell me.'

    with this girl standing in front of him wearing nothing but his t-shirt, hamish found it a little difficult be straight with her for fear of scaring her off. when she leant forward and kissed him, his decision was made for him. when tanya walked him backwards to the sofa and sat astride his lap, all thoughts of beth disappeared from his head.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Goodmorning Freya. Did you get any sleep tonight?

    I heard Arlo talk to Freya with a tone that made it seem he had known her his whole life. He had the ability to win someone over in a heart beat with his calm nature and his uncomplicated way of speaking. I could tell that Freya liked him.
    It didn't surprises me the last few days were a great mystery, why should this be any different. As far as I know she never aproved of any of my lovers, not even Davey, not really at least. Hell is everything else was shaking and shifting into new directions why not this too?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the minute i walked into the kitchen they both stopped talking and looked towards me.

    'hey don't let my presence stop you two bonding.'

    i walked to arlo. he placed his hand on my hip as i reached up to kissed him.

    'i don't want to sound like some sort of shrew but it would be appreciated if i had some alone time today. i need to do some work and there's been too many distractions around me lately.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    OK Anna, but I was hoping to speak to you in private today. Do you think that might be possible? I know you need your time alone and I don't want to be the imposing house guest, but it is really important for me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'we can talk later freya. i really need this time for myself.'

    the look on her face told me freya wasn't too thrilled with my rebuttal but too bad. it was enough that she was living i my space. i felt arlo squeeze my hand. when i looked at him he raised his eyebrows. i knew what the look was for but i wasn't going to change my mind.

    'i'm going to take a shower. you can join me if you want arlo.'

    with that i walked out of the room so no one would try and make any more demands on me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Uemh Anna? Can I still sleep here tonight?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    arlo asks me this while running a soapy hand down my back. what did he expect my reply to be, i wonder? i turn to face him, tracing my fingers over the dragon tattoo on his hip.

    'will just sleeping be involved? or do i have something more to look forward to? '
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Maybe I could give you a massage after you talk to your sister this evening.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'don't push me arlo. i said i'd talk to her later.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Later is such a vague concept he said while pulling my head back and kissing my neck.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»