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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    then he was gone. i wasn't sure what was going on between johnny and me. if anything at all. all i knew was it had been a while since i had slept with man. maybe now was the time. maybe, just maybe johnny could be that man. turning off the water and stepping dripping wet out of the shower, i wrapped myself in a kimono( it had been a present from davey) and went looking for johnny.
    i found him sitting on the floor crosslegged eating chow mein noodles and trying not to slurp too much. i sat down beside him as he handed me some
    steamed chinese vegetables. when i looked up at the television, i saw that he'd been watching reruns of buffy the vampire slayer. i used to love watching that show. it was a clever show. the writing was smart and who didn't want to be a vampire. after i started going out with davey, i'd even sucked him into the last couple of seasons. the episode johnny was watching was one where the halloween costumes the characters had hired, turned them into whatever they were dressed up as. so, willow dressed as a ghost became a ghost cause she always thought she was invisible and buffy became a helpless lady because her costume was that of an 18th century refined lady. she was in love with an 18th century irish vampire. she thought he liked that kind of girl. when it came time for butt kicking, it did not help you if the heroine was a squealy sheila incapable of fighting.
    without asking, johnny poured me some wine and handed me the glass.

    'thank you. so who did you say was on the phone?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh someone very demanding and arrogant, do you know someone like that?
    I think his name was Gérard, if I remember correctly. A bit of a weird one if you ask me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i know a lot of demanding people johnny. i just choose to ignore most of them. gerard's kinda my agent. he gets my stuff out when i need him to. but you're right, sometimes he can be a little weird.'

    i tilted my near empty glass towards johnny and smiled.

    'fill me up.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well he seemed very eager to talk to you. He was raving on and on about some American tourist that wanted you. That is the work you do. Johnny spilled more than a drop of red wine on my carpet, but didn't even notice as he was cut up in making ridiculing of Gérard.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'don't do that johnny. it's not fair to gerard. i probably wouldn't eat if he didn't push my work.'

    i placed my glass on the coffee table, turned to johnny and crossed my legs. i took the bottle from him and placed it next to my glass.

    'what are we doing here? you and me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I thought we were eating chinese food.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'come on johnny, you know it's more than that. that's why i can't seem to get rid of you. no matter how many times i tell you to go home, you never do.
    tell me what you want from me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    He smiled and said ten bucks for starters, then he walked into the kicken telling me over his shoulder that he was gonna get more wine.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    oh yeah i loved mind games.
    i stod up and followed him over to the kitchen. i leant back against the bench. johnny tried to ignore me.

    'we need to talk about this you know. no more dancing.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No Anna don't you get a hint. We should not talk about this, not if we want to be friends.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    me get a hint. that'd be the day. i think that just about now, johnny was wishing that maybe he should have left when he was asked. now of course, from here i was standing, it was too late.
    johnny's back was still to me. obvously what he was looking for in the fridge didn't want to be found. i took the two steps between us and laid my hands on his back. he stood up straighter but didn't turn around. i kissed his back though his shirt and waited.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Johnny lower away by kneeling in front of the fridge. He didn't say anything. I couldn't help myself, even if I wanted to.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    running my fingers through his hair, i grabbed it in my fist and pulled his head around so i could see his face. i leant down and kissed him on the lips.

    'just do what you feel johnny without the thinking.'

    then i let go of his hair and walked out of the room.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    He didn't follow straight awy, but he did. I was hoping for him to kiss me back.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hw momentarily stood in the doorway, as if weighing up the consequences of his next move. i looked him.

    'what are you waiting for?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • then i took a piss on his face
    im awesome
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    hw momentarily stood in the doorway, as if weighing up the consequences of his next move. i looked him.

    'what are you waiting for?'


    He just stood there for a second composing himself for what he was about to say. Anna I've known you for a long time and I like you very much, maybe secretly even in that way. However it is not going to happen, not today and if you're wise not any day soon.
    You asked me to stay and I did. You asked me to go and I did not. I didn't want it to have this meaning, I just didn't want to leave you alone. Not after what happend with your sister, not today.
    And besides that there is something you should probable know, now is as good as any time I guess.

    For some reason he stopped talking and looked at me to see if I was still paying attention.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    oh yeah this was going according to plan. i could only imagine one thing he could tell me that would stop me in my tracks.

    i laughed.

    'shit johnny you tell me you're gay and i'm going celibate.'

    the look on his face told me that i had hit the nail on the head.

    'you have got to be kidding me. that can't be it. johnny tell me you're not gay. what am i? blind'

    i stopped talking and gave johnny a chance to respond.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ueh,.... well kinda yeah, I am. Bi-sexual to be precise. And I'm sort of in a relationship right now so. Don't get me wrong you're just peachy, but like I said I'm seeing someone right now. He throw a shy smile my way that wasn't quit convincing, I could see he wasn't totally at ease. Even though he probable waited all day to tell me this.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    fuck fuck fuckity fuck

    'so this person you're sorta in a relationship with. is it a guy or a girl then?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say