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Well, she had a bit of an inner conflict I guess.
Could you be a little less vague Hamish, what the fuck are you telling me?
Alright, alright ease up friend. Anna had auto-mutilated and was drunk the night that made her end up there. I think it was the night you saw her last. Anyway, Anna had cut open herself and she was covered in paint. She was sitting against a wall unconscious when Freya found her. They brought her away to the clinic and that is where she is now.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
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this was not news to davey. he had seen anna in this situation before. and in his mind, and anna's as it turns out, they had got through it. he couldn't believe that freya had freaked out enough for her sister to commit her. hamish noted with frustration that he didn't seem to be getting through to his friend.
'you can't honestly think that anna was okay. they diagnosed her as bi- polar. bi-polar II they call it. think about it davey. the not sleeping, the days she wouldn't eat.the fact that sometimes even if you thought about touching her, she'd go off and then she'd be the opposite. that is not normal. there's this thing called hypomania where she seems off kilter but doesn't go right off her tree. that's what the drinking was about. it took a while but she's doing alright now'
hamish hesitated before he went on.
'anna doesn't want to see you davey. not even to say hello. she said she doesn't blame you for what happened because you thought you were doing the right thing. she said it would be too difficult for her if you were around.'hear my name
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She said that? Hamish this is not a thing I would what you joking about. I can't handle your weird shit right now. What did she say?« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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hamish always thought that davey figured anna couldn't do anything without him. he ws wrong opf course. anna did a lot of things that davey never knew about.
'she just told me that it was time. that neither of you could go on with your lives knowing that the other would always be there. she needs you to acknowledge that perhaps you weren't the best person to try and help her. you know after what happened with tanya i was surprised that she forgave you.that really knocked her about considering your timing'hear my name
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My timing? What about it Hamish?
It happened it had nothing to do with timing. If it did then it was the logical time for it to happen. I was feeling goddamn miserable and Anna was shutting me out as usual. That period was equally heavy for me. She wasn't there for me, Hamish! I wasn't able to help her if it was going to be a one way street. I have feelings to you know, Anna is not the only one who suffered. Fuck I wasn't the only one who needed forgiving.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
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'well boo fuckin' hoo davey. anna had just lost her child. and you're saying that because she pushed you away, you could go and screw some other girl. what is wrong with you? that's the lamest excuse i've ever heard. anna wasn't exactly in her right mind and you think that's an a perect opportunity to cheat on her. she needed you and you weren't there. it doesn't matter that she "pushed you away", you should have been there man, you should've been there.'hear my name
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I needed her and she wasn't there. It happend.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
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'and tanya was. yeah i get it davey'
feeling a slight disgust towards his friend, hamish decided it was time for him to take his leave. he looked at his watch.
'i've got to be somewhere. we'll talk later.'
with that hamish left davey's studio.hear my name
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Where do you think your going? Who the hell are you to judge me?
It wasn't about you. It was between me and Anna, you know nothing about it. Ever lost a child Hamish?« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
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slowly turning to face davey, there was no joy on hamish's face.
'yes davey i have. and i'm not judging you you're doing that yourself'
before davey could respond, hamish left, closing the door behind him. davey for his part, was riveted to the floor in shock. fuck. people and their secrets.hear my name
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How was I supposed to know, the man couldn't keep a girl around long enough to kiss him, let along get pregnant. Fuck him. I had judged myself long ago, I'm not in the mood to do it again. Who is he that he thinks he can judge me, that was what you were doing Hamish.
Even though Davey had no intention of thinking about what Hamish said, he couldn't forget.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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anna was sitting in david's office, biting her thumbnail as usual. she looked up when he spoke.
'so, how do you feel about going home tomorrow?'hear my name
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Good, I guess.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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' that's it?'hear my name
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Well yeah I don't know it's weird. I've been saying nothing else besides I want to go since I got here, and now I don't know.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
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' if i said you'd been my most difficult client anna , i'd be lying. but that doesn't mean it hasn't been interesting to say the least. i know what you're feeling cause i've been where you are now. but i think these past few weeks have shown how much you are willing to take control of, i mean real control not that illusory control you thought you had. and how much of it you're willing to let go of, to ask for help. the fact that you're still sitting here when you could have left ten days ago, can attest to that. i'm not going to tell you the hard part's over cause it's not. now you have to work out how to apply what you learnt in here, out there, in the real world. and don't take this personally anna, but i don't ever want to see you again.'
david smiled and closed anna's file.
'you've still got a session with dr. mcintyre this afternoon. and then you're almost home free. who's picking you up tomorrow?'hear my name
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I don't know yet. I made a call to a friend, but he doesn't have a car himself. I have to call him back to see if he could borrow a car. Otherwise I guess there isn't another option then to call my sister.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
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I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
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'you'd expect freya to drive you home after you basically accused her husband of adultery. i wonder if there's more to that story then you're telling anna.'hear my name
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Now you are just being curious. And curiosity killed the cat remember. Anyway she'll come if I ask her.« One man's glory is another man's hell.
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the mona lisa smile anna gave david, told him that there was no way she was going to elaborate. truth be told, anna hoped she wouldn't be seeing her sister in the foreseeable future. she'd call hamish again. she knew johnny wouldn't refuse his brother a ride. he was one of the good ones, despite the dismissive attitude hamish sometimes showed him.
when they were younger, anna did a lot of drinking with johnny.she was sure he was the keeper of many of her secrets. she was a talker when she drank and doubted she was silent when she was with him. in the beginning of her relationship with davey, it was to johnny that anna turned. hamish was having his own problems and didn't have the time nor the patience to deal with her. then johnny went away and no one heard from him for a couple of years. maybe she'd just call johnny instead.
anna stood up and started to leave.
'see you around david.'
david smiled and anna disappeared into the hall.hear my name
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