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  • bostonlou
    bostonlou Posts: 2,849
    I love when beth makes me a ham sandwich in the nude.
    Don't Believe Everything You Think
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    catefrances wrote:
    'well just after you left i kinda ended up in hospital again. davey just got tired of all the drama and left. can't blame him really. if i could i wouldn't even live with me.'

    i tried you make light of the situation, but i didn't much feel like smiling. beth looked at me. she was trying to work out exactly how much i left out. obviously a lot. i looked up to see hamish hovering near the open doors. shit when did he get here. i turned my back to him. but hamish being hamish he took that as an invitation to butt in. especially when he saw beth. i swore and beth looked up to see hamish coming towards us.


    Hallo Hamish. I didn't know you were here. Is it ok if I come and talk to you later because we have some girl stuff to catch up on. You know how it is.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish looked at me and rolled his eyes. the expression said it all. yet again it was all about anna. fuck him. beth turned back to me.

    'i don't believe you. davey just got up and walked out? you sure there wasn't anything else to it? he didn't cheat on you again did he?'

    i wondered what that would have to do with anything.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    We just didn't connect in the same way as we did before the miscarriage.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • potluck
    potluck Posts: 170
    This time i think ill use a hanger or maybe just do a few bellyflops.
    06/24/1998 SD
    10/12/2000 KS
    06/13/2003 IA
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    06/21/2003 WI
    10/05/2004 MO
    10/08/2004 FL
    09/08/2005 MB
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    08/05/2007 Lolla
    06/14/2008 B'roo

    Kill Fascists.... or at least make them realize what they are.
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'so what? it took him eighteen months to work it out. you know i love davey but what he did with that waitress or whatever the hell she was, i just thought that was just low.'

    i wished beth would stop talking. the last thing i wanted to do was think about what happened back then. i'm trying to get past davey. so i guess sleeping with him last night wasn't a good move on my part. but it did feel good having another body so close. i smiled at the thought. beth looked at me.

    'what are you smiling at?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • potluck
    potluck Posts: 170
    Just thinking of shoe strings and chicken wire. Or the ocean where little charlie jones drowned. You know, morbid things like that; those are the things that make me smile. But lately thinks are different, things have changed. Now when i see those morbid things, youre there. Wait, its good though, i just dont know how to handle it really. What were you gonna say?
    06/24/1998 SD
    10/12/2000 KS
    06/13/2003 IA
    06/15/2003 ND
    06/16/2003 Mn
    06/21/2003 WI
    10/05/2004 MO
    10/08/2004 FL
    09/08/2005 MB
    09/09/2005 ON
    05/17/2006 IL
    05/19/2006 MI
    07/02/2006 CO
    08/05/2007 Lolla
    06/14/2008 B'roo

    Kill Fascists.... or at least make them realize what they are.
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    catefrances wrote:
    'so what? it took him eighteen months to work it out. you know i love davey but what he did with that waitress or whatever the hell she was, i just thought that was just low.'

    i wished beth would stop talking. the last thing i wanted to do was think about what happened back then. i'm trying to get past davey. so i guess sleeping with him last night wasn't a good move on my part. but it did feel good having another body so close. i smiled at the thought. beth looked at me.

    'what are you smiling at?'


    Oh, just that you and Davey might not be able to let go.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    beth looked at me like i'd grown an extra head.
    i moved in close to her.

    'last night. i slept with davey.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You did? Then why did I just witness that little play?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'cause it was a one off thing and it didn't mean anything.'


    there, i hoped that sounded convincing enough for her.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yeah right.
    So you don't want to talk about it now or don't you want to talk about it?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'there's nothing to talk about beth.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Sell that story to someone lees naive. Let's go back inside and see how well you sell in there. She smiled as she gestured to the door.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as we got to the doors, vincent appeared. he walked towards us forcing us to step back. his eyes were firmly on me. beth looked at him.

    'excuse me. do you mind?'

    he shot her such a look that it made her uneasy.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Where the hell is my wife? You bitch tell me right now.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i don't know where she is. now get the fuck out of my way.'

    as i tried to push past him, vincent grabbed my left wrist and squeezed it til my arm twisted.

    'you're hurting me vincent.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You reckon I care?
    Just tell me, now.


    He had clearly been drinking more than was good for him. Perhaps he had needed to drink in the curidge to act like a total asshole infront of all these people. People around us stopped their conversations and stared at the scene. Vincent thundering on about Freya and shanking me between his hands. I started thinking I might not be able to get myself out this time.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i was scared so i guess it must have been the adrenalin that made me do what i did.

    ' i don't know where freya is and even if i did you would be the last person i'd tell.'

    he released his grip on one of my arms for whatever reason. it didn't matter. out of the corner of my eye i saw davey,gerard and someone else who looked vaguely familiar to me coming towards us. i balled my hand and hit vincent square in the ear. it hurt him cause he let me go. i hit him in the chest.

    'you piece of shit you come near me again and i'll kill you. you hear me?'

    pushing past people to escape, i locked myself in the bathroom.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I didn't realize Vincent had followed me to the bathroom until I heard him raving in front of the door of the toilet I was on. He kicked and slammed on the door, screaming that he would get in eventually.

    Open the door you little cunt.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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