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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'you threw your brother out of the house cause he told you he was gay? that's harsh hamish. and more than just a little homophobic, don't you think?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I didn't really mean to, though I wanted it I'll be honest about that. But I didn't mean to. It was just that he freaked out. He was mean and unto that moment I hadn't said anything wrong. I don't know I got angry. Still I feel it is better this way at least we are out of each others hair. And I don't need to worry about some gay lovin' going on in my house.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' bullshit hamish. you didn't freak out a little too? come on, he is your brother. i know what you thought on the subject even before you spoke with johnny. and you really think it's better having this massive gap between you and your brother? you need to apologise.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No, no, no I only reacted. He lost it when I wanted to talk to him. I just got pissed of then.
    I didn't want this. I just wanted to make sure that I would never have to see him with someone else. I just can't stand the idea of it. Is that so bad?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'but seeing him with anna. you'd be okay with that though? cause she's a girl'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes.







    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey had nothing else to say to hamish about johnny. what could he say anyway. hamish had to come to his own conclusions no one could make them for him. pulling into the alley beside gerards gallery, davey saw anna emerge.
    he watched as she turned and laughed at something. a second later, gerard come out. he kissed anna on the cheek. and she walked down the alley towards the car.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hallo Davey. How are you?

    I payed no attention to Hamish sitting next to Davey. He might have been there to help, but I sure as hell didn't invite him. I didn't have the mood to deal with him now. I thought ignoring him all together would be best.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Brisk
    Brisk Posts: 84
    and then the dj played Porch and for some reason everyone FLED the dancefloor
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    having anna leaning in the window, so close to him was hard for davey. his first instinct was to lean forward and kiss her. but instead he smiled and kept his thoughts to himself.

    'i'm doing okay. i hear you've been through some stuff. how are you doing?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I could be doing better, but I'm ok.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna noticed the catalogues in the back of the wagon. she also figured she should at least acknowledge hamish.

    'hey hamish.'

    anna looked at davey.

    'you want some help with those?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    If you haven't got anything else to do then sure, but we can manage it.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey didn't want anna to go. and it seemed to him that she wasn't in a hurry to leave.

    'actually would you? you could tell me what you think of them anyway.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh I already saw it. Gérard showed me a copy. It looks very nice as it always does.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna smiled. the thoughts running through her head were carnal and they were all about davey. to give herself some space, she walked to the back of the wagon, lifted the door and picked up a box.

    'come on you lazy bastards, these won't walk in there on their own.'

    davey sat there and watched anna until she disappeared into the building.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well come on Davey. You heard the lady, pick up a box or two.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey hesitated then followed hamish inside carrying a couple of boxes. the frist thing to confront him was a portrait of himself. he stood there looking at it, lost in thought. he didn't notice anna until she spoke.

    'perving on yourself davey?'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    ueh,... what,...? Oh euhm.... yes I am I am sucha a good looking dude ain't I.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    oh gods. davey could smell anna. she only ever washed herself with sandalwood soap and wore no perfume. he turned to face her.

    'are you done here cause i think we need to talk.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say

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