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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    O dear that sounds bad.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no. i don't think so. i just think that theres' a lot of unspoken stuff between us, and we need to get it out of the way, so both of us can move forward.'

    anna thought davey looked sad or resigned or some kind of emotion that got people down. it was then that he noticed he was still holding the box.

    'let me get rid of this.'

    anna watched as davey walked over to gerard and dumped the box at his feet. he looked at hamish.

    'listen can you find your own way. anna and i have some soul searching to do.'

    davey didn't wait for an answer.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Gérard exchanged glances with Hamish as they saw the Davey walk off. That doesn't sound good Hamish remarked.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well you know, anna talks about davey all the time. it's better to get things out in the open. otherwise it eats away at you and you end up doing something foolish. so are you coming tomorrow?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I reckon I will. Free drinks who could resist?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard looked at hamish with a wry smile on his face.

    'nothing in life is free hamish.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    That's ok man, just as long as I don't have to pay.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    walking down the alley,anna could feel the heat coming off davey. her face was neutral but inside, being this close to him, she was smiling like a fool. could she take a risk? should she? she grabbed davey's hand and pulled him to her. before he could react, she kissed him. davey pushed anna against the brick wall and kissed her back. being this close was electric for both of them. and it seemed that neither of them was in control.

    'wait wait wait.'

    who said that. did she say it? anna didn't know. anna chose to ignore the voice.

    'anna wait a minute.'

    shit, it was davey who said it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What Davey?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey thought for a second. what was the down side here? he wanted it. obviously anna wanted it.

    'i just want to be sure about this.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I feel sure, other than that I don't care.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna couldn't remember the last time she was at davey's. as soon as they were through the door, anna had her dress off. she stood there looking at davey. he smiled trying to ignore the bandages on her left wrist.

    'my god anna, you are still beautiful to me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I gave him my sexy temptress posed look and said; Just to you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey ignored the comment. he moved to her and kneeling, he kissd her belly. he felt anna's hand in his hair. he knew what she wanted him to do. she was impatient like that. he'd make her wait just a little longer. he stood up again and traced her lips with his thumb. she bit it. unbuttoning davey's shirt, anna bit his nipple. he whinced but took the pain. he closed his eyes and his head fell back as anna drew her tongue down his body. then she stopped. davey opened his eyes and looked down at her. taking her hand, davey pulled her to her feet and lead her to his bedroom.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    He throw her on the bed and stood there just watching her lay there covered in nothing else than her sweet smell while he took off the rest of his clothes.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    all his instincts that told him this was not a good idea disappeared from his mind when he felt anna's legs wrapped around his hips. her heel resting on his arse like it belonged there. as he kissed her neck and shoulders, anna ran her nails up his back. he arched his back away, but there was nowhere to go. he was in it now and neither of them was gonna stoop this. not now.
    he brushed the hair from her forehead and looked into her eyes. he told her he loved her. she smiled like she was a cat that had swallowed a canary. she didn't care if he meant it or whether it just came out.

    'then show me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I'll hold.

    Freya had been on the telephone for over twenty minutes. Even though she had quit enough of waiting she wanted to see this through.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya stared at the hideous wallpaper. she thought back to when she had lost her virginity in a motel room just like this. to vincent of course. she thought he was so fine back then. and he wanted her, not anna. or so she thought back then. now she figured her sister had blown him off, so freya was the consolation prize. the story of her life.
    there was a banging at the door and freya screamed. she dropped the phone and got on her feet.

    'who is it?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hallo miss It's the cleaning Lady. Is this a bad time for you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    well that would depend now, wouldn't it/

    a cleaning lady. who would have thunk it. freya opened the door.

    'no it's fine. come in.'

    freya went and picked up the phone. all she heard was the dial tone. she put it back on the hook, picked up her handbag and left the room. she didn't know where to go. she didn't want to talk to anna right now and have to deal with her smugness. freya started towards the airport road. she'd seen a few bars she could drown her sorrows in.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say

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