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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    rolling my eyes, i walked away towards the terrace. i stopped when i reached the doors and turned back to gerard. he still stood where i left him.

    'i met someone last night.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You did?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well technically i've met him before. last night though i slept with him.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh my it seems we both got lucky.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'anybody i know?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    He just stood there enjoying the fact that he knew something I didn't. Damn I hated that I was so damn curious.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i wasn't gonna play that game.

    'listen i have to thank you again for not calling the cops last night gerard. vincent's dangerous enough without having added incentive.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I realize that, but there is another side to it. However I am not in the mood to discuss it now thank you very much, I still remember how you left me high and dry last night. I don't want to relive it and get pissed off all over.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'fuck what is it with you guys.'

    then i realised he was talking about me leaving with arlo. i shrugged.

    'trust me gerard, for me it was worth it.'

    i couldn't help but smile at the thought of arlo.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh I don't doubt it was worth it for you, but when you paraded out off my office I wanted to throw something at you. So it wasn't worth that much to me. I al most called the cops just to spit you, you had it coming to you you know.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' you know gerard that's the second time in the past week that someone has told me i had it coming, and i don't appreciate it.'

    i felt like walking out, but just like everyone else, gerard would turn that against me as well. everyone expected me to explain my actions so now i was going to expect it from them.

    'please explain to me how calling the police was some payback to me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh Anna don't you have any real insight in what you do to other people. You stormed out of that room after you pretty much told me to do as you say or other wise I could piss off. You can't do that and expact me to be happy about it. I makes me angry when you treat me that way. *You could have just told me no though, you didn't have to be rude. Yet rude is what you were.









    * line from the Arctic monkeys
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i didn't care if you were happy. don't you get it gerard. if the police had been involved how do you think that would ahve affdeced vincent. do you think he would have let that slide? you don't know this man. you don't know what he is capable of. i do. so don't stand there and tell me you were pissed off with me cause i somehow hurt your feelings. i'm sorry i walked out of the exhibition but i couldn't stand the way people were looking at me as if i was the one at fault. i had to get out of there. i should have told you. i'm sorry for that. i wasn't thinking straight.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I was angry that you didn’t have the decency to finish a conversation. It didn’t matter that I did and you didn’t want to call the cops. It didn’t matter that you left early. I was trying to help you and you blew me off like you’ve done before. Anna what you have been there that night is horrible, but there was no need to kick me for making a suggestion. I don’t like it when you act that way, but perhaps my friendship doesn’t mean anything to you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'as far as i was concerned the conversation was over and not because i walked out. i told you that i didn't want the police involved and that should have been enough for you. there was nothing else for me to say. that's why i walked out. i wasn't prepared to stand and there and go back and forth when i saw no need. and please don't give me a sob story about your friendship meaning nothing to me, i just went through that with johnny, i don't need it from someone else. i don't wake up in the mornings and think to myself hmmm how can i mess with people's minds today? i try but sometimes it just gets the better of me and i don't want to.'

    i can't remember when i'd said so much without a breath. the look on gerard's face seemed to share the same thought. or maybe he was just surprised that i was still standing there and hadn't turned my back and bolted. i wonder what arlo was doing right now.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    God damn it it isn't about weather it was or wasn't enough for me. Can you please just stop for a minute and really listen to what I say.
    You didn't want to call the cops and you didn't trust me enough to listen to you. Instead of talking to me you gave me an ultimatum. Follow my orders ground trooper or the consequences are yours. Fuck I hate it when you display that attitude.
    You don't like it when I say you had it coming, well though luck you should have thought about that before you treated me like crap. But no instead I go out of my way to just please you. I would say I was out of my mind if I wasn't so damn scared.
    Just because you don't see the need doesn't mean you can walk out. You don't even know how I would have reacted, you just assume. And even if I would have had a different opinion, you could have done been courteous and hear me out.
    If you hear it twice in one day you might consider giving it some thought for once. You say it gets the better of you and you try, but it doesn't seem that way. You may want to try and own up to your mistakes Anna instead of using the excuse sorry that's just the way I am I can't help it, I really try.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i wasn't going to win this argument even if i was in the right. which i'm not saying i am. though i certainly don't think i'm in the wrong. this was a time for diplomatic skills that i doubted i had. but i could give it a try.

    'i'm sorry gerard. after vincent's little display, the last thing i wanted was to be interrogated by the police. i honestly thought that you wouldn't change your mind. that you thought that calling the police was the best thing. which it may have been but not for me. you don't know vincent. there are things between my brother in law and me that i don't want anyone else to know and those things would have come out. i wanted you to trust my judgement, that's all. i do value your friendship, but to me i was in the right last night.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I do realize that now, I understood that last night as did i understand you weren't in the best of moods. However I just can't stand being treated that way. I do trust your judgement Anna and I hope you will learn to trust that I am not out to rule you. I was scared for you and wanted to protect a friend that is all. I'm sorry that we needed to have this conversation and that your show had this big stain on it. Lets forget about this and go out and grabe some lunch?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey knew it was a mistake to open the door to hamish as soon as he saw the smile on his friend's face. but he couldn't very well shut the door in his face. hamish followed davey intot he kitchen and watched while davey filled the kettle with water.


    'so. last night. that was kinda exciting. never a dull moment when anna's around'

    hamish was busting to talk about the guy anna left with, but he felt he should at least gently lead up to it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Exciting? Well that's one way to put it, I guess.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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