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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well I would love to take a shower if that would be alright?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'sure. knock yourself out. there's towels in the bathroom. just be careful. that first burst of water gets a little frigid.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ok I'll besure and try to mis that. It feels like ages ago that I actually washed my hair. God I smell worse than a corps.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i had no comeback for that comment.
    so while my sister showered, i stood at the balcony door watching the rain come down wondering how long i'd have to share my space and where arlo was. why couldn't he spend the weekend with me. teachers didn't work on weekends. i closed my eyes and tried to lose myself in my thoughts.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I stood there while the rain pored down. I loved this it always seemed to clear up my head.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i heard a noise and turned around. freya was standing right behind me. i caught my breath and dropped my glass, which shattered when it hit the floor.

    'jesus christ freya. don't sneak up on me like that. get back before you cut your feet.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Wow I didn't know you cared.
    She smiled to soften up the remark, but I knew she wasn't entirely joking. I guess that's typical for the relationship we have.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'just keep away while i clean this shit up.'

    i left her standing and went to get a broom. while i was in the storeroom, i heard the phone ring. then i hard freya talking. collecting the broom i came out and again ran into freya. i just looked her, saying nothing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • abhi101cru
    abhi101cru Posts: 223
    "what the hell are you looking at?", she said.
    Sorry is the fool who trades his soul for a corvette, thinks he'll get the girl he'll only get the mechanic...

    Atlantic City: 09/30/05, 10/01/05
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She handed me the phone after saying: "Well she just walked in so here she comes."
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i swapped the broom for the phone.

    'you think you could clean up that glass for me?'

    it was more a command than a question. i walked in the opposite direction towards my bedroom. i kicked the door closed behind me. it only half got there. i dropped onto the bed.

    'hello?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Is this the pretty angel I've fallen in love with and that I so miss?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'oh please arlo get your hand off it. when can i see you again?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well I gave you a picture so presuming you still have it, right now.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well i do but i used it. so when did you say i could i see you again?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    How did you use it. Are you saying it is worn of form gazing into my deep blue eyes?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i ignored the idiot comments.

    'no i used it in a work. you know if you come over maybe i could gaze into those deep blues eyes while you're fucking me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh now that souds like a plan. Sadly enough that will have to wait, I can't right now.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'why not? what could possibly be more important that getting laid? i can come to you'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well no one could accuse you of being a pleasure delayer. I would have to regretfully decline. Sorry, but there are things that acquire my attention more than my dick. At least right now. I will see you soon.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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