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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    what the fuck? i had no idea what johnny was on about. i thought i did apologise. well i apologised for what i thought i had done.


    'and i don't need this johnny. i thought i did apologise. i can't think about this right now.'

    i left johnny standing on the corner and walked across the road.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What was he thinking the whining idiot. I’m feeling like shit and he’s raving on about his problem.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    johnny walked away. he couldn't believe anna didn't get it. he understood that she wasn't totally with it but surely she could not understand how important his admission had been. and how difficult it had been for him to tell her. to tell anybody. she thought it was just about her making a move on him and him rebuffing her. sure he could have told her what he was pissed off about but he wanted her to realise it on her own. he must have been more deep in thought than knew cause when johnny looked up hamish was talking to him.

    'didn't you hear me call out to you? you look a thousand miles away. you okay? umm i think we need to talk about some stuff.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What stuff? Are you still worked up over that Anna thing the other day? I told you I am not intrested in her that way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no. this has nothing to do with anna for a change. it's about you actually.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I am not really in the mood for any of your wierd behavior Hamish. I think I'd rather just say bye bye, and be on my way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i'm not being weird. i was talking to davey the other day and he said a few things that made me think. are you sure you're not interested in anna cause you two have a knack for jumping down my throat. you could even be at each other's throat all day and probably not get tired of the abuse.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What is it then, Hamish come on spit it out.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish looked around, not really wanting to get into his brother's sexuality whilst standing on the street.

    'can we go somewhere and talk?'

    it wasn't johnny's feelings he was thinking about. more the fact that he didn't want anyone thinking that he might be gay. as if it could rub off or something.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Tell me what you want Hamish, or else I'm off.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'davey said that you...that you are.. are you gay?'

    there he said it. hamish didn't know if it was a relief or not.

    'davey seems to think you are. well that you at least bat for both teams. you don't do you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why would you be happier if I rooted for the away team?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'just fucking tell me would you.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hamish my deeply beloved brother; I am just as queer than you are.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'so it's true then? you're not going to give me a straight answer.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I can only give you queer answers, but that is kinda the same thing ain't it? Yes Hamish I like men. I love to taste them, I love to kiss them, in fact I love them in every way you wish Anna would love you. Does that answer your question, Hamish? Is that straight enough?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' don't bring anna into this. it's got nothing to do with anything.'

    that wasn't necessarily true, but hamish didn't need reminding about how anna wouldn't give him the time of day, other than being friends.

    'i want you gone from the house johnny. is that straight enough for you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Have you seen me around these last few days? I wouldn't spend any more time with you than absolutly nessesery. Goodbye oh enlighted one, gift that you are, the all maker had a good day when he made you, Hamish my boy. You dude are a gem, that you are. See you around pussy.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hamish watched his brother walk away from him and possibly out of his life. obviously johnny had more balls than he ever gave him credit for. he'd noticed that lately. now he knew why. the thought of his brother with other men repulsed him. he certainly didn't want to be thinking about what it was they did together. did johnny have a boyfriend? hamish shuddered at the prospect of that possibility. he turned in the direction of anna's.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hallo are you up yet? Jeff you lazy ass why are you in bed still?
    Johnny opened up the curtains of Jeffrey's bedroom, a room that was now basically theirs only Jeffrey didn't know that yet. Hey there sleepyhead, rise and shine lover.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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