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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hiding your curiosity was never your strong point was it Anna? He seemed relieved when he answered His name is Jeffery.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    how could i not smile at that?

    if he thought i would give up and if johnny was serious about this guy then he shouldn't have used the word sorta to describe their relationship. i know he wanted this almost as much as i did. the only difference was he was probably getting some while right now i wasn't getting any. so that meant basically all i wanted right now was sex. i took a step towards johnny.

    jefrfrey huh? and where did you meet this jeffrey?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Johnny sat down on the sofa, now back at ease. He answered with apparent happiness to share this. I meet him down town. I was sitting in the sun enjoying a moment of rest between deliveries, when all of a sudden this drop dead gorgeous guy walked towards me. He asked me if he could have a cigarette and sat down beside me. That's how we started talking, it clicked right away.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    and i was meant to be happy about this

    i forced a smile.

    'that's great johnny. right now though i need to be alone. can you leave please.'

    this time i didn't walk out fo the room. i waited and watched as johnny stood up and made his way over to the door. he looked at me slightly bewildered and hesitated. but i think that he knew more for his own sake he had to leave. he looked like he wanted to say something.

    'what johnny?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You’re so self-absorbed Anna that it is truely scary. I've been trying to tell you this all day. I didn't dare tell anyone, and now that I did you can't just be happy for me.
    Thank you Anna, really you're a great friend.

    He turned around to open the door and leave disappointed in me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'FUUUCK! GOD DAMNIT. i just wanted sex. is that too much to ask for?'

    i was angry now. with johnny and with myself. was i being selfish. it's not like i forced myself on him. i'm letting him walk out the door aren't you.

    'just fuck off then johnny. i don't need you laying a guilt trip on me. it's not like i tried to rape you. just get the fuck out.'

    johnny didn't make a move to leave.

    'GET OUT! go to your precious jeffrey.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No guilt trip Anna just the fact's. If you feel guilty then maybe there is hope for improvement yet.

    Johnny opened the door and made his way down the stairs, eager to leave.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    angry angry angry ant anna. you can't let this get to you.

    going over to my paints, i started flinging. i covered my hands in it and smooshed it over the canvas. by the time i was finished i couldn't even work out what colour it was. leaning forward resting my forehead on the still wet paint, i looked down at my bare feet. placing the canvas flat on the ground, i covered my feet with paint and started to trace my steps. after a while it looked as if the footprints were lost. perfect. just what i was feeling.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I put the canvas aside and started on another on. I felt like doing something just to be occupied.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'so are you gonna front at anna's showing on friday?'

    davey looked at hamish, contemplating an answer.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I think I want to go. I'll give her a ring first to ask if it's OK.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i woudn't do that. plus she wouldn't have invited you if she wasn't going to be okay with you being there.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Off course she has invited me. I was her boyfriend when she did. I just don't what her to feel ackward.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    then davey did a double take.

    'what do you man you wouldn't call her if i were you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well,..... Johnny is over at Anna's and I think he fancy's her. You know maybe they are at it. It wouldn't be good for you to have to hear him there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey laughed.

    ' i doubt that's what they're doing hamish'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No really he's got the hots for her. I could even come to pick her up from the loony farm.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No really he's got the hots for her. I couldn't even come to pick her up from the loony farm.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'don't call it the loony farm. soemtimes you're an idiot hamish.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    OK, OK I'm sorry.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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