Let us write a story sentence by sentence.

145791097

Comments

  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i must have fallen asleep cause i was awoken at some ungodly hour by a nurse trying to take my blood pressure. isn't it enough that i'm alive, why do they have to bug you like that.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I wanted to not say anything at all, but just when she was done I wondered were my sister was.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i opened my mouth to ask about freya, but then i realised it didn't matter to me where she was, not anymore. whatever i had to do, i'd do regardless.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    So she thought he wouldn't have me any more, well we'll just have to see about that.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    it was nearly midday and davey found himself staring at the work anna had been doing lately. he stared at the image of the man and wondered if that was really blood he was seeing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh sweet lord all mighty, why do you have to be sucha handful Anna he asked himself as the picture held him in it's grasp.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    he had notice her art getting more urgent over the past few months, as if she were trying to say something that she had trouble vocalising. he reached out and laying his palm against the canvas, realised he was looking at an image of himself.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Not sure what to make of it's meaning he felt moved never the less, he couldn't help him self as he sat there in front of her work, lost in thinking.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    what are you doing here?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh,... emh I ..I, I was just a,..... Never mind me What are you doing back here, did they tell you you could go home.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • imspinnin
    imspinnin Posts: 933
    Felling so worhtless and confused, he had escaped from the rehab hospital over night...
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i couldn't help but laugh. did they tell me? you're kidding right. look davey i cna't have you here messing with my head, so either you're here to stay or you get the hell. leave the keys on your way out.
    i couldn't look at him, so i didn't wait for a response. i walked down the hall hoping he'd leave.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Not knowing what to do, he just stood there, pondering his options, just get that fucking key out your pocket and close the door for good he thought, but .... easier said than done.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the knock on my bedroom door didn't surprise me.
    anna we have to talk?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why should WE! Why should we have to talk, is there anything good you have to add to all the great news you've already told me lately?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey shook his head. she was always so confrontational. he didn't a fight, so as gently as he could he said,

    whatever anna, we do still need to talk.. so when you're ready....


    anna listened as his footsteps receded down the hall.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Come on Anna are you gonna let him walk off like that and then start moaning and weeping again, I wanted a fight not this.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    god damn it i hated it when i was like this. i try to keep it all together but it just doesn't work. davey was right last week when he called me toxic. screw him then i don't need him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    This is my time and high time to, fuck every single on off them, I'm free for the first time in god knows how long.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • middle of the road, every single toad, listening to the freedom speech, george bush addresses to me, which doesnt give me a good reason, why we are in iraq in the first place