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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'no you're not. you say shit like that all the time and when someone calls you on it, that's when you apologise. think before you speak that's all.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    OK, OK I'm sorry. He laught as to make clear he wasn't.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • steppenwolf
    steppenwolf Posts: 164
    And there it was: forgiveness denied, a cruel cigarette, my path interupted again.
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey found it hard having hamish around sometimes. the boy needs a jolt.


    ' do you even know your brother is gay?'

    the look hamish gave davey indicated that in fact he did not know this. either that or he didn't believe it.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • steppenwolf
    steppenwolf Posts: 164
    Evidence, facts, these investigative things, was at the center of it all: guilt and innocence; not belief or faith, and this was troublesome.
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Are you shiting me Davey?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'and i'd have what to gain from lying?'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey come fuckin´on man, I am starting to believe you if this is a joke you better tell me because I´m freaking out here.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' christ hamish. you can not be that unobservant. look to be truthful i don't know for sure whether he is gay, but i know that he swings both ways. he's your brother so why would you have a problem with it. besides it's nobody's business anyway.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I live in the same house as he does Davey. It will be weird. I don´t know it´s just so fucking gross.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey shook his head at the stupidity of his friend.

    'what are you worried about? you think johnny's gonna fuck you up the arse while you sleep?'

    the look on hamish's face said that he thought that it was a distinct possibility. davey clapped his hand on hamish's shoulder and laughed.

    'don't worry mate, you're probably not his type anyway.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    It's still gross. Fuck why do you tell me this, don't you know that ignorance is bliss?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' and what happens when you run into johnny and he's got a guy with him?'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Shit man I don't want to think about that.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well you're gonna have to. pass me that pile there will you.'

    hamish looked down at the table they were standing at and lifted a stack of proof sheets. handing them to davey, he held back the top one looking at it more closely. they were of anna's artwork.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    We will see it when we get there, or at least I will, just as long as he doesn't come into my home.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ' so you're going to ban your brother from bringing his boyfriends into his own home? do you practise being a jerk or does it just come naturally?'

    davey took the proofs hamish had given him and walked across the room depositing them on the top of a filing cabinet.he turned and looked at hamish.

    'have you seen anna lately?'
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    take a good look
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey that's cool two Counting crows songs combined in one question. You are so talented Davey. You should do something with the shit you say.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey bit his tongue to stop from ripping into hamish.

    'it's only amusing when i know what you're on about hamish. i don't listen to shit music so you're going to have to help me with the counting crows. how did you say anna was doing?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Last I heard just fine.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»