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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    jeffrey rolled over and looked at johnny.

    'i've got to work tonight you know.'

    as johnny sat on the edge of the bed next to jeffrey, jeffrey moved his head and rested it on johnny's leg.

    'so how'd it go with the miss. not good by the looks of you.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    That would be the understatement of the year. It didn't go anything like I had hoped it would. She didn't have a clue what so ever about why I was angry with her.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well i hate to tell you this darling but sometimes you can be vague. and from what you've told me about anna, she needs you to be absolutely clear about stuff. you want to climb in here with me?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    That probable means you won't get out though.
    Anyway I don't want to make it easy for her. She has to know that what she did was wrong. I don't want an apology because she thinks I want to hear it. She needs to mean it, I want to know that she is sorry.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    jeffrey a wrapped his arm around johnny as he laid down beside him.

    'cut her a break will you. she's going through some stuff just the same as you are.can we take this shirt off you'

    johnny didn't resist as jeffrey helped him off with his t shirt.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    All well and good Jeffrey, but I sometimes can't stand that fact that everything needs to be about her. I love her very much, but that is hard to handle.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'she's the one with the illness not you. i'd be more concerned about that homophobe brother of yours.'

    jeffrey tried to get johnny interested in something other than talking about anna. he ran his hand down his lover's back, resting his hand on johnny's hip inside his jeans.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh that. I don't really care for the little roach. I met him on the way back here.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    trying to have a conversation with jeffrey when he was obviously horny was extremely difficult. johnny rolled over to face him.

    'you don't particularly want to be talking right now do you?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well,.... it's just that you're so freakin' hot when you're all worked up. Jeffrey broke out in laughter at the face Johnny made. Go on they Johnny you whimpering nancyboy make us a cup of coffee and I'll get dressed. Jeffrey curled his lips as to make the whole scene even more ridicules. Johnny went to the kitcken while saying whom is calling whom a nancyboy?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard didn't hear anna come in. but he heard her swear when she dropped one of the canvasses she was carrying. she went to help her.

    'god girl you should have called me, i would have come picked you up.'

    then he noticed her slightly frazzled state.

    'you okay anna? you want something to drink?'

    gerard took the canvasses and leant them against a wall.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    God it has been so long Anna. How are you? You've been trough such a great ordeal. How are you doing? You had me worried you know. Girl it has been so long I feel like hugging you, but it would probable be better for my no-claim health insurance if I didn't. Do you want something to drink?

    I was kinda surprised he actually stopped to let me answer the way he was raving on and on. Gérard always got nervous when I was around, I loved him for that even if he was a bit annoying.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'you know gerad just listening to you tires me out. come here and give me a hug'

    anna squeezed gerard especially tighter. she needed to hold onto something and gerard was it right now. when she let go she held him at arm's distance. ignoring all questions about her wellbeing.

    ' have you spoken to davey about the catalogue?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Eumh... yes, yes I have. It will be perfect.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'of course it will. he does good work.'

    i must have got a wistful look on my face cause gerard sure got a sympathetic one on his.

    'it's okay gerard. i still think about him but i'm over all that.'

    there i said it. i just hope it sounded convincing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well lets get to work then.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    of course i got distracted by the big canvas of davey. gerard nudged me.

    'come on girl there's no time for reminiscing. you can moon over him tomorrow night.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes, lets go. Did you send the invitations? What needs to be done?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well me, i will just bask in your reflected glory. you just have to be your usual sweet charming self. aside from that, those two pieces you just brought in need to be hung. you might want to take a look at the collection and see if it's okay.'

    i had to admit, the man knew what he was doing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Go on have a look. We could always change things around if you have a better idea.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»