Pearl Jam Haiku Challenge

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  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Quest we're taking on
    How to be happy and true
    Not one to presume

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    Precious thing to bear
    The way she can reach my heart
    Right out of Thin Air

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    Feelings that we share
    Only one can reach my heart
    Always know she's there

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    Sun clutches the dawn
    Clouds reflected in our pond
    Where the water's calm

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    One day in my arms
    A light will shine when she's there
    Appears in Thin Air
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    I have been looking
    for this girl all over here
    but she hid away
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Be a human light
    It's an Inside Job today
    You'll be shown the way

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    Run into the rain
    Rise and fix a broken soul
    To restore its whole

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    You chose how you are
    Life comes from within your heart
    It's an Inside Job

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    Make yourself a pact
    There's a greater way for all
    Keep your faith intact
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I can't find my wheels
    The light doesn't show you near
    Lost without you here

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    This world goes nowhere
    Dark horse fields befriending me
    With a fear that breeds

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    Others run and hide
    I'm stuck on the Other Side
    I have to be there

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    Nothing is the same
    Breaking fast I need a lift
    Know I'd never quit

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    Noise in the quiet
    Your melodies in my ear
    Fade when you're not here
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    City mind is gray
    Packing in and overgrown
    I'm hiding away

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    Something we can't hold
    Standing in a hole alone
    Love is deep below

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    Seen it all before
    The memories eat at me
    A Ghost doesn't bleed

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    Flying like a Ghost
    I hear talk and old friends call
    Makes no sense at all
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Life is falling down
    Dies to be part of the ground
    Goes from root to stem

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    Life is looking in
    Practicing an accident
    Upside to this down

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    Big lie hits your eye
    Realize we're upside down
    A book you can't close

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    Seeds on the deathbed
    Brown to black it's coming back
    Dig your own garden

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    The world turns on love
    Cropduster sees the patterns
    From on high above
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    When death comes around
    Can't depend on tomorrow
    Forced to hear death's song

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    Why invite darkness
    Sad song doesn't have to play
    Why just go halfway

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    Home inside your head
    Locked door mess of unmade beds
    Sores you don't attend

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    Too weak to be strong
    Say there's always something wrong
    Your plan all along

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    Harder on your self
    Leave the pain for someone else
    World waits up the stairs

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    Faced a Life Wasted
    Never going back again
    Escape erased it

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    Taste a Life Wasted
    Warm with negativity
    Comfort's energy

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    There's nothing back there
    Did you leave yourself behind
    There for you to find
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Searching the haystacks
    Wanted To Get Right with it
    Get it right with you

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    Wait for the moment
    For the moment between us
    You'll swear if you must

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    The fire is made now
    Too hot it's harder to touch
    Waiting for sundown

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    Dreg society
    Underbelly beside me
    I'm following thee

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    Wanted To Get Right
    Turn water into sunshine
    Get with it with you

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    Each day's a parade
    Still need a way to feel right
    Get it right with you
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Starting to believe
    This hopeless situation
    Trying to achieve

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    It's our destiny
    Be the one we've been before
    Leads you back to war

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    Keep on running on
    It's got to be All Or None
    Surrender to one
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    It's been a while since
    That last night we spoke of this
    But I can't forget

    How you looked at me
    With those lonely lazy eyes
    You have yet to leave
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Hold the hand of love
    Try to shake the cancer off
    It's surmountable

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    Let the game begin
    Love Boat Captain take the reigns
    Steer us to the clear

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    It's been said and sung
    But it can't be heard enough
    All you need is love

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    Hold me so it's true
    When all's lost there will be you
    That's all I believe

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    The young can lose hope
    They can't see beyond today
    The wise know the way

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    Mix the light to gray
    It's an art to live with pain
    Love is all you need
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Leave yourself behind
    Take your pick then get some kicks
    Want to take a ride

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    Look out below now
    All I fear is falling down
    This is my way home

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    Feet can't find the floor
    Dragons after three or four
    Can I get five more

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    See a wedding band
    Not sure that I understand
    On a Severed Hand

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    I can't close my eyes
    Look around I see the sound
    I'm not falling down

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    Sound waves keep me calm
    To explore and not explode
    I don't lose control

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    On another plane
    Preternatural power
    Able to maintain

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    Once our self dissolves
    Tearing through all that we know
    We are free to grow

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    Do we really know
    What is human and what's more
    Answer waits at home
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I keep holding out
    Will the memories stay clear
    When you're gone from here

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    Wishing out the days
    Try to meet you in my dream
    Almost next to me

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    Planned what I would say
    Know that I still remain true
    Since you slipped away

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    There's an open door
    There from wherever you are
    For you to Come Back

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    So you had to go
    Would have lost you anyway
    Come Back it's okay

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    Linger through the day
    You're gone now so far away
    Strange you feel so close

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    Come Back I'll be here
    Waiting for the light to shine
    Through this broken roof

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    Come Back I'm still here
    Only thing I feel is rain
    I had to remain

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    I won't fall apart
    Come Back it's okay Come Back
    I'm still here Come Back
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Not gonna lose you
    Help yourself help me Save You
    Let's pick up your soul

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    I'm not leaving here
    You hear what you want to hear
    I'm selfish and clear

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    Let's pick up your will
    Something has taken control
    Let's beat it let's go

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    Be lost without you
    I'm not living without you
    You could have it all

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    Let yourself fall now
    You helped me now I'll help you
    I'm right below you

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    Treble in your head
    The only thing you can hear
    Fuck me if I care

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    Don't go on us now
    You're too important to us
    We still need you here

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    Let's Save You for you
    Your will is fat and lazy
    What's there is still you
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Better say it loud
    It's better now than too late
    Ride Amongst The Waves

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    High Amongst The Waves
    Put away the early grave
    Have a soul that's saved

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    You can see you're strong
    Light comes through the clouds in rays
    All the wounds are gone

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    Back the early days
    You were young and thus amazed
    Suddenly it's changed

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    If it's not for love
    Just you and me and nothing
    Would I be drowning

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    Seen it wotk both ways
    House of cards where tears are saved
    Up Amongst The Waves

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    When there's nothing more
    Tears are just waterfalling
    Fill our reservoir

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    Stay let's Just Breathe
    Meet you on the other side
    Hold me till I die

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    Nothing would you take
    Everything that you gave
    Wonder more each day

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    You're all that I see
    As I look upon your face
    Stay with me Just Breathe

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    Someday we must go
    Every life has an end
    Some will sit alone

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    Some folks just have one
    Don't count the ones that you love
    Others they got none
  • The ChampThe Champ Posts: 4,063
    Oh wait, I just read the first page..lol..I thought it was a general haiku challenge, but instead we are to copy/incorporate Pearl Jam material....sorry for my irrelevant posts ;) ..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    the slam
    and the frame shatters on the floor
    force of nature
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Took a walk too soon
    Felt the brain wired into me
    At the speed of Moon

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    The human psyche--Oh!
    A soul reduced to a word
    I wished was unheard


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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    SD533
    was the Haiku King. (Where did
    he go?) (I don't know.)
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Immortality
    today went through me like strings
    Chased away his blues
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Don't I want to rest
    On yesterday's paper plate
    No--theres pist or fist
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Up too late tonight
    Nothing seems to fit my mood
    Should I light the match?
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    do not enter this
    resist whats been said before
    haiku god bless you
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    of course she is right
    but a bored and lonely man
    has to make ends meet
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • He kissed me once
    I had chills for a whole month
    Just imagine more
    My last message to you ~

    You're right. You are a monster! You are sick! Get help!

    At least, I am not a fuck-up! A lying fuck-up!
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    I live in the South
    I am waiting for the Love
    Pearl Jam please come back
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    pandora wrote:
    I live in the South
    I am waiting for the Love
    Pearl Jam please come back


    hi Pandi, I hate to sound....stupid ! but could you please expain what a haiku is or how they're written..please :D

    Godfather.
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Godfather. wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    I live in the South
    I am waiting for the Love
    Pearl Jam please come back


    hi Pandi, I hate to sound....stupid ! but could you please expain what a haiku is or how they're written..please :D

    Godfather.
    I had to look too... :D

    first post page explains

    5 syllables
    7 syllables
    5 syllables

    its funny JB and I were just talking about Haiku in the hot tub Saturday night
    we couldn't remember how they are written and now I can't remember
    why we were talking about them :lol:
  • Reds, browns, golds abound
    Falling leaves blanket the ground
    Stroll through God's painting
    My last message to you ~

    You're right. You are a monster! You are sick! Get help!

    At least, I am not a fuck-up! A lying fuck-up!
  • He stroked my hair
    I gently rubbed his back
    Please don't wake me up
    My last message to you ~

    You're right. You are a monster! You are sick! Get help!

    At least, I am not a fuck-up! A lying fuck-up!
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