Pearl Jam Haiku Challenge

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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    one two three four five
    one two three four five six sev
    one two three four five
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    What timing was that?
    1-2-3-4-2-3 "I....
    ...seem to..." 9/8 Cropduster
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    My Generation
    It's time to Kick Out The Jams
    A Street Fighting Man
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Singing in a room
    With Bayleaf Interiors
    The Funeral Song

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    Still able to see
    Visions cracked into the wall
    It's too simple now
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    Once upon a time
    I me mine I me mine I
    Got Yer number nine
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i met her mother
    and i understand why go
    home when she is there
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Not used to lying
    I surfaced to get some air
    Too soon for dying
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    SD533 wrote:
    Not used to lying
    I surfaced to get some air
    Too soon for dying
    this one I love and feel.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    SD533 wrote:
    Not used to lying
    I surfaced to get some air
    Too soon for dying
    this one I love and feel.

    One banana slice
    In a cup of 'naner tea
    chokin' on tea leaves
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Holier than thou
    What's a sell out anyhow
    Stop your sobbing now
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The Army Reserve
    When you go home in a bag
    Loved ones get the flag

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    Rats don't have a need
    To lick Olajuwon's feet
    Don't count what you keep

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    Headphoning through town
    With all the In Hidings from
    Two thousand world tour
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    On to Chicago
    Tank of gas sunglasses on
    A Mission From God

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    Make a Choice decide
    Call it quits or let it ride
    Which side are you on

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    There's bugs in my head
    As long as I'm still Alive
    They know they'll be fed
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Pearl Jam will plunder
    City of Brotherly Love
    Then Land Down Under
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Now what will you do
    When the cannon points at you
    Lets you know you're through

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    When it's time to go
    Empty Glass won't rust like can
    Go Piss Bottle Man
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    What is The Fixer
    Re-vitalous elixir
    Or snake oiled trickster
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Boxed and trapped in fear
    Hearts sewn shut and laced in prayer
    The Faithfull are here
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    It's a Writer's Block
    Swinging keyed door won't unlock
    Reflect and take stock

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    It's a Writer's Block
    Take time to get off the clock
    Give yourself a shock

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    This is Writer's Block
    Got the roll but not the rock
    The boat's in dry dock

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    If it's Writer's Block
    Wait for inspiration's knock
    When your shit's a crock

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    When it's Writer's Block
    Thoughts of a feather won't flock
    No key solves the lock

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    What's a Writer's Block
    It's imagination's mock
    Of a mental block

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    Facing Writer's Block
    Time to improv and ad hoc
    Even if it's schlock
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Don't Gimme No Lip
    Don't Bore Me with shit that's dip
    With your tombstone chip

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    Don't Gimme No Lip
    It's a going nowhere trip
    Nothing in the clip

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    Don't Gimme No Lip
    Talk like that could sink a ship
    Shut it up and zip

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    Don't Gimme No Lip
    Take a breath and get a grip
    You're starting to slip
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    When troubled souls unite
    Everything turns out right
    You won't need to fight
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    When the end is near
    Band members start working on
    Their solo career

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    On board for the trip
    Set expectations aside
    Then go for the ride

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    Not a defeatist
    Don't care who's an elitist
    Just a completeist

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    Wake your gypsy soul
    Put the candles on the amps
    Light the days of old
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    See My Friend Got Some
    The Fixer Johnny Guitar
    Just Breathe Unthought Known

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    The Force Of Nature
    Supersonic Speed of Sound
    End Amongst The Waves
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Sonic Reducer
    He's not a junk gin juicer
    No beg and chooser

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    Sonic Reducer
    No take punch black and blueser
    No headknock bruiser

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    Sonic Reducer
    Not a make lame excuser
    No run scam ruser

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    Sonic Reducer
    A been paying his dueser
    Not a screw looser

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    Sonic Reducer
    No human rights refuser
    Just don't need youser

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    Sonic Reducer
    Riding an electric beam
    To energy dream
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    We all have to die
    Don't live your life scared alive
    Don't sleep in a lie

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    Cut loose left to die
    Don't know how you'll stay alive
    Bottom line's a lie

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    Unemployable
    Sacrifice to stay alive
    That game is a lie

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    Unemployable
    Look forward to get behind
    A slave to their grind

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    Unemployable
    Subtracts from their bottom line
    Unavoidable

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    Unemployable
    Families left on the line
    Near death in their minds
  • Jeremy has spoken
    Dissident message on life
    loss of Present Tense.
    Jason Heskett
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The Fixer Got Some
    It's still half-baked and Undone
    Keeps quiet acts dumb
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Boxers and the bags
    Out on the porch they don't wave
    I don't want to stay

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    Sent home in a bag
    He's not marching anymore
    Spilled in yellow sand

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    Looked up on the porch
    Getting boxed on by the slags
    Don't know why I'm here

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    The time only drags
    I've been waking up in rags
    Someone's punching bag

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    A bad news letter
    Gypsy Biker coming home
    Farewell Ledbetter

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    How you coming back
    Inside a box or a bag
    Say hi to the flag

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    Boxer or the bag
    Don't know which one is better
    Blue blood bleeds redder
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    So much lost since then
    Fight to get it back again
    Time for way back when
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The Fixer arrives
    In front of Supersonic
    No Code cryptonic
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Get it back again
    Welcome home a long lost friend
    Good things shouldn't end
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Trapdoor in the sun
    For the truant with a gun
    Nowhere left to run

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    Barricaded door
    His cigar box on the floor
    Not here anymore

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    Next up volunteers
    For the public show careers
    Vessels full of tears

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    Some die just to live
    Not sure how much they should give
    Truants must stay hid

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    Immortality
    A burnt out mentality
    Seeks finality

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    Now the truants learn
    How to crash without the burn
    Happy for their turn
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