Pearl Jam Haiku Challenge

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  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Try to remember
    All that's sacred comes from youth
    Believing in truth

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    Got nothing to do
    Scream and cry out for some more
    Who is that call for

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    Shouting out for Who
    Can't say it belongs to you
    Wasn't meant for you

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    There's a common rule
    You can't say you hate something
    And then do it too

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    Storm the room to find
    Nothing but a big fuck you
    All there is for you

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    Table's set for two
    Not for a crowd or a few
    There's no place for you

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    A dedication
    It becomes naively true
    When it's Not For You
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I won't disappear
    Just need and want someone there
    Helps keep my mind clear

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    It gets so absurd
    Static shoots through the atttic
    Angels can be heard

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    Not trying No Way
    I can't make a difference
    At least not today

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    Called in my angel
    To see what she had to say
    There still is No Way

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    No Way attitudes
    Ocean of my platitudes
    Water's dark and gray

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    Stopped and I won't try
    Called an angel asked her why
    Alone where I lie
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    No reason to live
    He's got wings look at him now
    Has so much to give

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    Wants us to know why
    Strange spots are seen in the sky
    It's him up on high

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    Delivered his wings
    Now he can unlock the chains
    Imprisoning things

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    Floats down to us here
    Stabbed by small men who don't care
    He still wants to share

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    When he's seen up there
    It's not for him to ask why
    He's Given To Fly

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    Love that is received
    While it is given away
    It still can be saved

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    After he is gone
    People will look to the sky
    Where he once would fly

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    We all live and die
    Some will be Given To Fly
    Nobody knows why
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    He's unkept inside
    Thoughts are too big for his size
    He's off on his ride

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    He hasn't been back
    See his picture on the wrack
    Moving past too fast

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    He's home and laughing
    Catching up on the flipside
    On break from his ride

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    The strain creeps right in
    He's surrounded by bullshit
    Off He Goes again

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    He's the same old friend
    Don't know where the trip takes him
    Lets nobody in
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I'm a fool you see
    To want to say I need you
    Just want you to breathe

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    I Just Breathe and see
    My wanting and needing you
    Makes a fool of me

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    I just need to breathe
    Free of all my wants and needs
    A fool just for me
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I'm peeled wide open
    I've still got my inner sense
    Glimpse my innocence

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    Up so high I shake
    I can touch the sky I scrape
    Golden boughs won't break

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    Hear what the leaves said
    Newspaper crowbar can't go
    Upside of my head

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    Up here in my nest
    Takes one breath to fill my chest
    I can get some rest

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    In My Tree I see
    Sidewalk trashscape down below
    Nothing there to know

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    In My Tree I see
    Friends that have forgotten me
    No one there to know

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    At home in blue sky
    Way up in the air on high
    So light in my nest

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    Knowlege In My Tree
    It's been growing up with me
    It will set me free

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    In My Tree a nest
    Only place where I can rest
    Sleeping innocence
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    He's a Dissident
    Railing at the presidents
    And at their servants

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    Nursed him for a night
    She made contact with the fight
    An aid in his flight

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    Helped him hide away
    Not so sure that he should stay
    Not sure what to say

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    Wanted him to stay
    Forked him over to the state
    Now he's far away

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    She glides on today
    When she couldn't hold she'd fold
    Just gave him away

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    Folding's not an art
    Sowed the seeds of her dissent
    Within her own heart

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    Turned herself around
    At home she's so far away
    It's all just a waste
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I need and want you
    If you don't know that by now
    Then I've been a fool

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    Just Breathe and you'll know
    How much that I still need you
    And how I want you

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    I'll always want you
    Won't be a day without me
    There to let you know
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    edited August 2009
    Nothing As It Seems
    Saving up a sunny day
    Nothing to believe

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    Nothing like a poem
    Whisper through a magaphone
    A voice all alone

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    Little that he needs
    There is little that he sees
    Nothing As It Seems

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    Don't need methadone
    Occupation's overthrown
    Bittersweet it's home
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  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    SD533 wrote:
    I can touch the sky I scrape

    What an excellent line!
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    SD533 wrote:
    Please stand by the shore
    I will be back there once more
    The sea will rise me

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    Dreaming of your touch
    The currents shift towards you
    Oceans hold so much

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    Waves roll through my head
    Are you still holding the thread
    Ringed by what we said

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    No reason to stray
    Oceans won't take me away
    I'll be there today




    I really like this one...


    I agree, that is a good batch.
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The song from which that batch was hacked and paraphrased - Oceans - has such good lyrics that it was easy to find good haikus in and between the lines. Turning Oceans into that batch of haikus has given me a deeper and hopefully better understanding of that song. Even though I have probably listened to Oceans hundreds of times before, I don't think that I paid any attention to what it was really about until I started reshaping it into a haiku.
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Wash away the past
    Burn away and shed the mask
    Let the spirit pass

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    Lives opened and trashed
    Holding on it's dying fast
    It's the Last Exit

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    For better or worse
    Won't even know what's been left
    Swearing under breath

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    Four days is not long
    While the ocean forgets it
    During Last Exit
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    You're reflected now
    You've gone wherever we go
    Stars are made of stones

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    Now you've disappeared
    Only your light can be here
    Can't take that away

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    Can't save up on life
    Got to spend it while it's there
    Space grows between us

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    Wasted days alone
    Separated by Light Years
    You shine on my stone
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Full moon at high tide
    An ocean filled with crying
    Knows what will be mine

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    Feeling left behind
    Sorrow grows when it's denied
    Then it becomes mine

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    Fools will stand in line
    Faith and hope won't buy more time
    Only own my mind

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    I know that I'll die
    Life leaves as each breath goes by
    All that's left is mine

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    Meaning left behind
    Only know that I Am Mine
    That is my own mind

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    Feelings left behind
    Only I can know my mind
    And all that is mine

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    The significance
    It differs behind the eyes
    Where there are no lies

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    Lost behind the eyes
    Innocents broken with lies
    There's no need to hide

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    Innocents broken
    Lost one time between the lines
    Nowhere left to hide
  • weedweed Posts: 475
    I love reading this
    look forward to more
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Seeing hell's not right
    Walked the line with you that night
    Wish it was real life

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    I've got memories
    An empty cup lost at sea
    What life's got on me

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    Lie alone and wait
    Empty shell's easy to crack
    Questions I can't ask

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    Fight back in my mind
    I Got Shit you'll never know
    So much it don't show

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    Love is just a dream
    I Got Id that's not ego
    Nothing real to show
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The consequences
    Sent here for you to transcend
    That's not Who You Are

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    What you think and feel
    Even if it isn't real
    That is Who You Are

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    You are Who You Are
    Change leaves a mark on your soul
    Won't change Who You Are

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    Each piece has a part
    Be Who You Are make your mark
    Almost time to leave

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    Winds of circumstance
    Happenstance drives off the track
    Words won't get you back

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    Need not condescend
    Don't bow before fucked up men
    That you can't defend
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I'm a fool you see
    No one knows this more than me
    I come clean and new

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    Gonna See My Friend
    I'm thick and have too much thin
    Make it go away
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The winded sailor
    Loses sight of his savior
    Devil's his jailer

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    Tremors turned to quake
    Smallest oceans still get waves
    In a drowning wake

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    Blame it all on fate
    Faith in love and Tremor Christ
    Know that it's divine

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    Drifting by the storm
    It takes time but not a life
    Time to take the dive

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    Devil's words are worst
    Angels try to get there first
    Wait for signs not lies
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Words that are spoken
    Can never be taken back
    Nothing in the past

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    She once believed him
    Inside their shared prison cell
    Nothing in the well

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    Looking for something
    Flies away into the sun
    Doesn't mean nothing

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    One day she stiffened
    Over to the other side
    Empty stares still lied

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    He forgets something
    Now destined to remember
    But it was nothing

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    He walks on his own
    Thinks thoughts he can't help thinking
    Nothing man's sinking

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    Cursed the day that's slow
    He caught a bolt of lightning
    Had to let it go
  • begging for a prayer,
    how can i quit to be there?
    can you see me now.
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Hard To Imagine
    Things were so different then
    This was way back when

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    No one's safe from harm
    It's a tattered coat of arms
    Left here by the past

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    The rise and the fall
    Never know just what they saw
    Thought they saw it all

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    Paint you a picture
    Shaded and shrouded in gray
    Fire from yesterday

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    It's hard to explain
    There must be a way somehow
    It's different now

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    Forget tradition
    It's so Hard To Imagine
    Won't happen again
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Keep on keeping on
    Dream about getting along
    Awake dreaming on

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    A punch to the head
    Smile big with a toothless grin
    My break's kicking in

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    Supersonic gone
    Truth be told it took my soul
    Still won't let it go

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    Supersonic goes
    Leaves rhythm but clocks run slow
    Don't need it I know

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    Nothing I've been told
    Cut to the crease I'm the fold
    Put the shit in whole

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    Gotta feel it now
    Living life with volume loud
    Need to hear the sound
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Whisper in my ear
    Still have time right now I'm here
    But not much longer

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    Don't have much to fear
    I'm still here the end is near
    Then I'll disappear

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    If you stay with me
    I'll know I'm a lucky man
    Then we can just breathe
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Filled up with his past
    Half his life wasted away
    Needs love of a girl

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    Drilled the pain alone
    Money buys a getaway
    Not love of a girl

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    Fills his night with thoughts
    All about and Of The Girl
    Chose a heavy path

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    Deals them off the top
    Before he's carried away
    Half life hand me downed

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    Won't say he's empty
    Fills his life up with the thoughts
    Of love Of The Girl
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Bells are ringing out
    Waves crash then go on their way
    Others walked away

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    The Man Of The Hour
    He's taking his final bow
    His goodbye for now

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    The young men pretend
    Where the old men comprehend
    Gospel of the land

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    The whole town came down
    He's taking his final bow
    It's goodbye for now

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    Roads he paved for me
    Broken seams and rusted signs
    Shows love his own way

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    The curtain comes down
    The man takes his final bow
    Goodbye just for now
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Routine was the theme
    Never imagined being
    Moved by Sleight Of Hand

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    Drifting on the side
    As if moved by Sleight Of Hand
    While dirt turned to sand

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    No time waves goodbye
    More time to dream to himself
    On the other side

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    Can't recall the plan
    Wandering just like a man
    Moved by Sleight Of Hand

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    When he reached the shore
    No new realizations
    In his clip-on world

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    A lost road he knew
    Like a book read in his sleep
    Endlessly by heart
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Synapse flash is slow
    The days pass where do they go
    Spend time while you can

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    Resign just let go
    Realize there's no control
    Just let God's Dice roll

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    There's no place to go
    Rusted minds will never know
    Try to walk away

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    Pouring too much thought
    Down a hole it's overwrought
    Will finish us off

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    Nothing in the cards
    It's driving your sanity
    Not your destiny

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    When will God's Dice roll
    This monkey minded living
    Is taking its toll

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    It's out of your hands
    You stumble as it crumbles
    Just beyond your grasp

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    God's Dice designing
    Your life and will are riding
    On your resigning
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    American dream
    Nothing in your bank for me
    I'm disbeleiving

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    An unasked question
    Long Gone in a tail light fade
    Answer's far away

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    This place brings me down
    I will be what I could be
    Away from this town

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    Leave this all behind
    Long Gone letting go of all
    Won't look back this time

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    This has no feeling
    Nothing is everything
    Then I'll have it all
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