Pearl Jam Haiku Challenge

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  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Time of Mad Season
    Inside Job is good reason
    Electric Phase stun

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    State Of Love And Trust
    First it's boom and then it's bust
    Broken hearts get crushed

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    State Of Love And Trust
    Burns out before it can rust
    Passion dries like dust

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    State Of Love And Trust
    It's no place for cheating lust
    Or fake air that's brushed

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    State Of Love And Trust
    You have to do what you must
    When your life is rushed

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    Do all that you must
    For the State Of Love And Trust
    There's time to adjust
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    The Love Boat Captain
    Finds that love can not be found
    Runs the boat aground
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Don't Go on me now
    If I walked this road alone
    I wouldn't know how

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    Thou shalt not attempt
    To force thy will or thy way
    Unto anyone
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    He's a Backspacer
    Gets some gots sum gets it on
    A leaves no tracer
  • olderman
    olderman Posts: 1,765
    an act of mercy
    just another sleight of hand
    kill fears with murder
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Just a Backspacer
    Gets there sooner or later
    Not a speed racer

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    He's a Backspacer
    Wine guzzler not taster
    Not a shit facer

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    Where's the Backspacer
    The edit cut and paster
    Cross out eraser

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    Time for Backspacer
    Not a cookie cut crazer
    Beamed like a laser
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    It's the Backspacer
    Riding shotgun with phaser
    Galaxy chaser

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    Where's the Backspacer
    Drinking straight up no chaser
    Who's on first baser

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    What's the Backspacer
    A make sure just in caser
    Not a lose facer

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    Get the Backspacer
    A wore it out replacer
    Amazing gracer
  • edvedderrocks
    edvedderrocks Posts: 1,001
    can't wait to see Ed
    will we meet after the show
    just a dream of mine :mrgreen:
    "I knew all the rules, but the rules did not know me. Guaranteed."

    1996 Merriweather, MD; 1998 Camden, NJ; 2000 Camden, NJ; 2003 Camden, NJ; 2005 Philly, PA; 2006 Camden, NJ(nights 1 & 2); 2006 Arnhem, NED; 2008 Camden, NJ(nights 1 & 2), Washington DC, MSG(night 2) 2009 Philly Spectrum Shows(nights 1,2,3,4) 2010 Hartford,CT and MSG(night 2)

    ED Solo - 2008 Washington DC, 2009 Philly, PA(nights 1&2)*Met Eddie =)
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Going nowhere fast
    Then Do The Evolution
    Nature's solution

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    Right behind the stage
    Throw the house lights on the choir
    For twenty ten fire
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Sporting Three Fish Tone
    On a bassman's holiday
    Has so much to say
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    White Male A's stood tall
    Rule the world authority
    Now it's time to crawl

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    White Male A's on call
    Money bagged authority
    Watch the dollar fall

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    White Male A's last call
    Gun and badge authority
    Up against the wall

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    Who will think for us
    With a brain like JFK
    It's back in the day
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    The Rearview Mirror
    Where past fears won't disappear
    Set down crown's still there
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    The truth a man wields
    Will bring him more than he yields
    Out here in the fields

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    Shoe the shoeless soles
    Get some ground beneath their feet
    Take it to the street
  • CHANGEinWAVES
    CHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    keep em coming :D
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • Thoughts_Arrive
    Thoughts_Arrive Melbourne, Australia Posts: 15,165
    This guys good.
    He has won the challenge, yet he keeps rubbing his opponents into the dirt! :D
    Adelaide 17/11/2009, Melbourne 20/11/2009, Sydney 22/11/2009, Melbourne (Big Day Out Festival) 24/01/2014
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Nobody can win
    There isn't a thing to choose
    Nobody can lose

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    Write your own haiku
    It takes a moment to do
    You can rhyme it too
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Why Go home belong
    Trying new things that's not wrong
    Leaving Here and Gone

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    This time he's Got Some
    Free ideas and advice
    Can you pay the price

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    Jar up grandma's jamb
    Stir it with the Severed Hand
    Wash it down with sand
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Gentle pro-life hand
    Baby saved then kill a man
    Brave new world is planned
  • Thoughts_Arrive
    Thoughts_Arrive Melbourne, Australia Posts: 15,165
    SD533 wrote:
    Nobody can win
    There isn't a thing to choose
    Nobody can lose

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    Write your own haiku
    It takes a moment to do
    You can rhyme it too

    :lol: that reminds me of some primary school song for learning.
    Adelaide 17/11/2009, Melbourne 20/11/2009, Sydney 22/11/2009, Melbourne (Big Day Out Festival) 24/01/2014
  • SD533
    SD533 Posts: 221
    Star Dog Champions
    Apple falls next to the tree
    Green River runs free

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    When life is wasted
    Parachutes just let you down
    More is lost than found

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    How will God's Dice fall
    There's no guarantee at all
    Crapshot off The Wall

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