Pearl Jam Haiku Challenge

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  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    White Male A's stood tall
    Rule the world authority
    Now it's time to crawl

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    White Male A's on call
    Money bagged authority
    Watch the dollar fall

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    White Male A's last call
    Gun and badge authority
    Up against the wall

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    Who will think for us
    With a brain like JFK
    It's back in the day
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The Rearview Mirror
    Where past fears won't disappear
    Set down crown's still there
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The truth a man wields
    Will bring him more than he yields
    Out here in the fields

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    Shoe the shoeless soles
    Get some ground beneath their feet
    Take it to the street
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    keep em coming :D
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • Thoughts_ArriveThoughts_Arrive Posts: 15,165
    This guys good.
    He has won the challenge, yet he keeps rubbing his opponents into the dirt! :D
    Adelaide 17/11/2009, Melbourne 20/11/2009, Sydney 22/11/2009, Melbourne (Big Day Out Festival) 24/01/2014
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Nobody can win
    There isn't a thing to choose
    Nobody can lose

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    Write your own haiku
    It takes a moment to do
    You can rhyme it too
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Why Go home belong
    Trying new things that's not wrong
    Leaving Here and Gone

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    This time he's Got Some
    Free ideas and advice
    Can you pay the price

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    Jar up grandma's jamb
    Stir it with the Severed Hand
    Wash it down with sand
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Gentle pro-life hand
    Baby saved then kill a man
    Brave new world is planned
  • Thoughts_ArriveThoughts_Arrive Posts: 15,165
    SD533 wrote:
    Nobody can win
    There isn't a thing to choose
    Nobody can lose

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    Write your own haiku
    It takes a moment to do
    You can rhyme it too

    :lol: that reminds me of some primary school song for learning.
    Adelaide 17/11/2009, Melbourne 20/11/2009, Sydney 22/11/2009, Melbourne (Big Day Out Festival) 24/01/2014
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Star Dog Champions
    Apple falls next to the tree
    Green River runs free

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    When life is wasted
    Parachutes just let you down
    More is lost than found

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    How will God's Dice fall
    There's no guarantee at all
    Crapshot off The Wall
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Don't Push Me Pull Me
    I Got ID you can't see
    I Am Mine not yours

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    Not much left to say
    No one there cares anyway
    Hide Your Love Away

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    Days you'll Soon Forget
    Lost in the Blue Red And Gray
    After Parting Ways

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    Put on Crown Of Thorns
    Break out those old frayed and torns
    Rise above the scorns
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    But now here you are!
    You're finally here and I'm....
    ....not my former shelf
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Won't Get Fooled Again
    Helpless Dancer goes nowhere
    He's already there

    Don't know Who You Are
    Is It Me or in my head
    Whiskey Man is dead

    Who Are You they say
    Bell Boy did you work today
    Don't take him away

    Who's Next to be found
    Pounding stages like a clown
    Love reigns then pours down

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    Evacuation
    Clear out the floor and the air
    Get away from here

    Evacuation
    Empty out before the scare
    Grab up all that's dear

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    Insignificance
    Building bombs is circumspect
    Don't see lives get wrecked

    Insignificance
    Dot sizing in introspect
    Will to live's not checked
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Rock in the free world
    All about and Of The Girl
    Bring it all back home

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    Rock in the free world
    Looking for Cinnamon Girl
    Lotta Love is there

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    Rock in the free world
    Fuckin' Up a Piece Of Crap
    They still want it back

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    Rock in the free world
    Powderfinger on the bank
    Something in the air

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    Rock in the free world
    Burnt out basement down the stairs
    Give them back some glares

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    Loosegroove attitude
    No corporate servitude
    Dissolves In Thin Air
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    I'm Thumbing My Way
    Searching for the road back to
    All Those Yesterdays

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    Swing the Merkin Ball
    Lower the boom on the roof
    Then tear down the wall
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    A breath and a scream
    Knock knock knockin' on heaven's
    Door way to a dream
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Save You from your self
    I wouldn't offer my help
    To anyone else

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    Read their Riot Act
    They make up their rules before
    It's time to react

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    It's a Green Disease
    Keeping the mind ill at ease
    With karmic debris

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    Half Full wants some more
    Green Disease fills up the glass
    Spills it on the floor
  • DangDangDangDang Posts: 1,551
    How long and winded!
    What's that up the road....a head?
    Down the road.. A piece?
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Worldwide Suicide
    You can try to get off now
    Or crash with the ride

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    Worldwide Suicide
    Mankind has got to decide
    To slow down the ride

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    Around The Bend then
    Sometimes you can find your shelf
    A book on your self

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    Marker In The Sand
    It's made by the Sleight Of Hand
    Fools don't understand
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    edited June 2009
    What are we left with
    Oh Very Young forever
    You can change your mind

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    The Tunnel Of Love
    One Step Forward Two Steps Back
    No heaven above

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    Let your song be sung
    You can be Forever Young
    Open for the sun

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    What is living for
    Let My Love Open The Door
    Get up off the floor

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    Dirty Frank dealing
    From the bottom of the deck
    Ace in hole wheeling

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    Can't Keep going far
    Cropdusted left out to Ghost
    Get Right where You Are

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  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Almost Comatose
    Exalted and grandiose
    Feel it getting close

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    Love can ease the pain
    It arrives on winds of change
    Like A Hurricane

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    There is no Ceiling
    That can hold what I'm feeling
    Setting Forth leaving

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    A Glorified G
    Got a gun but can't shoot straight
    He's loaded with hate

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    Late long time ago
    On Monkeywrench Radio
    DJ after show

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    A Dead Man Walking
    Hear his Footsteps in the hall
    Echoes his last call
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Hard To Imagine
    Not on the Porch in Lukin
    Where's Leatherman been

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    Amnesia defense
    Forgive your past it's nonsense
    In the Present Tense

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    Black Red Yellow eyes
    No Code needed to get through
    There is no Sweet Lew

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    Where's the Patriot
    Start the laugh out loud riot
    Make sure it's quiet

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    Jeremy's spoken
    Spirit no longer broken
    Now he's wide open
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    A time for Drifting
    Try to find the other shore
    Sad songs mean much more

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    Walk where giants stride
    Following The Strangest Tribe
    To the other side

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    Hey lay down your arms
    This heart needs to rest in peace
    Let the firing cease
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    All the world's a stage
    Draw down the final curtain
    The end is certain

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    The End of something
    That was never meant to last
    Leave it to the past

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    The End Of The Road
    Back to where it all began
    No more to unload
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Freedom for Tibet
    Dalai Lama's don't forget
    C Average set

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    Bee Girl be a girl
    Don't mind the tilta-whirl world
    Let your heart unfurl

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    Mophandle Mama
    Shakes with Tremor Christ trauma
    No time for drama

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    What was still will be
    Pee Are Eye Vee Eh See Why
    The best things are free
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Ten Club ticket show
    The New Regal Theater
    Head cold snots on flow

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    Breathe Breathe what is there
    Send out your Love On The Air
    Pretend not to care

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    Not playing their game
    Single Video Theory
    No more MTV
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    The teenaged wasteds
    Don't have a clue or a plan
    Get back to the land

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    Sometimes things end fast
    Never know which kiss is last
    People leave this world
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Nothing As It Seems
    A hundred thieves cast a spell
    Dreams all die in hell

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    Sewn up in the bag
    Pledge my grievance to the flag
    It's a shoeshine rag
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Hitchhiker on board
    Looking at me look at you
    Don't know what to do

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    No half-ass half way
    It's got to be All Or None
    Go All Night all day
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Rain Dogs and Lost Dogs
    Try to find their way back home
    Stay out for too long

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    Pilate's got a dog
    Turn it over flip it round
    It sounds like a god

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    She's out on her own
    Way beyond the radar zone
    Line high all Alone

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    Light years from me now
    Stardust since you went away
    Here again somehow
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