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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'anna, it's beth. open the door so we can talk.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Jeez who the hell do you people think you are. I am in the shower for crying out loud. Let me have some peace will you? Now get....., just hold each others hand and leave me be.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    for want of something to do, gerard pressed his ear to the door. he looked at freya and beth.

    'well the shower is running. we should give her some room.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well if we are gonna give her some room, then lets give her this one she is using it anyway. Beth smiled to show she was only joking.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    in the shower, anna sat under the stream of hot water. her hair in clumps clogging up the drain. the scissors still in her hands pressing against her skin. she'd been sitting like this for nearly ten minutes. if she could, she'd sit here until the water ran out. instead she dropped the scissors and stood up. she ran her hand through her now short hair. turning the water off she stepped out of the bath and naked walked across the hall to her room. she closed the door behind her. she counted to five before there was a knock. anna went to the door and pulled it open.

    'please just leave me frey..........'

    it was not her sister but gerard standing in front of her. to anna it didn't even seem to her that he noticed she was naked, he was so intent on what she had done to her hair.

    'it's only hair gerard.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Eumh yes it is only hair. It will grow back. But still you look like a scarecrow.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard wrapped his arms around anna. and amazingly she allowed him to do it. he felt her body sag into his, so he held her tighter. she was crying. it was then that gerard noticed the lack of mattress on the bed.

    'um sweetie, someone stole your bed. do you know that?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I couldn't help but laugh despite the fact that I didn't want to laugh.

    Yes I know it is gone Gérrard, I know.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the look on anna's face was the saddest he had ever seen.

    'he really hurt me gerard.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yes I know honey, I know. Do you want to stay else where tonight and make some changes here?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna pulled away from gerard. and reached for her kimono. she wrapped it around her body and looked gerard with some confusion and a little anger in her eyes.

    'no. no. this is my home. i'm not gonna let him drive me away. my whole life is here.'

    she started to pace and gerard thought it prudent to let the matter drop.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Do you want me to see if I can make an apointment with the hairdresser for today?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'what i need is to see dr mcintyre. do me a favour gerard, tell beth and my sister that i'm okay. but i want to be left alone for now.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    with the strength of a right and a crossover tune
    the living spirit of power is here in the room
    a moment from yesterday returns
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Bu2
    Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    and, damn, how it burns.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    catefrances wrote:
    'what i need is to see dr mcintyre. do me a favour gerard, tell beth and my sister that i'm okay. but i want to be left alone for now.'


    OK I will, but I don't want to leave you. If it is what you want then we will go. Make me a promise though, I want you to call me tonight.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna looked gerard dead in the eye.

    ' you know me better than that. i don't promise. but if i'm not asleep and i feel like talking then i will call you. how's that?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You don't have to talk to me I just want to hear you and that's it, no big story needed. Just don't be a stranger.

    He kissed me and walked into the next room.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i heard the three of them talking but not really what they were saying. i heard beth raise her voice and freya cut her off. i stood in my doorway while gerard and beth left. as she walked back across the room, freya looked up and saw me. she smiled but didn't approach. i silently thank her for that. i wanted a drink so bad i could taste it. i wanted to see arlo.
    going back into my room i pulled on a pair of jeans and a hoodie. i grabbed my sneakers and carried them into the living room. freya was sitting on the sofa and i sat down next to her, pulling on my shoes.

    ' i need to see arlo.'

    i stood up half expecting her to stop me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I thought I would go into the city and pick you up a matras. Would that be alright with you?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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