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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'oh anna come on. i'm not gonna have you sitting in a heap feeling sorry for yourself. you're stronger than that. i know it and you know it.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I lifted my head and wanted to get angry, instead I stuck out my tongue and replied;" I guess".
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya smiled.

    'so where are you sleeping tonight?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya smiled.

    'so where are you sleeping tonight?'

    'i mean you just turfed your bed out the window and all.'

    damn no editing. :p
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What did you seriously think I would sleep in that bed ever again? Come on you must understand that.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the phone rang and freya went to answer it. as she got up, i told her i didn't want to talk to ANYONE.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • "Hello this the Thelma-Cucos Laboratories, we wanted to get a hold of Arlo Rodriguez, his test results just came back positive.. err uh, we would like to speak to him about some culture results, is he available?"
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    the phone rang and freya went to answer it. as she got up, i told her i didn't want to talk to ANYONE.


    Not even you know who?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    freya annoyed me when she tried to be cute. i didn't answer her and much to her credit she didn't wait for one. i heard her talking and knew it was arlo on the other end. just the thought of him made me feel dirty for what had happened. what i had allowed to happen. i could feel the rage building up inside me again. i stood up and as i got to the bedroom door, freya appeared in front of me. i didn't want her talking to me.

    'i'm gonna take a shower.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I heard Freya arguing that I needed to take the phone, but I didn't want to. I closed the door and let her deal with Arlo on the phone.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i had just undressed when she threw the door open. i stared at her.

    'what the fuck is wrong with you freya. get out!'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why didn't you wan t to talk to him? You have to tell him what happened, I can't do that for you. You will have to talk to him eventually.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'GET OUT! freya. leave me alone. for fuck's sake just leave me alone.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Sure I'll go, but please call him Anna.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i slammed the door shut after her, leaning against it. what was i doing? things with arlo were going so well and now this. i know i should talk to him but right now i didn't want to talk to anyone. most of all a do-good sister who thought everything would turn out alright if only people would speak to each other. i know freya meant well, but she was driving me crazy hovering so close. i sank to the floor wrapping my arms around my legs. resting my head on my knees didn't stop the crying.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey Tanya! Where have you been? I didn't see you in awhile. Why didn't you stay here?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    *disclaimer: when karma wrote tanya he really meant beth.he just couldn't
    edit it :)*

    beth looked at gerard.

    'you're in a good mood.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why yes I am dear Beth. Do you fancy a stroll and an icecream on this sunnyday?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i don't eat dairy but i'm glad i ran into you.'

    gerard waiting for beth to continue.

    'do you know meredith walsh?'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Sort of, yes. Why?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»