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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Maybe you should call Arlo first. Just to be sure. If you call an ablulance there will be questions.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i looked at freya. she still had the sculpture in her hand.

    'and what the hell can arlo do? help us roll the body in a rug and dump it off the nearest bridge. no freya, he needs an ambulance.'

    i turned my back on my sister and started towards the phone. i was running on auto pilot and i didn't want that pig dying on my floor. i could feel freya's presence as i dialled the numbers. i dropped onto the sofa and rested my head in my left hand. i cleared my throat when i heard a voice on the other end of the line.

    'a man broke into my place and attacked me. he needs help.'

    i gave the woman my address and then we waited. freya disappeared back into my bedroom. i stayed on the sofa.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I called out for my sister because for some reason I didn't trust her being alone in the other room. Freya can you hand me a pen please?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    she didn't answer.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I dropped the phone and got up from the couch.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i reached my bedroom door i could hear freya talking quietly to vincent. so obviously the bastard wasn't dead. i stood in the doorway not trusting myself to get any closer. vincent was sitting up, leaning against my bed. freya was kneeling beside him. with blood all over his face and shirt it looked worse than it was.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Truth be told a big part of me was sorry for that. At least now I didn't have to explain having a dead body in my bedroom. I return to the phone to hear the weird mellow music on the other end was still playing.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'hello. someone call an ambulance?'

    i looked up to see two men walking through my door. i replaced the phone and stood up. behind them i could see a policeman.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I regreted that I didn't do as Freya suggested. I would have liked Arlo here, or anyone with a clear head for that matter.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'yeah he's in the bedroom'

    i indicated which way that was. i started to follow them but the police stepped into my path.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    If you'd be so kind as to sit down over there. He pointed to one of my chairs at the dinner table. Someone will be with you shortly.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    what a mess. i couldn't believe i was the one getting the brush off.

    'so you're more concerned with him than you are with me. i was the one who was attacked.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You will get the chance to tell your story. Just sit down for now.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i didn't want to sit down. i wanted these people out of my place. i wanted that son of a bitch to rot in hell. i started for the front door and felt a hand on my arm. i shrugged it off turning to face whoever it was.

    'don't touch me.'

    it was one of the police officers.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Lady I need you to calm down and sit at the table. I will come and talk to you in a minute. Now please sit down.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'lady? don't patronise me. i need to get out of here.'

    i left him standing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I was held to a stand by another policeman who stood and in the doorway and blocked my way out.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'get your hands off me.'

    i was starting to lose any composure i thought i had. this man who i didn't know was holding me and i couldn't stand him being so close.

    'let me go.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I can do that, if you sit down at the table so we can take your statement. So all you need to do is calm down a bit and all will be fine.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i looked at him like he was speaking a language i couldn't understand. i opened my mouth to say something but a voice interrupted.

    'let her go sean.'

    i turned to see another man a bit more than an arm's length away. he was older. maybe in his mid thirties. i'd never been good at gauging people's ages.

    'she's not running away. she just needs some space. let's give it to her. surely we can do that.'

    he smiled and the cop named sean backed off.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say