Pearl Jam Haiku Challenge

SD533

Hold the hand of love
Try to shake the cancer off
It's surmountable

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Let the game begin
Love Boat Captain take the reigns
Steer us to the clear

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It's been said and sung
But it can't be heard enough
All you need is love

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Hold me so it's true
When all's lost there will be you
That's all I believe

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The young can lose hope
They can't see beyond today
The wise know the way

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Mix the light to gray
It's an art to live with pain
Love is all you need

SD533

Leave yourself behind
Take your pick then get some kicks
Want to take a ride

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Look out below now
All I fear is falling down
This is my way home

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Feet can't find the floor
Dragons after three or four
Can I get five more

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See a wedding band
Not sure that I understand
On a Severed Hand

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I can't close my eyes
Look around I see the sound
I'm not falling down

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Sound waves keep me calm
To explore and not explode
I don't lose control

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On another plane
Preternatural power
Able to maintain

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Once our self dissolves
Tearing through all that we know
We are free to grow

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Do we really know
What is human and what's more
Answer waits at home

SD533

I keep holding out
Will the memories stay clear
When you're gone from here

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Wishing out the days
Try to meet you in my dream
Almost next to me

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Planned what I would say
Know that I still remain true
Since you slipped away

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There's an open door
There from wherever you are
For you to Come Back

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So you had to go
Would have lost you anyway
Come Back it's okay

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Linger through the day
You're gone now so far away
Strange you feel so close

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Come Back I'll be here
Waiting for the light to shine
Through this broken roof

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Come Back I'm still here
Only thing I feel is rain
I had to remain

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I won't fall apart
Come Back it's okay Come Back
I'm still here Come Back

SD533

Not gonna lose you
Help yourself help me Save You
Let's pick up your soul

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I'm not leaving here
You hear what you want to hear
I'm selfish and clear

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Let's pick up your will
Something has taken control
Let's beat it let's go

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Be lost without you
I'm not living without you
You could have it all

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Let yourself fall now
You helped me now I'll help you
I'm right below you

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Treble in your head
The only thing you can hear
Fuck me if I care

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Don't go on us now
You're too important to us
We still need you here

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Let's Save You for you
Your will is fat and lazy
What's there is still you

SD533

Better say it loud
It's better now than too late
Ride Amongst The Waves

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High Amongst The Waves
Put away the early grave
Have a soul that's saved

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You can see you're strong
Light comes through the clouds in rays
All the wounds are gone

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Back the early days
You were young and thus amazed
Suddenly it's changed

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If it's not for love
Just you and me and nothing
Would I be drowning

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Seen it wotk both ways
House of cards where tears are saved
Up Amongst The Waves

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When there's nothing more
Tears are just waterfalling
Fill our reservoir

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Stay let's Just Breathe
Meet you on the other side
Hold me till I die

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Nothing would you take
Everything that you gave
Wonder more each day

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You're all that I see
As I look upon your face
Stay with me Just Breathe

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Someday we must go
Every life has an end
Some will sit alone

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Some folks just have one
Don't count the ones that you love
Others they got none

The Champ

Oh wait, I just read the first page..lol..I thought it was a general haiku challenge, but instead we are to copy/incorporate Pearl Jam material....sorry for my irrelevant posts ..

Ms. Haiku

the slam
and the frame shatters on the floor
force of nature

DangDang

Took a walk too soon
Felt the brain wired into me
At the speed of Moon

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The human psyche--Oh!
A soul reduced to a word
I wished was unheard


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DangDang

SD533
was the Haiku King. (Where did
he go?) (I don't know.)

tremors

Immortality
today went through me like strings
Chased away his blues

DangDang

Don't I want to rest
On yesterday's paper plate
No--theres pist or fist

tremors

Up too late tonight
Nothing seems to fit my mood
Should I light the match?

rollings

do not enter this
resist whats been said before
haiku god bless you

tremors

of course she is right
but a bored and lonely man
has to make ends meet

pinkbutterfly

He kissed me once
I had chills for a whole month
Just imagine more

pandora

I live in the South
I am waiting for the Love
Pearl Jam please come back

Godfather.

pandora wrote:

I live in the South
I am waiting for the Love
Pearl Jam please come back

hi Pandi, I hate to sound....stupid ! but could you please expain what a haiku is or how they're written..please

Godfather.

pandora

Godfather. wrote:

pandora wrote:

I live in the South
I am waiting for the Love
Pearl Jam please come back

hi Pandi, I hate to sound....stupid ! but could you please expain what a haiku is or how they're written..please

Godfather.

I had to look too...

first post page explains

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

its funny JB and I were just talking about Haiku in the hot tub Saturday night
we couldn't remember how they are written and now I can't remember
why we were talking about them

pinkbutterfly

Reds, browns, golds abound
Falling leaves blanket the ground
Stroll through God's painting

pinkbutterfly

He stroked my hair
I gently rubbed his back
Please don't wake me up