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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i crouched down next to him and kiss his lips.

    'goodbye arlo.'

    before he could stop me or before i changed my mind, i walked out of the bathroom.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I walked back to my place. I wanted to go to bed and sleep the rest of the day. What I really wanted was to sleep the rest of my life, but I knew that wasn't going to happen.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as my foot touched the bottom step i heard someone call my name. i turned to see detective farrell close his car door and approach me. i sighed. he was not someone i wanted to talk to.

    'anna, you got a minute?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Not really. No.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Not really. No.

    Does that make a difference?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i started up the stairs he spoke again.

    'i thought you should know, your brother in law made bail.'

    i swung around so fast that i had to grab the railing to stop myself from falling.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    What? How is that fucking possible?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    he hesitated.

    'well? who would bail that son of a bitch out?'

    and then it hit me.

    'freya'

    no. that couldn't be right. could it? why would she do that, how could she do that to me. he had to be mistaken. i shook my head.

    'you're wrong. she wouldn't do that.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Think what you like. That is my story.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'your story. what the fuck does that mean?'

    before detective farrell could answer, i tore up the steps and through the front door. i heard him call my name. taking the stairs two at a time, i paid him no attention. reaching my door i banged on it calling freya's name while i tried to get my key into the lock. bursting through the door i found the place empty. i stalked up the hall opening every door angrily. freya wasn't here. i spun around and saw a man standing just inside my door.

    'get the fuck out of my house. i didn't invite you in.'

    as i advanced on him, detective farrell didn't move. when i tried to push him backwards out the door, he grabbed my arms and held me. i tried to get loose but he held tight. i started to cry and lost the will to fight as my legs collapsed from underneath me. he came with me as i ended up on the floor.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    As I lay there on the floor with him knelling beside me I didn't know what to do. I didn't want to be alone right now. Yet I didn't want him to stay. Plainly saying what I wanted apparently didn't help.
    I tried to get myself together and act calmly which of course I wasn't. Maybe he would leave if he thought that there was nothing for him here.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    As I lay there on the floor with him kneeling beside me I didn't know what to do. I didn't want to be alone right now. Yet I didn't want him to stay. Plainly saying what I wanted apparently didn't help.
    I tried to get myself together and act calmly which of course I wasn't. Maybe he would leave if he thought that there was nothing for him here.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    as i moved to stand, he helped me to my feet. i took a deep breath.

    'you don't have to stay detective. i'm fine.'

    i walked towards the kitchen.

    'you want a drink? god knows i could do with one right about now.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No I am fine as I am, thank you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i continued into the kitchen. picking up a bottle and holding it in my hand made me stop. what was i doing? this was just bullshit. i swung around and hurled the bottle against the wall. it hit a painting dead centre and shattered, spraying alcohol and glass everywhere. and tearing a hole in the canvas. i screamed and swept everything that was on the bench, onto the floor. it was then that detective farrell appeared at the door. he seemed not to want to come any closer.

    'you feel better now?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Not yet but a few more things destoryed and I'll be getting there.
    I opened up my fridge to see if I had anything non alcoholic.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i closed the door in frustration. detetcive farrell's presence was becoming annoying to me.

    'what are you still doing here detective?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    He spoke softly so I couldn't hear him through the closed door. Smart ass, two can play that game. After that thought there came a calm over me. I opened the balcony door in my kitchen and stepped into the pale sunlight.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i watched as people went about their morning routines going to work. walking the dog. ferrying their kids to school. i was still angry at freya, but i could understand why she supported vincent. it pains me to admit that she loves that son of a bitch and that she's under the impression that she needs him. i guess she's just as fucked up as i am. i imagine that she told him that she was pregnant and he convinced her that the best thing was for them to be together for the baby and how he wwas so so sorry and this changes everything and that he promises he won't ever hit her again. why do woman fall for that line of bullshit? i turned around to find, yet again, detective farrell standing in the doorway.

    'i'm not gonna jump if that's what you're worried about'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I guess I made it sound too hostile. He didn't speak, but his look said more than he could have said.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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