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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Tell me

    Which way to go
    Tell me which way to look
    Away or inside
    Show me

    Something from the deep
    Pull up something that flashes
    Makes me crack
    A smile, or a heart string
    Tell me

    Why it's not what I wanted
    Why I'm not what you wanted
    Why I am what you wanted

    Make me

    Believe in something
    For tonight
    Something more solid
    Than firefly light
    Than candle wax
    Than what we had before
    From before
    We knew better
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    Tell me

    Which way to go
    Tell me which way to look
    Away or inside
    Show me

    Something from the deep
    Pull up something that flashes
    Makes me crack
    A smile, or a heart string
    Tell me

    Why it's not what I wanted
    Why I'm not what you wanted
    Why I am what you wanted

    Make me

    Believe in something
    For tonight
    Something more solid
    Than firefly light
    Than candle wax
    Than what we had before
    From before
    We knew better
    Nice, very nice
    I remember..... before I knew better
    for me
    oblivious was kind of comforting

    really like this

    'Something from the deep
    Pull up something that flashes
    Makes me crack
    A smile, or a heart string'

    I live for that...to feel

    really great thanks for sharing tremors :D
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Happy Birthday Pandora!?
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    Happy Birthday Pandora!?
    Wow!
    Now you hit me :lol:

    Thanks friend :D
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    Happy Birthday Pandora!?
    Wow!
    Now you hit me :lol:

    Thanks friend :D

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    Sorry, I can't afford a cake!

    Make a wish tho
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    Happy Birthday Pandora!?
    Wow!
    Now you hit me :lol:

    Thanks friend :D

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    Sorry, I can't afford a cake!

    Make a wish tho
    oh pretty....
    I wish for cake ;):lol:
    I went to the store and couldn't decide on one, I'm useless.
    It was between coconut or german chocolate...now I have neither :lol:
    My hearts desire, my wish is love and happy times for you and all my friends!
    Thank you for remembering me :D You not only write beautifully you have a beautiful heart.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    A cake for Pandora
    It's a shame I can't bake
    Her numbers are double
    And always she cares
    A soft heart beating
    Too good for this world
    She takes the trouble
    To reach out and touch
    I know her from somewhere
    I know her from here
    She always gives something
    And don't ask for much
    Happy Birthday!


    Sorry it's not quite Shakespeare - it's early morning!
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    A cake for Pandora
    It's a shame I can't bake
    Her numbers are double
    And always she cares
    A soft heart beating
    Too good for this world
    She takes the trouble
    To reach out and touch
    I know her from somewhere
    I know her from here
    She always gives something
    And don't ask for much
    Happy Birthday!


    Sorry it's not quite Shakespeare - it's early morning!

    It's the best! Pretty and sweet :D

    You made my day!

    Thank you!

    PS....
    that's a keeper for me.... for always
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    A cake for Pandora
    It's a shame I can't bake
    Her numbers are double
    And always she cares
    A soft heart beating
    Too good for this world
    She takes the trouble
    To reach out and touch
    I know her from somewhere
    I know her from here
    She always gives something
    And don't ask for much
    Happy Birthday!


    Sorry it's not quite Shakespeare - it's early morning!

    It's the best! Pretty and sweet :D

    You made my day!

    Thank you!

    PS....
    that's a keeper for me.... for always


    You're welcome! ;)
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  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Perseverance furthers at the South West
    Every man must take his place
    Every man must have his day
    Fragile surface tension pops
    Too easily
    Must vanish then reform
    Pay respect to those who go before
    Who have come
    Who have tried
    Who have failed
    Who have stayed
    Tried to penetrate this blackness
    With words too much their own
    Only to be shunned, ignored, abused
    Ridiculed, reviled
    Take heed of those who tried before
    Take heed of those who have stayed
    Take lessons from those who still write
    Unafraid
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  • i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:

    Yeah I saw that thread. I think it's a good idea! :D

    Your poem earlier in this thread has had a big effect on me recently actually - the Evil Man one - totally changed what I was writing about in this section for a while. Think I may come back to other subjects soon though.
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  • tremors wrote:
    i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:

    Yeah I saw that thread. I think it's a good idea! :D

    Your poem earlier in this thread has had a big effect on me recently actually - the Evil Man one - totally changed what I was writing about in this section for a while. Think I may come back to other subjects soon though.
    thanx :D i try , and ive read some of the stuff uve posted and i luv it
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    tremors wrote:
    i had this idea for pj skool supplies so i started a forum for it called WE NEED PEARL JAM SCHOOL SUPPLIES im trying to get as many people possible to agree so we kan make it happen please help :!: :!:

    Yeah I saw that thread. I think it's a good idea! :D

    Your poem earlier in this thread has had a big effect on me recently actually - the Evil Man one - totally changed what I was writing about in this section for a while. Think I may come back to other subjects soon though.
    thanx :D i try , and ive read some of the stuff uve posted and i luv it

    Thanks. I thought the evil man was very thought provoking and showed a lot of insight. You should keep writing.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
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    Cyber Psychic

    fingers lightly stream

    pouring warm and cold
    words across a black mat sky

    no here or there

    only time reflects
    the vacuum we've created

    orbiting

    the shields are up

    the truth revolves
    yet in another lie

    empty eyes
    hold the soul
    that whispers tainted trust

    whispers from an empty heart
    in blackness
    no love's light
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
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    No one came....

    The tiny head lies wet from tears in his crib in the dark.
    New to this hell...his hell.
    His stomach gnaws with hunger. His thumb that is all to satisfy.
    His wimpers turn to cries.
    Cries turn to screams
    answered by the evil that he must learn to endure.

    Day to day. Month by month. Year after year.
    No one came.

    The darkness envelopes his mind taking all the light of innocence with it.
    He learns the word from the evil he sees.
    Loveless gives room to hate.
    Hate gives him power, power to be anything but a victim,
    though he is now destined to forever be,
    just that.
    He is a victim of himself, of hate and of evil.
    He is a warrior.

    You will find him on a lonely road in the dark of night, waiting for an opportunity.
    He is the smiling stranger in a crowded subway, as he takes aim to punish the world.
    He is the bomber in a faraway land or a professional killer without the heart even for revenge.

    But he was once a child
    and he never had a chance.
    No one came.... and he never knew love.
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
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  • BinauralJamBinauralJam Posts: 14,158
    Half Full wrote:
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    That's Freaky
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    psychology.png

    OPEN-MINDED
    "Sitting here thinking....
    Does this sweater match my brains?"
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Half Full wrote:
    psychology.png

    OPEN-MINDED
    "Sitting here thinking....
    Does this sweater match my brains?"
    :lol: thats great!!! :lol:
  • pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    soldier_1407497c.jpg
    No one came....

    The tiny head lies wet from tears in his crib in the dark.
    New to this hell...his hell.
    His stomach gnaws with hunger. His thumb that is all to satisfy.
    His wimpers turn to cries.
    Cries turn to screams
    answered by the evil that he must learn to endure.

    Day to day. Month by month. Year after year.
    No one came.

    The darkness envelopes his mind taking all the light of innocence with it.
    He learns the word from the evil he sees.
    Loveless gives room to hate.
    Hate gives him power, power to be anything but a victim,
    though he is now destined to forever be,
    just that.
    He is a victim of himself, of hate and of evil.
    He is a warrior.

    You will find him on a lonely road in the dark of night, waiting for an opportunity.
    He is the smiling stranger in a crowded subway, as he takes aim to punish the world.
    He is the bomber in a faraway land or a professional killer without the heart even for revenge.

    But he was once a child
    and he never had a chance.
    No one came.... and he never knew love.

    beautiful Pandora

    i love your picture+poem posts :) great
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    pandora wrote:
    tremors wrote:
    soldier_1407497c.jpg
    No one came....

    The tiny head lies wet from tears in his crib in the dark.
    New to this hell...his hell.
    His stomach gnaws with hunger. His thumb that is all to satisfy.
    His wimpers turn to cries.
    Cries turn to screams
    answered by the evil that he must learn to endure.

    Day to day. Month by month. Year after year.
    No one came.

    The darkness envelopes his mind taking all the light of innocence with it.
    He learns the word from the evil he sees.
    Loveless gives room to hate.
    Hate gives him power, power to be anything but a victim,
    though he is now destined to forever be,
    just that.
    He is a victim of himself, of hate and of evil.
    He is a warrior.

    You will find him on a lonely road in the dark of night, waiting for an opportunity.
    He is the smiling stranger in a crowded subway, as he takes aim to punish the world.
    He is the bomber in a faraway land or a professional killer without the heart even for revenge.

    But he was once a child
    and he never had a chance.
    No one came.... and he never knew love.

    beautiful Pandora

    i love your picture+poem posts :) great
    Thank you! very kind of you :D
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    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • rollingsrollings Posts: 7,124
    psychology.png

    Note to Self:

    Note # 1 "Never let painters use my brain as a texture sponge again"
    Note # 2 "Never, never, never."
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    schizophrenia.jpg
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    Shards fracture and splinter
    DIgging in deep
    and jutting out like icicles
    Something for someone, anyone to grab
    Grab it hard, try to snap it off
    Only more jagged edges
    And the rest left sticking out of my fucking head

    For all to see?
    I used to think so
    So I practised the disguise
    Practised the mask
    Practised the blank look
    I can't have you reading my thoughts
    My every nerve, twitch, stumbled word
    Betrays the anxiety beneath
    The blank look
    The vacant look
    It helped me when the room turned on me
    When the mockery started

    All that effort though
    My papier mache mask
    I was held together with glue
    I celebrate the day it all came unstuck
    With relief
    I didn't ever wear that mask again
    The icicles left
    The jagged edges left
    And people got close enough to care
    Who knows if they'll ever come back
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  • Tell Me

    dont tell me who i am
    dont tell me what to do
    dont tell me where to go
    dont tell me wat to loose
    dont tell me how to dress
    dont tell me wat it is
    dont tell me wat to be
    dont tell me how to live

    i didnt ask so dont tell
    dont comment im a bitch
    cuz idc wat u think
    i dont care u beilive im just saying this
    im not talking sticks and stones
    and how words never harm
    even though they have more power than darkness into beyond

    dont tell me how to write
    dont tell me wen to sit
    dont tell me how to listen
    dont tell me one bit

    ur critisim i dnt need
    i dont care wat u think u see
    im not talking right or wrong
    screw wat ur concious says
    ur concious doesnt no me
    hasnt been in my head

    dont tell me im dumb
    dont tell me im smart
    im done with u
    done and gone

    i used to care wat u thought
    i used to care wat u said
    ur words like gospel
    replaying in my head

    i hated u
    but wanted wat u had all the same
    i feel rather stupid
    after i thought
    y wuld i want to be wat i hate
    hate not fueld by jealousy
    hate not fueld by pain
    hate for what u do
    hate for how u treat the people not like you
    diffrent and strange is better
    better than u
    u do the same thing under ur damn protective bubble
    tht boring routine tht remains the same

    all u do is make people feel likethey dont meen shit
    telling them to change for the sake of u
    not wanting to help
    only destroy
    making u feel less of a toy

    but i promise u one day
    u willgrow old
    or u will grow sick
    and u will look back on life
    and wish u were diffrent
    wish there was somthing tht made it change
    a special memmory worth being ur last thought
    somthing letting u no u have made ur mark
    somthing tht brings a smile as u slip away
    but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds

    so dont tell me who i am
    dont tell wat to do
    but there is one answer i seek from u
    tell me please
    wat the hell makes u beter than me?

    -for all the people that deal with the shit from the "popular kids" in skool

    wow, i loved this. very good, i can relate so much it's scary.
    "popular kids" - yep, i know the ones.
    thanks for writing this :)
  • tremors wrote:
    schizophrenia.jpg
    schizophrenia.jpg

    Shards fracture and splinter
    DIgging in deep
    and jutting out like icicles
    Something for someone, anyone to grab
    Grab it hard, try to snap it off
    Only more jagged edges
    And the rest left sticking out of my fucking head

    For all to see?
    I used to think so
    So I practised the disguise
    Practised the mask
    Practised the blank look
    I can't have you reading my thoughts
    My every nerve, twitch, stumbled word
    Betrays the anxiety beneath
    The blank look
    The vacant look
    It helped me when the room turned on me
    When the mockery started

    All that effort though
    My papier mache mask
    I was held together with glue
    I celebrate the day it all came unstuck
    With relief
    I didn't ever wear that mask again
    The icicles left
    The jagged edges left
    And people got close enough to care
    Who knows if they'll ever come back


    All that effort though
    My papier mache mask
    I was held together with glue
    I celebrate the day it all came unstuck
    With relief
    I didn't ever wear that mask again

    loved that especially
    it's hard when you don't know
    what the difference is
    between the mask
    and yourself

    hard to break a mask that's become a part of you
  • Tell Me

    dont tell me who i am
    dont tell me what to do
    dont tell me where to go
    dont tell me wat to loose
    dont tell me how to dress
    dont tell me wat it is
    dont tell me wat to be
    dont tell me how to live

    i didnt ask so dont tell
    dont comment im a bitch
    cuz idc wat u think
    i dont care u beilive im just saying this
    im not talking sticks and stones
    and how words never harm
    even though they have more power than darkness into beyond

    dont tell me how to write
    dont tell me wen to sit
    dont tell me how to listen
    dont tell me one bit

    ur critisim i dnt need
    i dont care wat u think u see
    im not talking right or wrong
    screw wat ur concious says
    ur concious doesnt no me
    hasnt been in my head

    dont tell me im dumb
    dont tell me im smart
    im done with u
    done and gone

    i used to care wat u thought
    i used to care wat u said
    ur words like gospel
    replaying in my head

    i hated u
    but wanted wat u had all the same
    i feel rather stupid
    after i thought
    y wuld i want to be wat i hate
    hate not fueld by jealousy
    hate not fueld by pain
    hate for what u do
    hate for how u treat the people not like you
    diffrent and strange is better
    better than u
    u do the same thing under ur damn protective bubble
    tht boring routine tht remains the same

    all u do is make people feel likethey dont meen shit
    telling them to change for the sake of u
    not wanting to help
    only destroy
    making u feel less of a toy

    but i promise u one day
    u willgrow old
    or u will grow sick
    and u will look back on life
    and wish u were diffrent
    wish there was somthing tht made it change
    a special memmory worth being ur last thought
    somthing letting u no u have made ur mark
    somthing tht brings a smile as u slip away
    but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds

    so dont tell me who i am
    dont tell wat to do
    but there is one answer i seek from u
    tell me please
    wat the hell makes u beter than me?

    -for all the people that deal with the shit from the "popular kids" in skool

    wow, i loved this. very good, i can relate so much it's scary.
    "popular kids" - yep, i know the ones.
    thanks for writing this :)

    thanks i really want to be a writer when i grow up and also work with disabled kids. i do alot of writing for school but when we have to write about school we're limited on topics, if i turned this in id probably get introuble, so it realy means alot when someone likes what i love to do, especialy since i cant get graded on it :)
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    Popular kids
    Make lousy adults
    They look back and ten years zapped by in a blink
    And they are there staring at the same kitchen sink
    Misfits, they got something to say
    They know why it matters to care
    They grow up quicker
    They grow up slower
    Making something of themselves
    And before long
    It passes
    Before long it passes
    And the misfits are the ones
    People listen to
    Value
    Respect
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