Snow in torrents
As a blanket sending me into hiding
Enforced captivity
From nature so much more palatable
Than from man
White banks rising outside my window
Making me feel warmer by the hour
No choice of where to go today
The obvious choice is here
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Snow in torrents
As a blanket sending me into hiding
Enforced captivity
From nature so much more palatable
Than from man
White banks rising outside my window
Making me feel warmer by the hour
No choice of where to go today
The obvious choice is here
can't get over it
where does it all come from?
always touching
always
peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
The wind arrived with her wings
Whistling through the secret places
Making her recede
Hugging the shadows
Her body melted
Her self, a whisper
Of something more solid
Long time ago
Her self becoming whispered
Feeling less real by the hour
And yet more alive
She dissolved into the sideboards
and blended into dark
The memory of being solid
Memory, flickering
Like the moth shielding the flame
Just one inch closer
Her body hisses
And released
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The wind arrived with her wings
Whistling through the secret places
Making her recede
Hugging the shadows
Her body melted
Her self, a whisper
Of something more solid
Long time ago
Her self becoming whispered
Feeling less real by the hour
And yet more alive
She dissolved into the sideboards
and blended into dark
The memory of being solid
Memory, flickering
Like the moth shielding the flame
Just one inch closer
Her body hisses
And released
another beautiful poem tremors
completely fits the weather right now, beautiful
The wind arrived with her wings
Whistling through the secret places
Making her recede
Hugging the shadows
Her body melted
Her self, a whisper
Of something more solid
Long time ago
Her self becoming whispered
Feeling less real by the hour
And yet more alive
She dissolved into the sideboards
and blended into dark
The memory of being solid
Memory, flickering
Like the moth shielding the flame
Just one inch closer
Her body hisses
And released
another beautiful poem tremors
completely fits the weather right now, beautiful
Yeah I liked this one. Might put it with the others in the Sanctuary thread, cos it kind of came out of thinking of such things, then reading poems here. Thanks electrixlovex
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The wind arrived with her wings
Whistling through the secret places
Making her recede
Hugging the shadows
Her body melted
Her self, a whisper
Of something more solid
Long time ago
Her self becoming whispered
Feeling less real by the hour
And yet more alive
She dissolved into the sideboards
and blended into dark
The memory of being solid
Memory, flickering
Like the moth shielding the flame
Just one inch closer
Her body hisses
And released
"Memory flickering" I love that
very beautiful poem Tremors...thanks for sharing here, Friend.
Hope your holiday was great and Happy New Year!..... a year filled with much happiness and flowing creativity
The wind arrived with her wings
Whistling through the secret places
Making her recede
Hugging the shadows
Her body melted
Her self, a whisper
Of something more solid
Long time ago
Her self becoming whispered
Feeling less real by the hour
And yet more alive
She dissolved into the sideboards
and blended into dark
The memory of being solid
Memory, flickering
Like the moth shielding the flame
Just one inch closer
Her body hisses
And released
"Memory flickering" I love that
very beautiful poem Tremors...thanks for sharing here, Friend.
Hope your holiday was great and Happy New Year!..... a year filled with much happiness and flowing creativity
Thanks Pandi, yes - nice holiday with my Mum and my brother in the hills. My Mum was sick but I think having her boys around helped her along. She was fighting fit when we left. Am now back home. But like Mick Jagger says I can't quite get no satisfaction! Where's the drug abusers' thread!? I think I could get high by proxy!
Yes I think 2011 we should all get creative, and post lots of great things in this thread, and then Chadwick can send it to the publishers, and we can get it leather bound and copyright cleared, with pictures and everything at the end of the year. I want a massive coffee table book!!
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Yes I think 2011 we should all get creative, and post lots of great things in this thread, and then Chadwick can send it to the publishers, and we can get it leather bound and copyright cleared, with pictures and everything at the end of the year. I want a massive coffee table book!![/quote]
an amazing idea!
i'm all for something like that
it would be awesome to have it to refer to
at certain times
you know
peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
Just now opened my folk art calendars JB buys for me each Christmas,
one for the kitchen, one for my office here.
I was looking again through the year past, each month a lovely country scene,
so detailed, each a celebration of our beautiful world.
Remembering the high points of 2010
Friends
PJ concerts
special days with family.
And hanging the new calendars...
the year to come
seeing special dates and the pictures for that month.....
wondering what the year will bring.
Life is good.
Life is a gift
Just now opened my folk art calendars JB buys for me each Christmas,
one for the kitchen, one for my office here.
I was looking again through the year past, each month a lovely country scene,
so detailed, each a celebration of our beautiful world.
Remembering the high points of 2010
Friends
PJ concerts
special days with family.
And hanging the new calendars...
the year to come
seeing special dates and the pictures for that month.....
wondering what the year will bring.
Life is good.
Life is a gift
don't get me started on the past year Pandi,... i would hate to get your thread locked.
Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
Just now opened my folk art calendars JB buys for me each Christmas,
one for the kitchen, one for my office here.
I was looking again through the year past, each month a lovely country scene,
so detailed, each a celebration of our beautiful world.
Remembering the high points of 2010
Friends
PJ concerts
special days with family.
And hanging the new calendars...
the year to come
seeing special dates and the pictures for that month.....
wondering what the year will bring.
Life is good.
Life is a gift
don't get me started on the past year Pandi,... i would hate to get your thread locked.
Uh Oh! please don't!!.....
this will be a good year, I feel it in my bones
Just now opened my folk art calendars JB buys for me each Christmas,
one for the kitchen, one for my office here.
I was looking again through the year past, each month a lovely country scene,
so detailed, each a celebration of our beautiful world.
Remembering the high points of 2010
Friends
PJ concerts
special days with family.
And hanging the new calendars...
the year to come
seeing special dates and the pictures for that month.....
wondering what the year will bring.
Life is good.
Life is a gift
don't get me started on the past year Pandi,... i would hate to get your thread locked.
Uh Oh! please don't!!.....
this will be a good year, I feel it in my bones
my lips are sealed. :silent:
Peace, Love.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention
My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.
My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
i totally get this tremors
i read what pandi wrote and i agree
in my case its too late
i've tried to mend wrongs i never even knew i committed
things are always so much different
when seen by other eyes
hope you have a second chance
jump on it if you get it.
peace,
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.
Yeah it's not always so bad. Just how I was feeling last night! I know it didn't really fit with what had gone before here, but I didn't know where best to post this one. Thanks for your words Pandi. I think I'll be able to find some edifying words in the next few days. Life is alright. As long as you have some money for yourself and live in safety, life is usually alright!!
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention
My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.
Yeah it's not always so bad. Just how I was feeling last night! I know it didn't really fit with what had gone before here, but I didn't know where best to post this one. Thanks for your words Pandi. I think I'll be able to find some edifying words in the next few days. Life is alright. As long as you have some money for yourself and live in safety, life is usually alright!!
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.
Bravo to you for helping others, for getting through the difficult times and sharing your experience and feelings through your lovely poetry. Your words and thoughts help more than you know, you are an example of hope.
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.
Bravo to you for helping others, for getting through the difficult times and sharing your experience and feelings through your lovely poetry. Your words and thoughts help more than you know, you are an example of hope.
Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
Send my credentials to the house of detention
My family with a bitterness seeping to the core
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
loved this, especially those parts in bold
can relate
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
more insightful and intelligent words that i agree with
glad that things are good with you Pandora, situations like that in my family too. Acceptance is the key, as is love.
Bravo to you for helping others, for getting through the difficult times and sharing your experience and feelings through your lovely poetry. Your words and thoughts help more than you know, you are an example of hope.
couldn't have said it better
i'm glad that you're happy and content with life tremors
it's nice to see someone be thankful and enjoy what they have
Comments
As a blanket sending me into hiding
Enforced captivity
From nature so much more palatable
Than from man
White banks rising outside my window
Making me feel warmer by the hour
No choice of where to go today
The obvious choice is here
Send my credentials to the house of detention
can't get over it
where does it all come from?
always touching
always
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
but maybe found something else
that I feared would be lost,..
forever.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
That's good.
Send my credentials to the house of detention
beautiful and now a little sad
Hi....
Will you stand a moment with me?
Can you feel the quiet?
Can you hear the cold?
Say....
Will you walk a moment with me?
Do you see the laughter?
Does it make your eyes cry?
Now....
Will you lay a moment with me?
Will you make an Angel?
Do you believe in Moments?
Moments are like SnowAngels
they will melt away .....
but somehow stay.
lovely picture, stunning words
Whistling through the secret places
Making her recede
Hugging the shadows
Her body melted
Her self, a whisper
Of something more solid
Long time ago
Her self becoming whispered
Feeling less real by the hour
And yet more alive
She dissolved into the sideboards
and blended into dark
The memory of being solid
Memory, flickering
Like the moth shielding the flame
Just one inch closer
Her body hisses
And released
Send my credentials to the house of detention
another beautiful poem tremors
completely fits the weather right now, beautiful
Yeah I liked this one. Might put it with the others in the Sanctuary thread, cos it kind of came out of thinking of such things, then reading poems here. Thanks electrixlovex
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"Memory flickering" I love that
very beautiful poem Tremors...thanks for sharing here, Friend.
Hope your holiday was great and Happy New Year!..... a year filled with much happiness and flowing creativity
Thanks Pandi, yes - nice holiday with my Mum and my brother in the hills. My Mum was sick but I think having her boys around helped her along. She was fighting fit when we left. Am now back home. But like Mick Jagger says I can't quite get no satisfaction! Where's the drug abusers' thread!? I think I could get high by proxy!
Yes I think 2011 we should all get creative, and post lots of great things in this thread, and then Chadwick can send it to the publishers, and we can get it leather bound and copyright cleared, with pictures and everything at the end of the year. I want a massive coffee table book!!
Send my credentials to the house of detention
Send my credentials to the house of detention
Yes I think 2011 we should all get creative, and post lots of great things in this thread, and then Chadwick can send it to the publishers, and we can get it leather bound and copyright cleared, with pictures and everything at the end of the year. I want a massive coffee table book!![/quote]
an amazing idea!
i'm all for something like that
it would be awesome to have it to refer to
at certain times
you know
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
Just now opened my folk art calendars JB buys for me each Christmas,
one for the kitchen, one for my office here.
I was looking again through the year past, each month a lovely country scene,
so detailed, each a celebration of our beautiful world.
Remembering the high points of 2010
Friends
PJ concerts
special days with family.
And hanging the new calendars...
the year to come
seeing special dates and the pictures for that month.....
wondering what the year will bring.
Life is good.
Life is a gift
don't get me started on the past year Pandi,... i would hate to get your thread locked.
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
this will be a good year, I feel it in my bones
my lips are sealed. :silent:
"To question your government is not unpatriotic --
to not question your government is unpatriotic."
-- Sen. Chuck Hagel
How do you love someone that can barely stand
the sight of you?
Trials, trials and tribulations, love
Yet so many pieces to the jigsaw
So many stories
She can't let it go
Bitterness infecting me
We're just circling the inevitable breakdown
Words never said, just stored up for when?
Stored up for never
Thoughts flash between us
Too hurtful to be said
Yet crackle in the air
And me when I'm psychic catch every one
An irreconcilable distance, becoming revulsion, resentment, regret?
Something's brewing
And we can never quite bail out
So I seek my fresh air alone
I retreat and make myself scarce
And be glad I don't need to see you
Until next time
Send my credentials to the house of detention
Beautifully written
I can feel this... you know
but my instant thought...
I hope there is a next time,
someday... there won't be a next time.
I wish there was a fix to let the love in and heal
maybe next time?
maybe someday.
i totally get this tremors
i read what pandi wrote and i agree
in my case its too late
i've tried to mend wrongs i never even knew i committed
things are always so much different
when seen by other eyes
hope you have a second chance
jump on it if you get it.
jo
http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
"How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
"Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
Yeah it's not always so bad. Just how I was feeling last night! I know it didn't really fit with what had gone before here, but I didn't know where best to post this one. Thanks for your words Pandi. I think I'll be able to find some edifying words in the next few days. Life is alright. As long as you have some money for yourself and live in safety, life is usually alright!!
Send my credentials to the house of detention
There is no fitting for words just put them down...please, we need them.
Your words truly tugged at my heart cause I could identify.
I grew up in shame, some things were never resolved and now won't be....
not here.
But I have accepted this as me and it's ok. We were all ok.
Our relationships end but the love stays with us, thankfully.
And thankfully the pain fades.
Money means independence
safety implies overcoming danger, both important in making life alright.
But I hope for a life that is more than alright for you,
I hope for the very best!
Thanks! generally my life is great - I enjoy living on my own, I enjoy my work, for me having some money for myself allows me to be the person I want to be, live the life I want to live, and fuck the rest of them. I like how I can write from just about anywhere and earn my money to run my house, buy my records and write me poems!! The past is more difficult, and relationships - things are kind of simple looking after number one. I am troubled by my past and the past of others I have known, but now that all is cool for me, I am troubled by the thought of people living in the circumstances that I have had to survive, and people I have loved have had to survive. This sometimes keeps me awake at night, but fortunately my work allows me to do a little bit to 'make a difference' too. So life is alright for me, in fact it is 'good' - I feel for other people who cannot sleep safely tonight though. I have been there, many people have been there.
Send my credentials to the house of detention
Send my credentials to the house of detention
loved this, especially those parts in bold
can relate
more insightful and intelligent words that i agree with
glad that things are good with you Pandora, situations like that in my family too. Acceptance is the key, as is love.
couldn't have said it better
i'm glad that you're happy and content with life tremors
it's nice to see someone be thankful and enjoy what they have
thanks for sharing
really, it means a lot
Weather on its way
might bring some icicles
for you and me.
Icicles to challenge us all.
Six foot icicles.
Fatter than 2 small,
mitten covered hands
can reach around.
Go on....
Give it a try!
Smooth and bumpy,
see through,
that they magically,
can,
distort the world.
Believe it...
Take a look and see!
A cold phenomenon,
hanging water.
Drip, drip, drip.
Stop....
Listen to nature's beat,
we'll do the icicle dance!
A twisted treat
for the young
at heart,
slips through the lips.
Take one....
It's yours,
A guaranteed smile!
And as they melt
in the cold winter sun
a fresh smell
beckons Springtime
Is
just around the corner.
Nice!
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