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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    pandora wrote:
    Icicles.jpg

    I like this picture Pandora.
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    pandora wrote:
    Icicles.jpg
    Weather on its way
    might bring some icicles
    for you and me.

    Icicles to challenge us all.

    Six foot icicles.

    Fatter than 2 small,
    mitten covered hands
    can reach around.

    Go on....
    Give it a try!

    Smooth and bumpy,
    see through,
    that they magically,
    can,
    distort the world.

    Believe it...
    Take a look and see!

    A cold phenomenon,
    hanging water.
    Drip, drip, drip.

    Stop....
    Listen to nature's beat,
    we'll do the icicle dance!

    A twisted treat
    for the young
    at heart,
    slips through the lips.

    Take one....
    It's yours,
    A guaranteed smile!

    And as they melt
    in the cold winter sun
    a fresh smell
    beckons Springtime
    Is
    just around the corner. :D

    pandi, i don't know why
    but reading this
    i felt a huge lump in my throat
    and a stinging of tears in my eyes
    maybe its childhood memories
    maybe its you
    or maybe i need some prozac
    beautiful way you wind your words into pictures :D
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Icicles.jpg
    Weather on its way
    might bring some icicles
    for you and me.

    Icicles to challenge us all.

    Six foot icicles.

    Fatter than 2 small,
    mitten covered hands
    can reach around.

    Go on....
    Give it a try!

    Smooth and bumpy,
    see through,
    that they magically,
    can,
    distort the world.

    Believe it...
    Take a look and see!

    A cold phenomenon,
    hanging water.
    Drip, drip, drip.

    Stop....
    Listen to nature's beat,
    we'll do the icicle dance!

    A twisted treat
    for the young
    at heart,
    slips through the lips.

    Take one....
    It's yours,
    A guaranteed smile!

    And as they melt
    in the cold winter sun
    a fresh smell
    beckons Springtime
    Is
    just around the corner. :D


    Nice!
    thanks friend :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    justam wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Icicles.jpg

    I like this picture Pandora.
    Yes it is lovely
    something now rare for you and I
    but there is a winter storm on the way for ATL,
    very good timing, overnight Sunday,
    most will just sit tight and make some winter memories :D
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    StillHere wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    Icicles.jpg
    Weather on its way
    might bring some icicles
    for you and me.

    Icicles to challenge us all.

    Six foot icicles.

    Fatter than 2 small,
    mitten covered hands
    can reach around.

    Go on....
    Give it a try!

    Smooth and bumpy,
    see through,
    that they magically,
    can,
    distort the world.

    Believe it...
    Take a look and see!

    A cold phenomenon,
    hanging water.
    Drip, drip, drip.

    Stop....
    Listen to nature's beat,
    we'll do the icicle dance!

    A twisted treat
    for the young
    at heart,
    slips through the lips.

    Take one....
    It's yours,
    A guaranteed smile!

    And as they melt
    in the cold winter sun
    a fresh smell
    beckons Springtime
    Is
    just around the corner. :D

    pandi, i don't know why
    but reading this
    i felt a huge lump in my throat
    and a stinging of tears in my eyes
    maybe its childhood memories
    maybe its you
    or maybe i need some prozac
    beautiful way you wind your words into pictures :D

    you make :lol: and :D .....thanks kind lady
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    and OH pandi
    i was just listening to the cd of sons of sylvia that your son sent
    thank him so much
    i'm enjoying it!
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    StillHere wrote:
    and OH pandi
    i was just listening to the cd of sons of sylvia that your son sent
    thank him so much
    i'm enjoying it!

    Cool... I'll tell JB (thats hubby) he slipped the cd in your package when I wasn't lookin :lol:

    I enjoy it too! :D
  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    pandora wrote:
    StillHere wrote:
    and OH pandi
    i was just listening to the cd of sons of sylvia that your son sent
    thank him so much
    i'm enjoying it!

    Cool... I'll tell JB (thats hubby) he slipped the cd in your package when I wasn't lookin :lol:

    I enjoy it too! :D


    hahahaaa...ok :lol:
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    illustration.jpg8-)
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    illustration.jpg


    Shelter from the Storm


    Let the brutal form around us,
    life threatening is the chill.
    Cold hearts with ice daggers,
    performing at their will.

    Here safely in your arms,
    that melt the world away.
    Warm and soft in comfort,
    promising, we will stay.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    illustration.jpg


    Shelter from the Storm


    Let the brutal form around us,
    life threatening is the chill.
    Cold hearts with ice daggers,
    performing at their will.

    Here safely in your arms,
    that melt the world away.
    Warm and soft in comfort,
    promising, we will stay.


    Beautiful!!
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    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    illustration.jpg


    Shelter from the Storm


    Let the brutal form around us,
    life threatening is the chill.
    Cold hearts with ice daggers,
    performing at their will.

    Here safely in your arms,
    that melt the world away.
    Warm and soft in comfort,
    promising, we will stay.


    Beautiful!!

    +1
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    ^^^^^^^
    Thank you..... you both make me smile :D
  • The Evil Man
    stop just stop.
    i cant take it
    memories float through my head
    the times i wanted to be dead
    when you would yell
    when you would scream
    when you would throw things inbetween
    beacause that `man in your head
    just because he said.

    it wasnt true, it never was
    now i no wat is the truth
    that stupid man was an esquce
    that evil evil man
    you dont need him to fight
    your head doesnt need to be on right
    i know this because even on the meds
    you fight you scream
    you dont believe me

    when i was little that man controlled your head
    your thoughts
    but you never once questioned
    if you loved me
    you might have left
    but maybe you just forgot
    probably not
    but you still came back
    you would always pick me
    you used to sing me to sleep
    scare the monsters under my bed
    because the evil man said

    that man is not as evil as everyone says
    because when he was here
    i looked foorward to my days
    because when the meds took him away
    you forgot
    you didnt care
    you never more sung me to sleep
    and the gosts of my past still make me weak
    beacuse when they took away they man they took away you
    they took away my dad.




    the story behind this is my dad is schizophrenic and when he was diagnosed my mom explained it to me as there being a evil man inside his head tht told him what to do
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    The Evil Man
    stop just stop.
    i cant take it
    memories float through my head
    the times i wanted to be dead
    when you would yell
    when you would scream
    when you would throw things inbetween
    beacause that `man in your head
    just because he said.

    it wasnt true, it never was
    now i no wat is the truth
    that stupid man was an esquce
    that evil evil man
    you dont need him to fight
    your head doesnt need to be on right
    i know this because even on the meds
    you fight you scream
    you dont believe me

    when i was little that man controlled your head
    your thoughts
    but you never once questioned
    if you loved me
    you might have left
    but maybe you just forgot
    probably not
    but you still came back
    you would always pick me
    you used to sing me to sleep
    scare the monsters under my bed
    because the evil man said

    that man is not as evil as everyone says
    because when he was here
    i looked foorward to my days
    because when the meds took him away
    you forgot
    you didnt care
    you never more sung me to sleep
    and the gosts of my past still make me weak
    beacuse when they took away they man they took away you
    they took away my dad.




    the story behind this is my dad is schizophrenic and when he was diagnosed my mom explained it to me as there being a evil man inside his head tht told him what to do


    Really really powerful. I can relate.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    The Evil Man
    stop just stop.
    i cant take it
    memories float through my head
    the times i wanted to be dead
    when you would yell
    when you would scream
    when you would throw things inbetween
    beacause that `man in your head
    just because he said.

    it wasnt true, it never was
    now i no wat is the truth
    that stupid man was an esquce
    that evil evil man
    you dont need him to fight
    your head doesnt need to be on right
    i know this because even on the meds
    you fight you scream
    you dont believe me

    when i was little that man controlled your head
    your thoughts
    but you never once questioned
    if you loved me
    you might have left
    but maybe you just forgot
    probably not
    but you still came back
    you would always pick me
    you used to sing me to sleep
    scare the monsters under my bed
    because the evil man said

    that man is not as evil as everyone says
    because when he was here
    i looked foorward to my days
    because when the meds took him away
    you forgot
    you didnt care
    you never more sung me to sleep
    and the gosts of my past still make me weak
    beacuse when they took away they man they took away you
    they took away my dad.




    the story behind this is my dad is schizophrenic and when he was diagnosed my mom explained it to me as there being a evil man inside his head tht told him what to do
    I can relate also, my sister who has since left this world, was tormented with paranoid schizophrenia....and torment it is, for her and all who loved her.

    A combination of factors, I see now is the answer to the why.
    I can best describe her trauma, at the age of 4, as a psychotic break,
    this forever changed her view of the world.
    There was no more trust. Without trust what can you believe?

    I understand the evil man that your mother was trying to explain to you as a child.
    It is a simple explanation but sometimes those are the best, at least at the time.
    My sister was most vibrant during episodes,
    I understand looking forward to those times but then, for us, the fall.

    Wonderful writing, sharing your feelings, brings me back to my sister again.
    I feel closer to her now in death than when we shared her roller coaster life.
    Now, taking the beautiful, leaving the bad.
    Thank you.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    The Evil Man
    stop just stop.
    i cant take it
    memories float through my head
    the times i wanted to be dead
    when you would yell
    when you would scream
    when you would throw things inbetween
    beacause that `man in your head
    just because he said.

    it wasnt true, it never was
    now i no wat is the truth
    that stupid man was an esquce
    that evil evil man
    you dont need him to fight
    your head doesnt need to be on right
    i know this because even on the meds
    you fight you scream
    you dont believe me

    when i was little that man controlled your head
    your thoughts
    but you never once questioned
    if you loved me
    you might have left
    but maybe you just forgot
    probably not
    but you still came back
    you would always pick me
    you used to sing me to sleep
    scare the monsters under my bed
    because the evil man said

    that man is not as evil as everyone says
    because when he was here
    i looked foorward to my days
    because when the meds took him away
    you forgot
    you didnt care
    you never more sung me to sleep
    and the gosts of my past still make me weak
    beacuse when they took away they man they took away you
    they took away my dad.




    the story behind this is my dad is schizophrenic and when he was diagnosed my mom explained it to me as there being a evil man inside his head tht told him what to do
    I can relate also, my sister who has since left this world, was tormented with paranoid schizophrenia....and torment it is, for her and all who loved her.

    A combination of factors, I see now is the answer to the why.
    I can best describe her trauma, at the age of 4, as a psychotic break,
    this forever changed her view of the world.
    There was no more trust. Without trust what can you believe?

    I understand the evil man that your mother was trying to explain to you as a child.
    It is a simple explanation but sometimes those are the best, at least at the time.
    My sister was most vibrant during episodes,
    I understand looking forward to those times but then, for us, the fall.

    Wonderful writing, sharing your feelings, brings me back to my sister again.
    I feel closer to her now in death than when we shared her roller coaster life.
    Now, taking the beautiful, leaving the bad.
    Thank you.


    Thanks for sharing both of you. '.... most vibrant during episodes' - unfortunately this is a cross I have to bear too, having experienced a number of acute psychotic episodes, which can be in turns terrifying, exhilerating, but always hard, and so hard for the loved ones around me. So much to be said on this issue; but I'm not sure I can expand right now. Probably some more poetry will come out sometime soon.
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  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    tremors wrote:
    pandora wrote:
    The Evil Man
    stop just stop.
    i cant take it
    memories float through my head
    the times i wanted to be dead
    when you would yell
    when you would scream
    when you would throw things inbetween
    beacause that `man in your head
    just because he said.

    it wasnt true, it never was
    now i no wat is the truth
    that stupid man was an esquce
    that evil evil man
    you dont need him to fight
    your head doesnt need to be on right
    i know this because even on the meds
    you fight you scream
    you dont believe me

    when i was little that man controlled your head
    your thoughts
    but you never once questioned
    if you loved me
    you might have left
    but maybe you just forgot
    probably not
    but you still came back
    you would always pick me
    you used to sing me to sleep
    scare the monsters under my bed
    because the evil man said

    that man is not as evil as everyone says
    because when he was here
    i looked foorward to my days
    because when the meds took him away
    you forgot
    you didnt care
    you never more sung me to sleep
    and the gosts of my past still make me weak
    beacuse when they took away they man they took away you
    they took away my dad.




    the story behind this is my dad is schizophrenic and when he was diagnosed my mom explained it to me as there being a evil man inside his head tht told him what to do
    I can relate also, my sister who has since left this world, was tormented with paranoid schizophrenia....and torment it is, for her and all who loved her.

    A combination of factors, I see now is the answer to the why.
    I can best describe her trauma, at the age of 4, as a psychotic break,
    this forever changed her view of the world.
    There was no more trust. Without trust what can you believe?

    I understand the evil man that your mother was trying to explain to you as a child.
    It is a simple explanation but sometimes those are the best, at least at the time.
    My sister was most vibrant during episodes,
    I understand looking forward to those times but then, for us, the fall.

    Wonderful writing, sharing your feelings, brings me back to my sister again.
    I feel closer to her now in death than when we shared her roller coaster life.
    Now, taking the beautiful, leaving the bad.
    Thank you.


    Thanks for sharing both of you. '.... most vibrant during episodes' - unfortunately this is a cross I have to bear too, having experienced a number of acute psychotic episodes, which can be in turns terrifying, exhilerating, but always hard, and so hard for the loved ones around me. So much to be said on this issue; but I'm not sure I can expand right now. Probably some more poetry will come out sometime soon.
    Your poetry...yours and our silver lining :D
    Creativity seems divine to me, as were many of my sisters thoughts,
    really in touch and beautiful at times
    So much we don't understand about the mind and its connection to here and there
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    IMG_9993.jpg


    When the flames go out

    "Let me go...
    No! I must go....
    But officer, officer my babies, my babies are in there....
    let me go!
    oh no no no.... oh God no.... no
    please... no!"

    The ground is cold on my knees.
    The wicked flames light my face
    as eyes reflect the horror.

    My tears burn and cool
    our everlasting souls.

    This can not end like this......

    When our eyes met for the first time
    the heavens opened.
    Stars, is all I remember,
    twinkling there in those baby blues.

    Time didn't exist.
    He was from the past I was sure,
    no maybe the future.
    There was an answer, just out of reach.
    All his life.

    Little red eyebrows, quietly she breathes,
    tiny chest up and down.
    Perfect toes, tiny hands, giggles and smiles.
    The word joy finally found.
    Like an angel she returns to heaven.

    The sirens muffled
    as though from another world.
    The charred smell of death
    lingers in the air.
    I don't want to breathe,
    not now,
    not ever again.

    There on the ground, inches from my fingers,
    lies a picture.
    A picture of our life gone.

    My two little funny faces....
    I can't help but smile.
    This, all I have left.....
    when the flames go out.
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    pandora wrote:
    IMG_9993.jpg


    When the flames go out

    "Let me go...
    No! I must go....
    But officer, officer my babies, my babies are in there....
    let me go!
    oh no no no.... oh God no.... no
    please... no!"

    The ground is cold on my knees.
    The wicked flames light my face
    as eyes reflect the horror.

    My tears burn and cool
    our everlasting souls.

    This can not end like this......

    When our eyes met for the first time
    the heavens opened.
    Stars, is all I remember,
    twinkling there in those baby blues.

    Time didn't exist.
    He was from the past I was sure,
    no maybe the future.
    There was an answer, just out of reach.
    All his life.

    Little red eyebrows, quietly she breathes,
    tiny chest up and down.
    Perfect toes, tiny hands, giggles and smiles.
    The word joy finally found.
    Like an angel she returns to heaven.

    The sirens muffled
    as though from another world.
    The charred smell of death
    lingers in the air.
    I don't want to breathe,
    not now,
    not ever again.

    There on the ground, inches from my fingers,
    lies a picture.
    A picture of our life gone.

    My two little funny faces....
    I can't help but smile.
    This, all I have left.....
    when the flames go out.


    Wow. You hit me
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  • StillHereStillHere Posts: 7,795
    pandora wrote:
    IMG_9993.jpg


    When the flames go out

    "Let me go...
    No! I must go....
    But officer, officer my babies, my babies are in there....
    let me go!
    oh no no no.... oh God no.... no
    please... no!"

    The ground is cold on my knees.
    The wicked flames light my face
    as eyes reflect the horror.

    My tears burn and cool
    our everlasting souls.

    This can not end like this......

    When our eyes met for the first time
    the heavens opened.
    Stars, is all I remember,
    twinkling there in those baby blues.

    Time didn't exist.
    He was from the past I was sure,
    no maybe the future.
    There was an answer, just out of reach.
    All his life.

    Little red eyebrows, quietly she breathes,
    tiny chest up and down.
    Perfect toes, tiny hands, giggles and smiles.
    The word joy finally found.
    Like an angel she returns to heaven.

    The sirens muffled
    as though from another world.
    The charred smell of death
    lingers in the air.
    I don't want to breathe,
    not now,
    not ever again.

    There on the ground, inches from my fingers,
    lies a picture.
    A picture of our life gone.

    My two little funny faces....
    I can't help but smile.
    This, all I have left.....
    when the flames go out.

    oh my god :cry::cry::cry:
    peace,
    jo

    http://www.Etsy.com/Shop/SimpleEarthCreations
    "How I choose to feel is how I am." ~ EV/MMc
    "Some people hear their own inner voices with great clearness and they live by what they hear. Such people become crazy, or they become legends." ~ One Stab ~
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    edited January 2011
    Evil Speaks‬

    ‪‬
    if the day seems long‬
    and the night unbearable,‬
    I will be your friend‬

    ‪if your dreams turn to nightmares‬
    and your mind screams for relief,‬
    I’ll be the voice you hear‬

    ‪‬
    if the will to make it stop is there‬
    ‪but the tool of escape too heavy to lift,‬
    I’ll be your strength‬

    ‪if your eyes grow heavy‬
    yet you can’t find sleep,‬
    I’ll sing you one last lullaby‬

    ‪‬
    ‪if you feel like a puppet‬
    ‪no longer in control,‬
    it will be me pulling the strings‬

    ‪if you finally find your way out‬
    no matter how dreadful it may seem,‬
    it will be I who shows you the way‬

    ‪take me‬
    I’m yours‬
    I love you‬
    sleep with me‬‪
    sleep well‬
    forever
    Post edited by the wolf on
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    Inspired by The Evil Man.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    the wolf wrote:
    Evil Speaks‬

    ‪‬
    if the day seems long‬
    and the night unbearable,‬
    I will be your friend‬

    ‪if your dreams turn to nightmares‬
    and your mind screams for relief,‬
    I’ll be the voice you hear‬

    ‪‬
    if the will to make it stop is there‬
    ‪but the tool of escape to heavy to lift,‬
    I’ll be your strength‬

    ‪if your eyes grow heavy‬
    yet you can’t find sleep,‬
    I’ll sing you one last lullaby‬

    ‪‬
    ‪if you feel like a puppet‬
    ‪no longer in control,‬
    it will be me pulling the strings‬

    ‪if you finally find your way out‬
    no matter how dreadful it may seem,‬
    it will be I who shows you the way‬

    ‪take me‬
    I’m yours‬
    I love you‬
    sleep with me‬‪
    sleep well‬
    forever

    This is very very good
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  • the wolf wrote:
    Evil Speaks‬

    ‪‬
    if the day seems long‬
    and the night unbearable,‬
    I will be your friend‬

    ‪if your dreams turn to nightmares‬
    and your mind screams for relief,‬
    I’ll be the voice you hear‬

    ‪‬
    if the will to make it stop is there‬
    ‪but the tool of escape too heavy to lift,‬
    I’ll be your strength‬

    ‪if your eyes grow heavy‬
    yet you can’t find sleep,‬
    I’ll sing you one last lullaby‬

    ‪‬
    ‪if you feel like a puppet‬
    ‪no longer in control,‬
    it will be me pulling the strings‬

    ‪if you finally find your way out‬
    no matter how dreadful it may seem,‬
    it will be I who shows you the way‬

    ‪take me‬
    I’m yours‬
    I love you‬
    sleep with me‬‪
    sleep well‬
    forever

    love this
    beautiful
  • the wolf wrote:
    Inspired by The Evil Man.
    o wow... tht is so amazing and im so glad tht my peom inspired it :thumbup:
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • Tell Me

    dont tell me who i am
    dont tell me what to do
    dont tell me where to go
    dont tell me wat to loose
    dont tell me how to dress
    dont tell me wat it is
    dont tell me wat to be
    dont tell me how to live

    i didnt ask so dont tell
    dont comment im a bitch
    cuz idc wat u think
    i dont care u beilive im just saying this
    im not talking sticks and stones
    and how words never harm
    even though they have more power than darkness into beyond

    dont tell me how to write
    dont tell me wen to sit
    dont tell me how to listen
    dont tell me one bit

    ur critisim i dnt need
    i dont care wat u think u see
    im not talking right or wrong
    screw wat ur concious says
    ur concious doesnt no me
    hasnt been in my head

    dont tell me im dumb
    dont tell me im smart
    im done with u
    done and gone

    i used to care wat u thought
    i used to care wat u said
    ur words like gospel
    replaying in my head

    i hated u
    but wanted wat u had all the same
    i feel rather stupid
    after i thought
    y wuld i want to be wat i hate
    hate not fueld by jealousy
    hate not fueld by pain
    hate for what u do
    hate for how u treat the people not like you
    diffrent and strange is better
    better than u
    u do the same thing under ur damn protective bubble
    tht boring routine tht remains the same

    all u do is make people feel likethey dont meen shit
    telling them to change for the sake of u
    not wanting to help
    only destroy
    making u feel less of a toy

    but i promise u one day
    u willgrow old
    or u will grow sick
    and u will look back on life
    and wish u were diffrent
    wish there was somthing tht made it change
    a special memmory worth being ur last thought
    somthing letting u no u have made ur mark
    somthing tht brings a smile as u slip away
    but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds

    so dont tell me who i am
    dont tell wat to do
    but there is one answer i seek from u
    tell me please
    wat the hell makes u beter than me?

    -for all the people that deal with the shit from the "popular kids" in skool
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
    Tell Me

    dont tell me who i am
    dont tell me what to do
    dont tell me where to go
    dont tell me wat to loose
    dont tell me how to dress
    dont tell me wat it is
    dont tell me wat to be
    dont tell me how to live

    i didnt ask so dont tell
    dont comment im a bitch
    cuz idc wat u think
    i dont care u beilive im just saying this
    im not talking sticks and stones
    and how words never harm
    even though they have more power than darkness into beyond

    dont tell me how to write
    dont tell me wen to sit
    dont tell me how to listen
    dont tell me one bit

    ur critisim i dnt need
    i dont care wat u think u see
    im not talking right or wrong
    screw wat ur concious says
    ur concious doesnt no me
    hasnt been in my head

    dont tell me im dumb
    dont tell me im smart
    im done with u
    done and gone

    i used to care wat u thought
    i used to care wat u said
    ur words like gospel
    replaying in my head

    i hated u
    but wanted wat u had all the same
    i feel rather stupid
    after i thought
    y wuld i want to be wat i hate
    hate not fueld by jealousy
    hate not fueld by pain
    hate for what u do
    hate for how u treat the people not like you
    diffrent and strange is better
    better than u
    u do the same thing under ur damn protective bubble
    tht boring routine tht remains the same

    all u do is make people feel likethey dont meen shit
    telling them to change for the sake of u
    not wanting to help
    only destroy
    making u feel less of a toy

    but i promise u one day
    u willgrow old
    or u will grow sick
    and u will look back on life
    and wish u were diffrent
    wish there was somthing tht made it change
    a special memmory worth being ur last thought
    somthing letting u no u have made ur mark
    somthing tht brings a smile as u slip away
    but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds

    so dont tell me who i am
    dont tell wat to do
    but there is one answer i seek from u
    tell me please
    wat the hell makes u beter than me?

    -for all the people that deal with the shit from the "popular kids" in skool
    This is awesome, perfect
    you command your feelings so well
    strong and determined
    I love these lines
    'but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds'
    spot on :clap:
    thank you for your wise words... they fit throughout life
  • pandorapandora Posts: 21,855
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  • pandora wrote:
    Tell Me

    dont tell me who i am
    dont tell me what to do
    dont tell me where to go
    dont tell me wat to loose
    dont tell me how to dress
    dont tell me wat it is
    dont tell me wat to be
    dont tell me how to live

    i didnt ask so dont tell
    dont comment im a bitch
    cuz idc wat u think
    i dont care u beilive im just saying this
    im not talking sticks and stones
    and how words never harm
    even though they have more power than darkness into beyond

    dont tell me how to write
    dont tell me wen to sit
    dont tell me how to listen
    dont tell me one bit

    ur critisim i dnt need
    i dont care wat u think u see
    im not talking right or wrong
    screw wat ur concious says
    ur concious doesnt no me
    hasnt been in my head

    dont tell me im dumb
    dont tell me im smart
    im done with u
    done and gone

    i used to care wat u thought
    i used to care wat u said
    ur words like gospel
    replaying in my head

    i hated u
    but wanted wat u had all the same
    i feel rather stupid
    after i thought
    y wuld i want to be wat i hate
    hate not fueld by jealousy
    hate not fueld by pain
    hate for what u do
    hate for how u treat the people not like you
    diffrent and strange is better
    better than u
    u do the same thing under ur damn protective bubble
    tht boring routine tht remains the same

    all u do is make people feel likethey dont meen shit
    telling them to change for the sake of u
    not wanting to help
    only destroy
    making u feel less of a toy

    but i promise u one day
    u willgrow old
    or u will grow sick
    and u will look back on life
    and wish u were diffrent
    wish there was somthing tht made it change
    a special memmory worth being ur last thought
    somthing letting u no u have made ur mark
    somthing tht brings a smile as u slip away
    but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds

    so dont tell me who i am
    dont tell wat to do
    but there is one answer i seek from u
    tell me please
    wat the hell makes u beter than me?

    -for all the people that deal with the shit from the "popular kids" in skool
    This is awesome, perfect
    you command your feelings so well
    strong and determined
    I love these lines
    'but ur perfect world as u will come to find
    has left u in the dark
    untraced and forgotten by many minds'
    spot on :clap:
    thank you for your wise words... they fit throughout life

    "i think music itself is healing. its an explosive expression of humanity. its something we are all touched by."-Billy Joel

    and this is why i write, u have to have something to write about, and that is one of the few reasons im greatfull i was never as shelterd as everyone else. i try to fall away from all of those crapy songs tht are all about money, sex, drugs, drinking, and parties, so thanks it really means alot for someone too lyk what i love to do
    “I told you from the start just how this would end. When I get what I want, I never want it again.” — Courtney Love

    “If he doesn’t treat you like a princess, then he doesn’t deserve to be your prince.” — Unknown

    “And we’ll move on and go our separate ways. Just know, I’ll miss you everyday, but things just aren’t the same.” — Unknown
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