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  • Pearl_Jam_Necklace
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    depopulationINC wrote:
    another that I am working on. thought I would through it out there. really need some feedback on this one

    I denounce your temporal plane
    Transgressions and faults require at least one day
    I close eyes to the Unions ritual Decree
    Why cant you just tell us all
    That we should live free

    Don’t portray false messages
    From the unbirthed Ghost
    Thoughts of Temporal lashings
    Hurt the most

    Evil lurks behind those pure eyes
    Why repent sins against son of man
    While Spirit defaced throws away the lamb
    Is this His discipline
    Or a controlling façade
    Eating bread
    From sweat of brow
    Do all before Him
    Be condemned by God



    wow.......
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    coachchris wrote:
    Your timing is impeccable ;) Hit deep in my heart with this one. Thanks for sharing!


    glad it did so....thanks
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sistanumsy wrote:
    I could worry myself sick if I thought it would do any good. Just keeping myself sane to offer a hand when and where I can is all I can do.


    this was kinda my point...I feel the same...is that good?
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    good to all human kind! -K-
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Where do I go
    When heavens not waiting for me
    What of my soul
    And all of these troublings
    Just need to know
    Where do I go
    God has forsaken me
    Thrown to the shore
    Due to my blasphemy
    Where do I go
    Where do I go

    I wander alone
    Waiting eternity
    The streets are so cold
    Oh so dead and lonely
    Where is my home
    Where do I go
    Where shall I roam
    When heavens not waiting for me
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Where do I go
    When heavens not waiting for me
    What of my soul
    And all of these troublings
    Just need to know
    Where do I go
    God has forsaken me
    Thrown to the shore
    Due to my blasphemy
    Where do I go
    Where do I go

    I wander alone
    Waiting eternity
    The streets are so cold
    Oh so dead and lonely
    Where is my home
    Where do I go
    Where shall I roam
    When heavens not waiting for me

    This is so sad and hopeless, heaven waits for those who want it, love is not so fickle...good read, very heart wrenching... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    well, I finally got the next piece of this written. This one just flowed for me. At first glance, I believe it may be the best piece (or one of) that I have managed to spit out...not saying I am a great writer...just really liked how it turned out. Anyways:


    Truth:::

    Wait
    Searching here so frantically
    Faith
    Holding out for bent back wings
    Pain
    To watch it all slip away
    Truth
    Knowing it is just what you see
    Wanting more so desperately

    Take your time, but still you’ll see
    There’s nothing more for you or me
    The well is dry, those dreams aren’t real
    Dust bowls just can not bleed
    Consumes your soul, that’s everything
    Take your time, but bid farewell
    Those sights are grand, too vast to be
    So hold them tight, like you can feel
    Mind blows so dry, vacant but for tumbleweed

    You took your steps
    How was the fall
    Well this is down
    Do you like grace
    You can climb back up
    But can’t save face
    Do you like the end
    Is it past start
    Did you pass your time
    Or enjoy the show

    Wait
    That angel won’t be drawn to you
    Faith
    Don’t grasp to what you’ve betrayed
    Pain
    I think by now it’s sinking in
    Truth
    It’s your fault it all slipped away
    Wasting breathe for penance that won’t be paid

    All that time
    But now you’ll burn
    Time will pass
    Maybe then you’ll learn
    You earned this place
    The truth does hurt
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Good read depop, sad and heart wrenching, hope can go such a long way, life is what you make of it
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Something more:


    I hold out
    To let my way in
    For right or wrong
    Or in between
    A liar’s touch
    That means nothing
    Something more for me

    Where did I
    What’s going wrong
    I’ve searched so deep
    There’s nothing strong
    A simple gaze
    Would mean so much
    To grace the soul
    To hold me up
    Something more for me

    When I look,
    I’m looking in
    We learn our will
    In darkest hours
    To look right back
    Sand with footprints in
    And see one track
    Carry ourselves on

    How should I
    Read on those hollow words
    When needed the most
    Not understood
    For right or wrong
    I pass on by
    I move along
    To search those verse
    Nothing there me

    I hold out
    And keep searching
    It’s not my right
    It’s not my thing
    I need to hold
    I need to feel
    To search my soul
    And be reassured
    Something more for me
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Something more: - edit


    I hold out
    To let my way in
    For right or wrong
    Or in the in-between
    A liar’s touch
    That means nothing
    Something more please
    Something more for me

    Where did I
    What made it all go wrong
    I’ve searched so deep
    There's nothing there
    Nothing there too strong
    A simple gaze
    Would mean so much
    To grace the soul
    To hold me up
    Something more for me

    When I look,
    I’m looking in
    We learn our will
    In darkest of hours
    To look straight back
    Sand with footprints in
    And see one track
    Carry ourselves on

    How should I
    Read-on in those hollow words
    When pleading the most
    Maybe misunderstood
    Right or wrong
    I pass on by
    I move along
    To search those verse
    Nothing there
    Nothing there for me

    I hold out
    Oh my tired heart
    Keep on searching
    It’s not my' right
    It’s not my' thing
    I need to hold
    I need to feel
    To search my soul
    Maybe reassured
    Need something more
    Need something more for me

    It's not my place,
    no no no
    It's not my thing
    Need something more
    I need something more for me
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    Glad to see you are still keeping up the good work :)

    depopulationINC wrote:
    Something more:


    I hold out
    To let my way in
    For right or wrong
    Or in between
    A liar’s touch
    That means nothing
    Something more for me

    Where did I
    What’s going wrong
    I’ve searched so deep
    There’s nothing strong
    A simple gaze
    Would mean so much
    To grace the soul
    To hold me up
    Something more for me

    When I look,
    I’m looking in
    We learn our will
    In darkest hours
    To look right back
    Sand with footprints in
    And see one track
    Carry ourselves on

    How should I
    Read on those hollow words
    When needed the most
    Not understood
    For right or wrong
    I pass on by
    I move along
    To search those verse
    Nothing there me

    I hold out
    And keep searching
    It’s not my right
    It’s not my thing
    I need to hold
    I need to feel
    To search my soul
    And be reassured
    Something more for me
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    Glad to see you are still keeping up the good work :)


    Thanks Mizz Pacman
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Thanks Mizz Pacman

    That's Mrs Pacman now :)
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    That's Mrs Pacman now :)


    Hey congrats!!

    When did that happen?

    He never saught my approval? :)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Hey congrats!!

    When did that happen?

    He never saught my approval? :)

    About 6 months ago now.

    Tisk, tisk, I'll have to give him a slap on the wrist, how inconsiderate of him. I guess he's just such a nice guy that he just automatically assumed that you would approve. :)
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    About 6 months ago now.

    Tisk, tisk, I'll have to give him a slap on the wrist, how inconsiderate of him. I guess he's just such a nice guy that he just automatically assumed that you would approve. :)


    That is great to hear.

    How is the lil one doing? must be about 8 months old now?
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    That is great to hear.

    How is the lil one doing? must be about 8 months old now?

    Actually, I'm getting confused, it's been nearly 5 months married, but close enough. And pacbaby is coming up to 7 months old. DOing very well. She is such a beautiful happy baby, we got very lucky.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    pacifier wrote:
    Actually, I'm getting confused, it's been nearly 5 months married, but close enough. And pacbaby is coming up to 7 months old. DOing very well. She is such a beautiful happy baby, we got very lucky.

    Two beautiful souls projecting as one...

    I coulda told you she would be beautiful,
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • pacifier
    pacifier Posts: 1,009
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Two beautiful souls projecting as one...

    I coulda told you she would be beautiful,

    thank you
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    I whisper
    To you my single everything
    Explore that world
    In constant astonishment
    To hold in hands
    Life so preciously
    To search my mind
    Bound with limp vitality

    I scream to skies
    To seek some remorse
    I pray within
    I try to release
    I need this more
    Than I’ve ever needed anything

    I beg for you
    Take me in place of thee
    I pray some more
    With my tearful symphony
    Please grant for me
    In clasping hands
    Hedging so incomplete
    Your place for sure
    Breath life
    Confirm vitality

    I scream to skies
    Is there a reward
    I pray within
    I search trough the stars
    I need this more
    Than life even means to me
    I need this more
    Without is there anything
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key

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