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  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    Please do not be confused on my account. I do sometimes rather write and giggle.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    This one is rather sad depop, has that struggling quality to it.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Of The Ghost

    I have been working on this a bit...I have lots of ideas, but don't know exactly where to go. Feel free to give it a stab

    Of the ghost:

    Trembling fears surround me
    Hostage is my soul
    Should I hide and cower
    Should I stand up bold

    I can see an end is coming
    It slithers drawing near
    I’m in the shadows on my belly
    My fist clenched until their bleeding
    Jaw throbbing from the fear

    Sense it come
    Sense it grow
    This is dying?
    Am I leaving?
    I’ve been cleansing my inner being
    Washing the blunders from my core
    I’m watching for a temptation
    Am I righteous enough to forgo
    I’m praying for a hailstorm
    Enticements overlooked
    Does this prevent that passage
    Help me to where I want to go
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Yeah, I really like this one alot...good stuff :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin1 wrote:
    Yeah, I really like this one alot...good stuff :)

    Thanks...it's one of those ones that I have so many ideas of ehre to head with it, that I can't choose. I think this is going to be a long ass project to complete
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    With every step that your weary legs stretch to take
    So worn out
    Your mind can not keep up with the same rat race
    Times are growing bleak
    Life is like this sometimes
    Oh living through self-genocide, and empty dreams

    Lay rest your wasted bones
    Lay down the burden
    The one you carry all alone
    Lay down that worried mind
    Let thoughts drift from your head
    Give in to another way
    Give up on self-genocide

    When every thought you think
    Tends to leave you on the brink
    When all this passing time
    Leaves nothing far behind
    Seek out fresh embrace
    Don’t carry the world alone
    Find comfort in another’s aid
    Give up on self-genocide
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • coachchris
    coachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    depopulationINC wrote:
    With every step that your weary legs stretch to take
    So worn out
    Your mind can not keep up with the same rat race
    Times are growing bleak
    Life is like this sometimes
    Oh living through self-genocide, and empty dreams

    Lay rest your wasted bones
    Lay down the burden
    The one you carry all alone
    Lay down that worried mind
    Let thoughts drift from your head
    Give in to another way
    Give up on self-genocide

    When every thought you think
    Tends to leave you on the brink
    When all this passing time
    Leaves nothing far behind
    Seek out fresh embrace
    Don’t carry the world alone
    Find comfort in another’s aid
    Give up on self-genocide

    Your timing is impeccable ;) Hit deep in my heart with this one. Thanks for sharing!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    beautiful depop! liked the self-realization of a need in this one :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    thanks Twin

    I have my next piece in mind for this already, tittled 'rage concealed' thats all i have for it so far though, an 2 other words that i want to include...Im gunna work on it tomorow night i think.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    depopulationINC wrote:
    thanks Twin

    I have my next piece in mind for this already, tittled 'rage concealed' thats all i have for it so far though, an 2 other words that i want to include...Im gunna work on it tomorow night i think.

    Great! I look forward to reading it! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    I have settled to carry the burden alone, I guess that must be the numb, do what ya gotta do. Good reading.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sistanumsy wrote:
    I have settled to carry the burden alone, I guess that must be the numb, do what ya gotta do. Good reading.


    The world is all too often a crappy place, but it ain't worth beating yourself up inside stressing about it?


    Did you aggree with that statement?
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    Yep.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sistanumsy wrote:
    Yep.


    Is that good or bad.

    Honestly, I feel the same way as you. But, I also feel that is a major problem in the world today. Sometimes I feel like people just don't feel anything inside about the world that surrounds them. I try to be a good person for the most part, and lend out a hand where I can, but know I do not do enough. I lock myself in my own world, and am for the most part blind to the outside...well, I mean, I see the crap that goes on, but I don't step up.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Is that good or bad.

    Honestly, I feel the same way as you. But, I also feel that is a major problem in the world today. Sometimes I feel like people just don't feel anything inside about the world that surrounds them. I try to be a good person for the most part, and lend out a hand where I can, but know I do not do enough. I lock myself in my own world, and am for the most part blind to the outside...well, I mean, I see the crap that goes on, but I don't step up.

    nor do I allow it too concern / eat me up inside enough.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    I could worry myself sick if I thought it would do any good. Just keeping myself sane to offer a hand when and where I can is all I can do.
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • sistanumsy
    sistanumsy Posts: 218
    Time will carry us onward


    I have many a moments of blue
    Unfortunately not tying a shoe
    I work hard so that you may rest
    Never to see how hard the test
    If our troubles swarm all about
    You are able with no doubt
    While growing occurs along
    You are thinking a lovely song
    I see the scary things all around
    But still find life on the ground
    I can not stop to rethink the end
    Only hold your hand to not bend
    K-The lost will do their best to get home, if they are loved. To our soldiers who have given what they had.
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    Rage concealed


    Step into
    I don’t want
    Where do I roam
    Haven’t been here
    Not that I recall
    Not that I remember
    Though recollections aren’t so clear

    Why do I have to let the heat rise
    Why when I know, that I must keep it all inside
    Wishing to watch the whole world die
    Waiting to make it happen
    A feast before these glazed eyes

    I
    Don’t
    Think that I can bear this anymore
    I
    Don’t
    Think that I can conceal anymore
    I
    Don’t
    Think that I like this place
    I
    Know
    I’ve been here time and time before

    Memory fades
    Why can I not recall
    This is something that I should know by touch
    This remains something cherished
    Why do I also hate it all so much

    Saw it in his eyes
    As he stood just like that mule
    Headlights focused in
    He’s in my sights
    Can not hide
    He’s in my sights
    Frozen in place
    He’s in my sights
    Drive my will
    Impale sweet retribution
    Taking in my vengeance
    Proclaiming a triumph once again

    Silently
    Here comes my judgment day
    Conceal within me
    To hold inside
    Don’t make that move
    Stand without a sound
    And bow my head
    And feel insane
    To give remorse
    I feel for myself
    Is this satisfaction
    Or is this shame
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    wow...that was powerful depop, good read...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • depopulationINC
    depopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    twin1 wrote:
    wow...that was powerful depop, good read...


    thanks t
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key

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