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Ali wrote:To trace the leaves
Under the moonlight
Through every winter solstice
Alongside of
The side of my house,
With you,
would be priceless
and
last lifetimes.
thanks for this one.........................................................................0 -
Thanks grooveamatic...glad you liked it..its good to hear feedback:)
Its something i'd like to do with one i fall in love with...actually Trace on the wall....strange:)A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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(On EVERY LAST WORD OF PHRASE,SWITCH TO THE E CHORD)
Improv on vocal.Fucking wildly.(i'm a vocalist)
You've got a blue green/ soul (& you)
Am E
Curse you're rock and/ roll (and i)
Broke your/bowl(You say you)
Lost/ control(And I still)
Paid your?toll(Over the)
Sound and the/ Shoal (& I'm)
You've got a lonely/heart (& you)
Tear it/apart(so you)
Aren't so /smart(Cause you)
Broke my/Heart(&you)
Said /sweetheart(hAHAHA)
Let's go back to the /start(&I'll)
Just play my /part(well)
Time for me to/Depart
So let's just
Hey babe,Its been /fun(And well)
Life has just/ begun(and now I )
Know what I /know (And you)
And you can pack up and go (cause I'm)
Done my/show(and I )
Really don't /know (I)
Really don't/ know (I)
Am going too low (I'm)
Going too low
I'm -I really don't /know(I)
Really don't /know
Repeat last line until end of vocal improvs....
peace...
allisonA whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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I've got the guitar out! I'm adding those Hendrixian sharp ninths to the E! Keep improvising! Keep going!0
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Finns..you can come over my house for a beer and some convo aNYTIME!
Its got a bluesy-grungy feel to it.I'd lOVE to see more music over this web...
but i can't post an attatchment on this thread...but I do to the admins all the time.!!!!I'm attention-wanton.
So if you got anything finns, or anybody out there...Love to hear it.PS looking for music to use to put to a satged reading of my play..so if youre interested,PM me.I'll be jammin out tonight....
PPS> Party at my house tonight if anyone wants to come.!!!!!!
Hop a plane..I won't letcha down.:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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with the last sip of brandy
BOOM!
I swallow it down
It slides down my throat
the taste is sufficient
but I want to taste you
taste him
The love of my life
wherever he roams
a wandering soul
Like myself
An empty bottle
empty
of devoid hope
with nothing to do but trust
in divine contagious hope
and
stare at an empty bottle
and let the plays on words filter
in and out of my tedious big head
and rip off my clothes
and jump
into bed
with him
on a beach
with an eternal sunrise
with sand in the hair
with a moon foreboding
with nothing
but himA whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Climate and change-
Generally full
with frustration
Of the wandering thought
that will someday pass-
and I don't want it to pass
all the feelings
all the relationships
The lack of not knowing
As wintertime
blows its
soft,sweet,dampening breath
through my chilled bones
Bringing on
the thought of
the afterlife
and visions of heaven.
I am alone,
for now,
for a while,
since you have left.A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Ali wrote:Climate and change-
Generally full
with frustration
Of the wandering thought
that will someday pass-
and I don't want it to pass
all the feelings
all the relationships
The lack of not knowing
As wintertime
blows its
soft,sweet,dampening breath
through my chilled bones
Bringing on
the thought of
the afterlife
and visions of heaven.
I am alone,
for now,
for a while,
since you have left.
This gets rather intense and then ends so quietly. Beautiful..........................................................................0 -
thank you Groovematic....:)A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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In the sunshine of love
One can find
an endless array
of
careful thoughts
and
fulfilling dreams.
It was a night brought about by chance
when the pianist walked on
Stroking the keys
That could open any door
while the sun and the moon
played a story
of Light and Darkness
To stop and contemplate
nothing
but the striking
of the keys
to the chord closest
to my heart.A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Your poems make me want to fall in love. I'd better stop reading them............................................................................0
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There's nothing wrong with falling in love .... just let the higher plane
kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
heart,
aliA whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Has global warming brought the Valentine's lurve sap of spring rising early this year to the board? Everyone's randy on here these days.0
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And that's a good thing.0
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Randy as ever finns...
Thank God in Winter,you can still hear the birds and the bees!:)A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Drunk again
Tomorrow is show night
I will hear the music
I will hear the screams
I will dance a dance
Put out a call
Make some noise
The natives are restless
in the streets of Trenton
to play all night
with the forbidden angels
and the sweat of contentment
will fall across my brow
until we meet againA whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Ali wrote:There's nothing wrong with falling in love .... just let the higher plane
kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
heart,
ali
'Twould be fantastic if I could find something lasting, Ali...but then again, a lot of my poetry would be different if that were the case!Of course, I see no problem with writing content I'm-in-love poems, either.
I, too, fall in love everyday. It can be a joyous or a sorrowful burden. I find a mixture of both in it.
I'm giving the search--as well as everything else--over to the higher plane.
heart,
seth.........................................................................0 -
groove...
I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
I submit to your will God.
Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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Ali wrote:groove...
I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
I submit to your will God.
Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!
turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!
Happy New Year to you as well!.........................................................................0 -
grooveamatic wrote:turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!
Happy New Year to you as well!
Thank you...Its just that there's living by God/Higherplane
and just turning it over and saying..."you know me ...who I am..what I like..
so I believe in just following the flow of positiveness and letting you take over my body."
and some call me crazy.A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
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