Solar

AliAli Posts: 2,621
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Soar to the moon
And while you're at it
Fly to the sky
The angels can see you better
with a wide open eye.
Of all the galaxies in the universe,
would you pick the one where your soul
can rest?
Would you lay with me under the auroras
and make heavenly love over
the rounded, orbed moons...
gliding in such frequent stares
as the stars
on a crisp winter night?
Would you sleep with me
next to a heavenly manger
of a dark,encompassing night?
Fly to the sky
the night is here to pass us by.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005

"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"

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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Oh the sun...
    Essence of yellow
    Dream of Gold
    Warmth and light so bold.
    Would you carry
    my heartache over the rainbow
    And my vision of love
    through the tides?
    Could you stop and rest a while
    on the clouds of time?
    Would the winds whisper our name
    to the passing gulls?
    Essence of yellow
    Dreams of blue
    I'm singing a song
    That thinks of few....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    We spent the summer
    In each others arms
    A Bottle of wine by the bay
    A few words and
    Cigarettes
    By the wayside of the hammock
    "I love you"
    I said
    "I don't know you"
    He quipped
    And I shed a tear.
    Trips to sing
    Lighting fires
    On the beach
    Stories of his childhood
    Parties full of people
    Kissing in the bathroom
    "I love you"
    I said
    "I don't know you"
    He quipped
    And I shed a tear.
    Movie posters
    Hanging on a wall
    In the bedroom
    His yellow house
    Bringing to life
    The fondest of times
    Until,
    He said,
    I'm leaving.
    "I love you",
    I said
    "I'm sorry"
    He said
    And I shed a tear.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    if you're a gril....get used to heartache.....(she quipped)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    love them bones....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Walking through
    higher than
    The Stars in the sky
    and I see poems
    and people and
    colors
    and a man in a van
    and I stop him and say
    Gotta light
    While he's lighting my cigarette
    the ashes fall to the ground
    He's opening his raincaot
    and I'm
    contemplating leaving
    staying
    so
    There's nowhere to go
    but home
    and I get into the car,
    High
    and I'm listening to The bEatles
    an Paul jumps into my head.
    And i think
    IF I WAS HIM,
    would I have jumped on the man
    in the dilapidated trenchcoat
    and gone for a ride?
    Most likely not.
    People are somewhat dangerous
    sometimes
    so
    I'll still stay high as the sky.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    You don't
    know how it is
    til you're at
    The bottom of the bowl
    Licking the icing
    With your meek little fingers
    Low as the ground.
    Whe you turn your
    car over
    Ignition halting,
    Losing your job,
    Losing your lover,
    In sickness,
    Without health
    And the only thing
    On your dollar bill
    That you can see
    is IN GOD WE TRUST
    Low as the ground
    When the man in
    the dilapidated trenchcoat
    THROWS you a light...
    THRoWS you a light.
    I don't want to stay low.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Did the moon
    overcome its own shadow?
    The face of the moon
    seems covered
    by the reflections
    of a girl.
    Dark and fair
    In complexion
    her shadow
    meets the moon.
    He seems not to mind
    He usually
    stands alone.
    With his face and shadow
    in the background,
    the passing thought
    and mirrored image
    Have now become his friend.
    He has nothing but to do
    other than share
    his magnificent light.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I am but
    a drop of water
    in an endless ocean
    of softly shed tears
    without the sound
    of your voice.
    I am but
    a pebble of sand
    in a vast desert
    without the feel
    of your touch.
    I am but
    a child laden
    in an empty field
    without the prescence
    of your soul.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • I was in mid-reply to this thread when the baord went down for half an hour or so.

    Lovely poems, Ali. Good to see you back. :)
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    and I will be updating to save space...
    I always see such mounds of greatness in your writing and in your being....
    Thank you...from the deepest confines of my soul.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    For what does one owe the greatest of inspiration?
    You take me on journeys that I never know exisited,while
    You set my heart aflame with the passion exuberantly displayed
    In your colorful rhythm and words of thundering force
    To be projected through my mighty quill with grace and color.
    To what do I owe my muse?
    A life full of Earthly pleasures to be shared with the one of choice?
    The fame brought on by one-thousand Dionysian Gods?
    I think it would just be to write a life-long story of my muse,
    With my muse,
    And to encircle the past,present,and future with the inspirations of
    One such as wonderful and enthralling as my forever-changing muse.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    The sun just melts away
    Into the ocean
    Like casting bronze
    Into the blue flame
    Encapsulating the pink hue
    Of sundown
    as we sit
    arm and arm
    like two patronizing alchemists
    Mixing metals with the open sea.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    i like the way your poems feel so full of pictures and color.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank you justam:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    My heart
    skips a beat
    when I feel
    the thought of you
    enter the realm
    of my concious soul.
    I breathe a sigh of anxiousness
    And really hope not to cry
    The tears of joy
    That longing has brought out
    in my unconcious mind.
    My heart never feels empty
    when I'm with you,
    my friend,
    You fill the gap of lonliness
    That enters in the pitch black of night,
    Just when I'm ready to fall into slumber.
    I never look down,
    I look straight into your eyes
    To say a prayer for friendships sake.
    You are my rock,
    you are my fortress,
    you are my strength.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Sunlight arrives
    Creating a new day
    For those stuck in the dark
    Like a ray of hope
    passing through the clouds
    As a bee finds its flower. :)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Sunrise
    Morning
    Or afternoon
    shower
    Dress
    Drink water
    Take a pill
    Answer phone
    Have a cigarette?
    Maybe play music
    Get the mail
    Close the windows
    Hop in the car
    Take a drive past
    See anyone I know?
    Have yet another cigarette?
    Go to the store
    Come home
    Set the table
    "Hi mom and Dad"
    Get ready to eat
    Have another cigarette
    Contemplate thoughts
    Upon and in a prayer
    Sleep
    Sunset
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali, you're so fucking good at this. :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Thank the hell out of you...
    I'm sure youre good too...
    Practice makes perfect,right?
    I do study it..so I try just as hard as anyone else..
    A poet is a poet.
    Thanks:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Love
    God Life Stars Sunshine
    Pictures Universe Heaven
    Music People Earth
    Art Colors Acting
    Clouds Faith Trees
    Flowers Snow Leaves Rain
    Moon Light Night Dark
    Oceans Seas
    Sun
    Love
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    The pain ensues as more soldiers die,
    While no one stops to even ask why;
    The trials for murder and ghastly intent,
    While all of the money has been properly spent;
    Sons and daughters of mothers seem to run away,
    The best thing to do would be to stay;
    A hole dug in a trench awaiting stale sweat,
    While the reaper is just waiting to be met;
    Could all of our years' war theories be so wrong,
    Fighting for deaths taken-killing for so long:
    I've always heard -"Two wrongs don't make a right",
    More reason for us to throw it down and refuse to fight.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    A soul in time
    we all are.
    The sand runs through the hourglass...
    representing a second lost
    In the winds of tomorrow
    and in the winds of change.
    The moments turn
    Like the cheek on a face
    waiting to blend and confer with the others
    to make some sort of line...
    some sort of day.
    The days move onward
    To fullfill a destiny
    waiting to be counted in
    with the years ahead.
    The years furthur on...
    til there is
    infinite.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    The green grass...
    wavering in height,
    rising majestically
    inside of the plateaued mountains.
    And you took me there.
    Nowhere to go but there...
    to grow with the water,
    follow the river down
    to the crisp,swelling pools.
    And you showed me where it was.
    The painted flowers...
    in shades of purple,
    blooming introvertedly
    alongside the white poppies,
    And you walked me through them.
    Everywhere to go in the World...
    to move with the currents,
    to play in the forests,
    to sing with the birds,
    And you loved me.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    A fire-forever burning
    on a long stretch
    of beach,
    below the stars,
    keeping out the darkness.
    The rhythms from the creative light.
    Dolphins playing-People singing.
    We were born
    to swim and live and love.
    Bubbling brooks.
    Clear,blue crystallized water.
    Water into wine.


    ADV 04



    (I kinda want to be down the shore right now....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    There's this place down the shore,
    right along the bay,
    and I love it there.
    Fishing,climbing dunes, and playing along the jetties.
    Sand fights,well,
    mockeries.
    My father in his hip waders.
    Picking shells along the beach,
    Delaware Bay-Side.
    I can't be without you,
    my restless ocean.
    I can't be anywhere except with you.
    How can I be so in love with the sea?
    How is this possible?
    Why do I belong there?
    Picking shells from the ocean floor.
    I have to find you.
    I will arrive tomorrow.
    A place by the ocean,
    Just you and I.
    Do you promise?
    Can it be true?
    Will you love me like you promised that you would?
    Why do you do this to me?
    All that I wanted was you forever.
    I even gave you that necklace.
    Why can't Summer Love last?
    Now,
    I sit in tears
    over a love that I cannot control.
    I never wanted anything more but you,
    and me,
    and the sea.


    ADV02-04c.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Evergreen
    Tall and Surreal
    You lay down your needles
    For warmth to the ground
    You stand as a home
    For the birds around you
    You cast inspiration
    Into the hearts of many
    And provide an embrace
    Of cool,wanting shade
    Evergreen
    You lost me
    when you thought you had me.
    You loved me
    when you thought you must
    You hurt me
    when you thought you wouldn't
    Now were friends, and
    you befriended me
    When I needed you most.
    Life has a funny way of turning itself around.
    i entertain love
    as often as i can.
    Never turning it away...
    no matter how far from my grasp it is.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    It's summer...and you have a thought.
    The wind is swiftly passing
    through you're hair and you're alone on a beach
    with the sun coming up,
    just watching the waves
    ride in and out
    along the New Jersey coastline.
    No one is around
    besides the sandsweeper man,
    filtering through
    the soft,brown pebbled shoreline,
    making patterns in the sand.
    You're thinking of the person
    that you met last night...
    An instant attraction
    that led to a wild evening
    of drinks
    an an unwillingness
    to stop the dance of angels
    and leave the sand
    for the oasis
    of a more comfortable setting
    so you do......
    And all you're left with
    Is a thought.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    The bitter tears
    Of God's sweetness
    have dripped down upon me
    Bringing me to life.
    The rain falls
    so delicately
    On the passing thought
    Of the man I once knew.
    The beads of soft water
    are reminiscent
    of the time
    when we held onto each other
    Clinging
    As if we were in love.
    Now that the rain
    has washed away the thought..
    I can live anew.


    ;)



    IF IT ISN'T MUSIC..IT ISN'T WORTH LISTENING TO! :):):):):)
    (Especially pearl Jam!)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    There we lay
    Bodies entwined
    On the beach
    of serenity...

    I thought you were mine..
    I thought I was yours.

    You walked across the room
    Hands broken from mine,
    just to steal a look..
    at the girl nextdoor.
    There I stood-
    transfixed on your eyes-
    and the sullen look on my face
    Displayed reget
    that we had even met.
    You cheated in a glance
    and took away the life
    that I had been holding
    so carefully in my hands,
    for you-
    with you-
    My Fiancee.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    "Come on
    RIGHT NOW
    motherfucker
    Show me what you got
    cause you ain't got much.
    You think you got what it takes?
    Do you raelly think you got what it takes
    t o b e a S T A R ?
    Drop em...
    workit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"



    *This is what I've heard from personal experience
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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