To trace the leaves
Under the moonlight
Through every winter solstice
Alongside of
The side of my house,
With you,
would be priceless
and
last lifetimes.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
The new sky moans
The swift and nocturnal adoption the of feast
climb the rungs of the ladder
on the side of the suburban home.
The moon throws up,spilling over the sight
of cats and dogs fornicating.
The still silent night
has nowhere to go but down
to anticipate nothing but death
and being balled over by flies and gnats.
The newspaper man sells
his wares
on the corner
that once proclaimed the news,
"The apocolypse has come"
but
The war is now over.
This is just life.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
It was
a beautiful summer
when we met
The waves would roll in...
Us-holding hands...
I hated to see you go.
My friends have memories of you
and that breadtie...
a comical propsal-yet so sweet...
I have visions still-of us..
sleeping on the porch,
watching the sun rise.
The pictures of your smile
lay forever in my mind
and my soul cries for your memory
everynight.
I wish that summer love would last.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Lovers lay in wet sand
after the dew sets in.
I thought it was forever
yet I settled for sometimes...
Rides in a yellow Firebird
with a radio
to play my favorite music?
This year,I'd have to say no...
I'm waiting around
for someone special,
where
Lovers lay
eternally,
after the dew sets in.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
To trace the leaves
Under the moonlight
Through every winter solstice
Alongside of
The side of my house,
With you,
would be priceless
and
last lifetimes.
Thanks grooveamatic...glad you liked it..its good to hear feedback:)
Its something i'd like to do with one i fall in love with...actually Trace on the wall....strange:)
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
(On EVERY LAST WORD OF PHRASE,SWITCH TO THE E CHORD)
Improv on vocal.Fucking wildly.(i'm a vocalist)
You've got a blue green/ soul (& you)
Am E
Curse you're rock and/ roll (and i)
Broke your/bowl(You say you)
Lost/ control(And I still)
Paid your?toll(Over the)
Sound and the/ Shoal (& I'm)
You've got a lonely/heart (& you)
Tear it/apart(so you)
Aren't so /smart(Cause you)
Broke my/Heart(&you)
Said /sweetheart(hAHAHA)
Let's go back to the /start(&I'll)
Just play my /part(well)
Time for me to/Depart
So let's just
Hey babe,Its been /fun(And well)
Life has just/ begun(and now I )
Know what I /know (And you)
And you can pack up and go (cause I'm)
Done my/show(and I )
Really don't /know (I)
Really don't/ know (I)
Am going too low (I'm)
Going too low
I'm -I really don't /know(I)
Really don't /know
Repeat last line until end of vocal improvs....
peace...
allison
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Finns..you can come over my house for a beer and some convo aNYTIME!
Its got a bluesy-grungy feel to it.I'd lOVE to see more music over this web...
but i can't post an attatchment on this thread...but I do to the admins all the time.!!!!I'm attention-wanton.
So if you got anything finns, or anybody out there...Love to hear it.PS looking for music to use to put to a satged reading of my play..so if youre interested,PM me.I'll be jammin out tonight....
PPS> Party at my house tonight if anyone wants to come.!!!!!!
Hop a plane..I won't letcha down.:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
with the last sip of brandy
BOOM!
I swallow it down
It slides down my throat
the taste is sufficient
but I want to taste you
taste him
The love of my life
wherever he roams
a wandering soul
Like myself
An empty bottle
empty
of devoid hope
with nothing to do but trust
in divine contagious hope
and
stare at an empty bottle
and let the plays on words filter
in and out of my tedious big head
and rip off my clothes
and jump
into bed
with him
on a beach
with an eternal sunrise
with sand in the hair
with a moon foreboding
with nothing
but him
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Climate and change-
Generally full
with frustration
Of the wandering thought
that will someday pass-
and I don't want it to pass
all the feelings
all the relationships
The lack of not knowing
As wintertime
blows its
soft,sweet,dampening breath
through my chilled bones
Bringing on
the thought of
the afterlife
and visions of heaven.
I am alone,
for now,
for a while,
since you have left.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Climate and change-
Generally full
with frustration
Of the wandering thought
that will someday pass-
and I don't want it to pass
all the feelings
all the relationships
The lack of not knowing
As wintertime
blows its
soft,sweet,dampening breath
through my chilled bones
Bringing on
the thought of
the afterlife
and visions of heaven.
I am alone,
for now,
for a while,
since you have left.
This gets rather intense and then ends so quietly. Beautiful.
In the sunshine of love
One can find
an endless array
of
careful thoughts
and
fulfilling dreams.
It was a night brought about by chance
when the pianist walked on
Stroking the keys
That could open any door
while the sun and the moon
played a story
of Light and Darkness
To stop and contemplate
nothing
but the striking
of the keys
to the chord closest
to my heart.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
There's nothing wrong with falling in love .... just let the higher plane
kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
heart,
ali
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Drunk again
Tomorrow is show night
I will hear the music
I will hear the screams
I will dance a dance
Put out a call
Make some noise
The natives are restless
in the streets of Trenton
to play all night
with the forbidden angels
and the sweat of contentment
will fall across my brow
until we meet again
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
There's nothing wrong with falling in love .... just let the higher plane
kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
heart,
ali
'Twould be fantastic if I could find something lasting, Ali...but then again, a lot of my poetry would be different if that were the case! Of course, I see no problem with writing content I'm-in-love poems, either.
I, too, fall in love everyday. It can be a joyous or a sorrowful burden. I find a mixture of both in it.
I'm giving the search--as well as everything else--over to the higher plane.
heart,
seth
groove...
I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
I submit to your will God.
Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
groove...
I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
I submit to your will God.
Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!
turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!
turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!
Happy New Year to you as well!
Thank you...Its just that there's living by God/Higherplane
and just turning it over and saying..."you know me ...who I am..what I like..
so I believe in just following the flow of positiveness and letting you take over my body."
and some call me crazy.
A whisper and a thrill
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Comments
Under the moonlight
Through every winter solstice
Alongside of
The side of my house,
With you,
would be priceless
and
last lifetimes.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
ali
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
The swift and nocturnal adoption the of feast
climb the rungs of the ladder
on the side of the suburban home.
The moon throws up,spilling over the sight
of cats and dogs fornicating.
The still silent night
has nowhere to go but down
to anticipate nothing but death
and being balled over by flies and gnats.
The newspaper man sells
his wares
on the corner
that once proclaimed the news,
"The apocolypse has come"
but
The war is now over.
This is just life.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
a beautiful summer
when we met
The waves would roll in...
Us-holding hands...
I hated to see you go.
My friends have memories of you
and that breadtie...
a comical propsal-yet so sweet...
I have visions still-of us..
sleeping on the porch,
watching the sun rise.
The pictures of your smile
lay forever in my mind
and my soul cries for your memory
everynight.
I wish that summer love would last.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
may you drink a lot and be verrrrry Jolly!!!!!!!!!
love...
ali
Ps Just be careful!
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
And you too!!!!
Happy New year Ali!
after the dew sets in.
I thought it was forever
yet I settled for sometimes...
Rides in a yellow Firebird
with a radio
to play my favorite music?
This year,I'd have to say no...
I'm waiting around
for someone special,
where
Lovers lay
eternally,
after the dew sets in.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
thanks for this one
Its something i'd like to do with one i fall in love with...actually Trace on the wall....strange:)
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Improv on vocal.Fucking wildly.(i'm a vocalist)
You've got a blue green/ soul (& you)
Am E
Curse you're rock and/ roll (and i)
Broke your/bowl(You say you)
Lost/ control(And I still)
Paid your?toll(Over the)
Sound and the/ Shoal (& I'm)
You've got a lonely/heart (& you)
Tear it/apart(so you)
Aren't so /smart(Cause you)
Broke my/Heart(&you)
Said /sweetheart(hAHAHA)
Let's go back to the /start(&I'll)
Just play my /part(well)
Time for me to/Depart
So let's just
Hey babe,Its been /fun(And well)
Life has just/ begun(and now I )
Know what I /know (And you)
And you can pack up and go (cause I'm)
Done my/show(and I )
Really don't /know (I)
Really don't/ know (I)
Am going too low (I'm)
Going too low
I'm -I really don't /know(I)
Really don't /know
Repeat last line until end of vocal improvs....
peace...
allison
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Its got a bluesy-grungy feel to it.I'd lOVE to see more music over this web...
but i can't post an attatchment on this thread...but I do to the admins all the time.!!!!I'm attention-wanton.
So if you got anything finns, or anybody out there...Love to hear it.PS looking for music to use to put to a satged reading of my play..so if youre interested,PM me.I'll be jammin out tonight....
PPS> Party at my house tonight if anyone wants to come.!!!!!!
Hop a plane..I won't letcha down.:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
BOOM!
I swallow it down
It slides down my throat
the taste is sufficient
but I want to taste you
taste him
The love of my life
wherever he roams
a wandering soul
Like myself
An empty bottle
empty
of devoid hope
with nothing to do but trust
in divine contagious hope
and
stare at an empty bottle
and let the plays on words filter
in and out of my tedious big head
and rip off my clothes
and jump
into bed
with him
on a beach
with an eternal sunrise
with sand in the hair
with a moon foreboding
with nothing
but him
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Generally full
with frustration
Of the wandering thought
that will someday pass-
and I don't want it to pass
all the feelings
all the relationships
The lack of not knowing
As wintertime
blows its
soft,sweet,dampening breath
through my chilled bones
Bringing on
the thought of
the afterlife
and visions of heaven.
I am alone,
for now,
for a while,
since you have left.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
This gets rather intense and then ends so quietly. Beautiful.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
One can find
an endless array
of
careful thoughts
and
fulfilling dreams.
It was a night brought about by chance
when the pianist walked on
Stroking the keys
That could open any door
while the sun and the moon
played a story
of Light and Darkness
To stop and contemplate
nothing
but the striking
of the keys
to the chord closest
to my heart.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
heart,
ali
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Thank God in Winter,you can still hear the birds and the bees!:)
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
Tomorrow is show night
I will hear the music
I will hear the screams
I will dance a dance
Put out a call
Make some noise
The natives are restless
in the streets of Trenton
to play all night
with the forbidden angels
and the sweat of contentment
will fall across my brow
until we meet again
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
'Twould be fantastic if I could find something lasting, Ali...but then again, a lot of my poetry would be different if that were the case!
I, too, fall in love everyday. It can be a joyous or a sorrowful burden. I find a mixture of both in it.
I'm giving the search--as well as everything else--over to the higher plane.
heart,
seth
I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
I submit to your will God.
Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!
Happy New Year to you as well!
Thank you...Its just that there's living by God/Higherplane
and just turning it over and saying..."you know me ...who I am..what I like..
so I believe in just following the flow of positiveness and letting you take over my body."
and some call me crazy.
A whisper and a chill
adv2005
"Why do I bother?"
The 11th Commandment.
"Whatever"
PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?