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  • Ali wrote:
    To trace the leaves
    Under the moonlight
    Through every winter solstice
    Alongside of
    The side of my house,
    With you,
    would be priceless
    and
    last lifetimes.


    thanks for this one
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Thanks grooveamatic...glad you liked it..its good to hear feedback:)
    Its something i'd like to do with one i fall in love with...actually Trace on the wall....strange:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    (On EVERY LAST WORD OF PHRASE,SWITCH TO THE E CHORD)
    Improv on vocal.Fucking wildly.(i'm a vocalist)


    You've got a blue green/ soul (& you)
    Am E
    Curse you're rock and/ roll (and i)
    Broke your/bowl(You say you)
    Lost/ control(And I still)
    Paid your?toll(Over the)
    Sound and the/ Shoal (& I'm)

    You've got a lonely/heart (& you)
    Tear it/apart(so you)
    Aren't so /smart(Cause you)
    Broke my/Heart(&you)
    Said /sweetheart(hAHAHA)
    Let's go back to the /start(&I'll)
    Just play my /part(well)
    Time for me to/Depart
    So let's just

    Hey babe,Its been /fun(And well)
    Life has just/ begun(and now I )
    Know what I /know (And you)
    And you can pack up and go (cause I'm)
    Done my/show(and I )
    Really don't /know (I)
    Really don't/ know (I)
    Am going too low (I'm)
    Going too low
    I'm -I really don't /know(I)
    Really don't /know
    Repeat last line until end of vocal improvs....



    peace...
    allison
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I've got the guitar out! I'm adding those Hendrixian sharp ninths to the E! Keep improvising! Keep going! :D
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Finns..you can come over my house for a beer and some convo aNYTIME!
    Its got a bluesy-grungy feel to it.I'd lOVE to see more music over this web...
    but i can't post an attatchment on this thread...but I do to the admins all the time.!!!!I'm attention-wanton.
    So if you got anything finns, or anybody out there...Love to hear it.PS looking for music to use to put to a satged reading of my play..so if youre interested,PM me.I'll be jammin out tonight....

    PPS> Party at my house tonight if anyone wants to come.!!!!!!
    Hop a plane..I won't letcha down.:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    with the last sip of brandy
    BOOM!
    I swallow it down
    It slides down my throat
    the taste is sufficient
    but I want to taste you
    taste him
    The love of my life
    wherever he roams
    a wandering soul
    Like myself
    An empty bottle
    empty
    of devoid hope
    with nothing to do but trust
    in divine contagious hope
    and
    stare at an empty bottle
    and let the plays on words filter
    in and out of my tedious big head
    and rip off my clothes
    and jump
    into bed
    with him
    on a beach
    with an eternal sunrise
    with sand in the hair
    with a moon foreboding
    with nothing
    but him
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Climate and change-
    Generally full
    with frustration
    Of the wandering thought
    that will someday pass-
    and I don't want it to pass
    all the feelings
    all the relationships
    The lack of not knowing
    As wintertime
    blows its
    soft,sweet,dampening breath
    through my chilled bones
    Bringing on
    the thought of
    the afterlife
    and visions of heaven.
    I am alone,
    for now,
    for a while,
    since you have left.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    Climate and change-
    Generally full
    with frustration
    Of the wandering thought
    that will someday pass-
    and I don't want it to pass
    all the feelings
    all the relationships
    The lack of not knowing
    As wintertime
    blows its
    soft,sweet,dampening breath
    through my chilled bones
    Bringing on
    the thought of
    the afterlife
    and visions of heaven.
    I am alone,
    for now,
    for a while,
    since you have left.

    This gets rather intense and then ends so quietly. Beautiful.
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    thank you Groovematic....:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    In the sunshine of love
    One can find
    an endless array
    of
    careful thoughts
    and
    fulfilling dreams.
    It was a night brought about by chance
    when the pianist walked on
    Stroking the keys
    That could open any door
    while the sun and the moon
    played a story
    of Light and Darkness
    To stop and contemplate
    nothing
    but the striking
    of the keys
    to the chord closest
    to my heart.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Your poems make me want to fall in love. I'd better stop reading them... :)
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    There's nothing wrong with falling in love .... just let the higher plane
    kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
    heart,
    ali
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Has global warming brought the Valentine's lurve sap of spring rising early this year to the board? Everyone's randy on here these days.
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    And that's a good thing. ;)
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Randy as ever finns...
    Thank God in Winter,you can still hear the birds and the bees!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    Drunk again
    Tomorrow is show night
    I will hear the music
    I will hear the screams
    I will dance a dance
    Put out a call
    Make some noise
    The natives are restless
    in the streets of Trenton
    to play all night
    with the forbidden angels
    and the sweat of contentment
    will fall across my brow
    until we meet again
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    There's nothing wrong with falling in love .... just let the higher plane
    kinda take over, groove:)But that's a compliment, thanx.I fall in love everyday..just not one of them is consistant in my life!Don't you wish they would be though,groove?
    heart,
    ali

    'Twould be fantastic if I could find something lasting, Ali...but then again, a lot of my poetry would be different if that were the case! :) Of course, I see no problem with writing content I'm-in-love poems, either.

    I, too, fall in love everyday. It can be a joyous or a sorrowful burden. I find a mixture of both in it.

    I'm giving the search--as well as everything else--over to the higher plane.
    heart,
    seth
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    groove...
    I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
    I submit to your will God.
    Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
    Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali wrote:
    groove...
    I saw that movie with Jim Carrey and Jen Aniston-Pitt and I fell in love with the line that says...something like...
    I submit to your will God.
    Its perfect!That is so how I feel.Let the higher power just kinda bump you together.Its all in the cards anyway,I believe.
    Happy New Year to yoou and all reading!

    turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!

    Happy New Year to you as well!
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  • Ali
    Ali Posts: 2,621
    turning it all over to God...that's the way to go! I've never been happier, no matter what happens in my life!

    Happy New Year to you as well!

    Thank you...Its just that there's living by God/Higherplane
    and just turning it over and saying..."you know me ...who I am..what I like..
    so I believe in just following the flow of positiveness and letting you take over my body."
    and some call me crazy.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?