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    ClutchTheDawnClutchTheDawn Posts: 160
    and by instinct
    she rolls her eyes...why?
    i don't know
    probably just the answer
    to the all the things she doesn't know
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    oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    my dog sleeps with her eyes open


    i hope to hell she's seen' sompin'
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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    finnanniefinnannie Posts: 1,186
    it felt right
    we sat outside together
    feeling the mist of spring rising from the ground
    drops of water
    fell to our foreheads
    the magic
    touching us
    I now see
    where I want to be
    Won't let the light escape from me.
    Won't let the darkness swallow me.
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    :(
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    prismprism Posts: 2,440
    why can't some people understand that it's unrealistic to think that balance can be found within a delusion?
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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    weedweed Posts: 475
    2 fires
    no matches
    !
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    Thanks for taking the flowers from my fathers grave,

    I’m glad that you felt that they were in the way.

    Thanks for the phone call to let me know to pick them up, because
    I spent near 50 bucks.

    I guess they probably look better in the trash anyways, or over at your mommas place.

    And thanks for letting me know they finally put his headstone up, it took damn near 6 months.

    But I’m glad that within the first month, you already had yours up.

    Thanks for putting the little birds up there too, thanks for cramming all of your crap and not leaving me any room.

    And thanks for putting the little lanterns there that light up night,

    So we can all see our way because it’s so often we go and visit the cemetery at night.

    Thanks for always thinking of yourself and no one else, thanks for showing me such little respect.
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Thanks for taking the flowers from my fathers grave,

    I’m glad that you felt that they were in the way.

    Thanks for the phone call to let me know to pick them up, because
    I spent near 50 bucks.

    I guess they probably look better in the trash anyways, or over at your mommas place.

    And thanks for letting me know they finally put his headstone up, it took damn near 6 months.

    But I’m glad that within the first month, you already had yours up.

    Thanks for putting the little birds up there too, thanks for cramming all of your crap and not leaving me any room.

    And thanks for putting the little lanterns there that light up night,

    So we can all see our way because it’s so often we go and visit the cemetery at night.

    Thanks for always thinking of yourself and no one else, thanks for showing me such little respect.


    that is absolutely terrible.
    anyhow, your writing does make an impact.
    nicely done even if it is sad as hell.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    romybianromybian Posts: 1,644
    I won't pretend I can fool this distance,
    or that my feelings will last longer than time,
    I won't fight to keep a flame going,
    when I know that it won't keep me warm.
    "The joke in your language won't come out the same" (Tom Petty)
    I'm no dude! Dudette!
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    ClutchTheDawnClutchTheDawn Posts: 160
    sometimes...
    all that makes sense
    is a good intent white lie

    sometimes...
    a spot on the fence
    is the present tense denied
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    a sweaty blaze
    of thoughts
    uncontrollable
    bursts of angst
    a fear inside
    for no apparent reason
    but uncertain future
    in your hands
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Jamal wrote:
    a sweaty blaze
    of thoughts
    uncontrollable
    bursts of angst
    a fear inside
    for no apparent reason
    but uncertain future
    in your hands
    *EDIT*
    I'm applying for a really important job, so I'm not semi-suicidal or anything ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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    chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    I may have just written one of the greatest poems of all time.
    It will not be posted here.
    Next book, yes.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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    urbanhippieurbanhippie Posts: 3,007
    Fuck. What do I do? What can I say?


    Nothing and nothing...I just have to be there.
    A human being that was given to fly.

    Wembley 18/06/07

    If there was a reason, it was you.

    O2 Arena 18/09/09
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    AmadeusDAmadeusD Posts: 44
    prism wrote:
    why can't some people understand that it's unrealistic to think that balance can be found within a delusion?

    Some delusions are easier to deal with
    Delusions are closer to the truth, that what 90% of people perceive as reality
    Some people just hate the real world, not surprisingly.

    A fault line pretends
    To stay calm
    For another day
    Holding fast
    Forces those left
    To run away
    You can see for miles
    Smoke that billows
    Move close to smell
    Smoke that stays close
    I’ve known through clues
    How it ends with nothing
    But a sunset now
    Would darken everything
    The past is a horrible thing
    Holding you fast with the people it brings
    Their faces bright hold everything
    You thought was right and made you sing
    Never again will rain fall warm
    But storm clouds grow
    To answer the call
    For warm, comforting rain
    Won't you come see me, Queen Jane....

    Leaving the pillow alone tonight
    And I can see for miles
    Speak father with all your might
    Drive in one last nail
    I’d walk right into your hands
    From the end of the earth
    I’d make one final stand
    If you could see what I’m worth
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    prismprism Posts: 2,440
    AmadeusD wrote:
    Some delusions are easier to deal with
    Delusions are closer to the truth, that what 90% of people perceive as reality
    Some people just hate the real world, not surprisingly.

    A fault line pretends
    To stay calm
    For another day
    Holding fast
    Forces those left
    To run away
    You can see for miles
    Smoke that billows
    Move close to smell
    Smoke that stays close
    I’ve known through clues
    How it ends with nothing
    But a sunset now
    Would darken everything
    The past is a horrible thing
    Holding you fast with the people it brings
    Their faces bright hold everything
    You thought was right and made you sing
    Never again will rain fall warm
    But storm clouds grow
    To answer the call
    For warm, comforting rain

    it sounds rather that you're talking more about illusions and that's okay...i was talking about delusions where a people lose their grip on any sense of reality
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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    weedweed Posts: 475
    you never listen to the voices inside
    they fill your ears as you run to a place to hide
    you're never sure if the illusion is real
    you pinch yourself but the memories are all you feel

    25 years ago
    I stood
    right in front
    of Billy ...
    even then
    I knew
    what he was
    talking about
    when he asked
    "are you lonely in the dark"
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    TrixieCatTrixieCat Posts: 5,756
    I don't know how many times I had to ask you to listen to me, help me, love me...all I wanted or needed was your time...
    Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
    And I don't feel right when you're gone away
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    prismprism Posts: 2,440
    AWWWWWW, how precious....those deer babies were just born that very afternoon....two lil tiny baby bambis :D
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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    catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i love books
    the written word
    i need more shelves
    tis the least they deserve
    i can't get enough
    he'll think im nuts
    when he sees them stacked
    like furniture
    today two came
    in the mail from afar
    a thurston moore and a book on punk abodes
    i find them and
    theyre oh so cheap
    but the postage ...yes...
    ... now thats the bitch
    i love books
    i must have more
    i need to live forever
    so i can read them all
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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    oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    i love books
    the written word
    i need more shelves
    tis the least they deserve
    i can't get enough
    he'll think im nuts
    when he sees them stacked
    like furniture
    today two came
    in the mail from afar
    a thurston moore and a book on punk abodes
    i find them and
    theyre oh so cheap
    but the postage ...yes...
    ... now thats the bitch
    i love books
    i must have more
    i need to live forever
    so i can read them all

    diggin it in kansas

    :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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    catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    olderman wrote:
    diggin it in kansas

    :)

    no way jose... too many tornadoes and flying houses for me thanks.
    hi j. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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    oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    hi cate :)

    there are also Lions and Tigers and Bears to deal with ;)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
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    catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    olderman wrote:
    hi cate :)

    there are also Lions and Tigers and Bears to deal with ;)


    oh my. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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    prismprism Posts: 2,440
    will he arrive with the next sunrise?
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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    catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    you stupid bitch, what the fuck are you doing?

    i don't know anymore. i thought i was okay but i guess i was fooling myself

    well what is it that you want?

    what does it matter? it's out of my hands. there's nothing i can say anymore and there's nothing i can do

    well then i guess you have to have a little faith

    fuck that bullshit. i have no faith. this isn't about faith anyway. to me it's about fucking with someone. and not even realising it. pure and simple.

    that's a harsh comment to make

    yeah well it's a harsh world. people always looking for something more. don't know whats right in front of them. i'm too tired to deal with it anymore


    well then what are you going to do?

    nothing. i'm gonna do nothing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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    LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    you stupid bitch, what the fuck are you doing?

    i don't know anymore. i thought i was okay but i guess i was fooling myself

    well what is it that you want?

    what does it matter? it's out of my hands. there's nothing i can say anymore and there's nothing i can do

    well then i guess you have to have a little faith

    fuck that bullshit. i have no faith. this isn't about faith anyway. to me it's about fucking with someone. and not even realising it. pure and simple.

    that's a harsh comment to make

    yeah well it's a harsh world. people always looking for something more. don't know whats right in front of them. i'm too tired to deal with it anymore


    well then what are you going to do?

    nothing. i'm gonna do nothing.

    nothing makes anything possible....
    i'm not happy yet.....
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    catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Linda wrote:
    nothing makes anything possible....

    and nothing kills me.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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    LindaLinda Posts: 1,656
    and nothing kills me.


    don't let it....
    i'm not happy yet.....
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    catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Linda wrote:
    don't let it....

    i'm just so tired.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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