the pros and cons of being a poet...

YellowYellow Posts: 699
edited November 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm walking out of this restaurant, and the person i'm with coughs...


i say "sweetie, you sound like cardboard"

and five people standing in the foyer laugh and smile and one says "omg, that is like, so good!"


:)




and i'm talking with my boss who's writing a tribute to her son for his yearbook, she says, "you're the poet, tell me what i need to change"



ummmm.....


can i just re-write the whole thing?


not that it's not good... it's just that you're speaking singularly of a collective force and well um.... (see boss fidget in chair...)



hoo boy :)
It's all yellow.


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  • There was a bloke called Roman Jakobson who said we poets think vertically and everyone else thinks horizontally.

    :)
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    isn't everyone a poet in his or her own way?

    or maybe it's no one is a poet truly, I don't know, just rambling.


    carry on all you poets, I am sure the heck not one.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • ExodusExodus Posts: 212
    i think theres a difference b etween poet and lyricist.
    i myself am a lyricist as i write lyrics...
    poetry if more general because anyone can say anything ispoetry...even if its not true...

    but anway...
    im a little confused on the last one..

    wtf...i had something that made sense to say....oh well..
    Between the conception and the creation

    Between the emotion and the response

    Falls the shadow.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    well, there's a relationship between lowly worker and company owner...

    and well, i'm as conscious as i should be about keeping myself in servitude, for whatever reason that may be... i enjoy the paycheck immensely :)



    and i call myself a poet...

    when a stranger asks me, what do you do?

    i say well... i make a living doing this, but i'm also a singer/songwriter and a poet... that's what i do for fun... i learned to play guitar so I could sing my words

    my words came first

    so... anyway, about "being" a poet? i didn't always see myself that way, but for whatever reason, perhaps because i aspire to publish maybe someday??? i call myself a poet and that's all i think i need to pass....

    put me in a room with other poets, and they generally dig my stuff, i guess... and that helps a whole lot, too :)
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by Yellow
    put me in a room with other poets, and they generally dig my stuff, i guess... and that helps a whole lot, too :)

    Now I ain't no poet ;), but I sure dig your stuff, girlfriend! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    I'm a poet mostly because someone who I consider to be a poet has called me a poet.

    Get it?

    And my college poetry prof did too. And a few other people.

    But truely, I'm not a poet because I'm limited. I'm limited by happiness, in as if I have one, I don't have the other, generally. I'm a hobbiest or an opportunist, but either with above average talent.

    And I'm happy to share with those I hold in high poetic esteem. Hence, my lingering here.
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  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Now I ain't no poet ;)
    Nudge, nudge,
    SPANK, SPANK

    I get skittles in my veins whenever I hear the "P" word used near me. I think it's a glorious compliment. Poets have stethascopes on brainbeats, they have heart autopsies in their pockets. They know life and death and every color in between. They kick ass.
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    i dug myself a hole once
    that's where i put my poet
  • Originally posted by Goulet
    i dug myself a hole once
    that's where i put my poet

    Does the rain get in? Are you going to fix it? :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Does the rain get in? Are you going to fix it? :D

    no
    nothing gets in or out
  • Originally posted by Goulet
    no
    nothing gets in or out

    Ah, a self contained, self preserving unit.

    SPANK! Nice to see ya around! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    Originally posted by Goulet
    i dug myself a hole once
    that's where i put my poet

    push the little daisies and make em come up
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by Yellow
    push the little daisies and make em come up

    Indeed. Ween.

    Whatever happened to them? I think Beavis and Butthead didn't do much for their careers....

    :)

    But what makes language, vision, experience, poetic? Discuss!
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Too often it's supposed that poetry is imagery and form. If you're using iambic pentameter or ababcdcd rhyme scheme, it's poetic. If you use big words or have a semblance of rhythm, it's poetic. If you use lots of adjectives and obscure verbage, it's poetic.

    That's poetry to the layperson (spoken as I dismount my high horse).

    While those may aid in expressing poetic vision through words, they are not poetry. Poetry, as I alluded, is vision. It's a way of seeing the world that's different than how anyone else has ever seen it, and then being able to describe it to somebody else. Poetry is a blessing, not a large vocabulary. That's what dictionary.com is for. Poetry is a calling, not a sense of rhythm. That's what Casio keyboards are for.l

    Poetry is not red roses nor blue violets. Poetry is not "where for art thou". Not anymore. Poetry dies with cliché and is reborn in its avoidance.

    Poetry is birthing old ideas before new eyes.

    :: end self-important poetry rant ::
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  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    i very much like that insight :)
    It's all yellow.


  • I don't think that the definition of poetry is the escape from form,or the rejection of adherence to rhetorical, imagistic and poetic conceits dating from Homer and Hesiod, because the obsessive hankering for "free poetry" ironically becomes a kind of formalist aestheticism in itself.
    Poetry can use iambic pentameter and the images passed down via a cultural history of myth and still create novel visionary effects...but poetry like all cultural forms is inevitably conditioned by social being, however subversive it might be. Some newer forms are deliberately obscurantist, and aren't really deliberated as subversive but as elitist expressions of "high" art for a select readership. It's a sort of cultural fascism, at worst.

    I think that the concept of the poet as some transcendent magus speaking in tongues and pushing the articulation of subconscious experience to the limits - at both extremes - of communication is in some respects a bourgeois prerogative. After modernism died off in Britain in the '30s it was replaced by the socio-realist Auden's verse, which struggled after the principles of clarity and the realisation of the power of "cliche" as a means of conveying fundamental shared assumptions about society and the individual consciousness, which would always be pre-modern and subversive of dominant ideological refashionings of the world. This language could convey subjectivity and social issues without the experimentation of the Modernists: it could use the oldest tropes to find essential experiences. Kavanagh and Beckett sought to write "without style"; Joyce said after "Finnegans Wake" that he wanted to write something "very simple and very short."

    To say that any literary form is defunct, especially if its popularity endures amongst literate, educated academics and writers as well as readers, is to require a thorough and immediate reading of TS Eliot's essay "On Tradition and the Individual Talent."
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    oh and ween...

    gosh how i liked that song...
    It's all yellow.


  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    I don't think that the definition of poetry is the escape from form,or the understanding of adherence to rhetorical, imagistic and poetic conceits dating from Homer and Hesiod, because the obsessive hankering for "free poetry" ironically becomes a kind of formalist aestheticism in itself.
    Poetry can use iambic pentameter and the images passed down via a cultural history of myth and still create novel visionary effects...but poetry like all cultural forms is inevitably conditioned by social being, however subversive it might be.

    I think that the concept of the poet as some transcendent magus speaking in tongues and pushing the articulation of subconscious experience to the limits - at both extremes - of communication is in some respects a bourgeois prerogative. After modernism died off in Britain in the '30s it was replaced by the socio-realist Auden's verse, which struggled after the principles of clarity and the realisation of the power of "cliche" as a means of conveying fundamental shared assumptions about society and the individual consciousness that would alwys be pre-modern and subversive of dominant ideological refashionings of the world. Kavanagh and Beckett sought to write "without style"; Joyce said after "Finnegans Wake" that he wanted to write something "very simple and very short."

    To say that any literary form is defunct, especially if its popularity endures amongst literate, educated academics and writers as well as readers, is to require a thorough and immediate reading of TS Eliot's essay "On Tradition and the Individual Talent."

    My intelectual British friend, please don't misunderstand me!

    I did not mean to imply that well-established form or style was utterly devoid of poetic quality. Nor did I mean to deprive any classic works, once-innovative bodies, etc of their poetic merits.

    I was simply saying that Joe Jock can sit down, put some words with a nifty rhythm down and slap as many old English and multisyllabic terms as he can into something and it still not be poetry.

    There is beautiful poetry in the world in iambic pentameter. There is beautiful poetry that endulges in the evil of cliché. There is beautiful poetry that breaks all the rules and that follows all the rules.

    The problem lies in that we are oftentimes tempted to paint by numbers... use the formulas that have worked for others and form our thoughts and ideas to fit those molds. That is what I say poetry is not.

    See the difference?
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  • Ween? I did too. Nearly drove housemates mad back in 93.

    :)


    By the way, yes, I know what you mean, CMR. What we call "Pam Ayres" poetry over here. But even doggerel has its day!

    :)
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    i like this:


    black·smith ( P ) Pronunciation Key (blksmth)
    n.
    One that forges and shapes iron with an anvil and hammer.
    One that makes, repairs, and fits horseshoes.




    ....just replace iron with words...

    the word: wordsmith, just doesn't capture it for me :)



    even the horseshoes..


    if the horseshoe fits...
    wear it..








    oh, wow... that was a cliche wasn't it? :p
    It's all yellow.


  • GouletGoulet Posts: 918
    Can't we just all agree
    that poetry is worthless
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Goulet
    Can't we just all agree
    that poetry is worthless

    I know I hate it.
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  • Vile, disgusting filth!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by Being Enlightened
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  • Originally posted by Yellow
    i like this:


    black·smith ( P ) Pronunciation Key (blksmth)
    n.
    One that forges and shapes iron with an anvil and hammer.
    One that makes, repairs, and fits horseshoes.




    ....just replace iron with words...

    the word: wordsmith, just doesn't capture it for me :)



    even the horseshoes..


    if the horseshoe fits...
    wear it..








    oh, wow... that was a cliche wasn't it? :p

    Doesn't capture it for me either, but, believe it or not, there are many British Marxist literary critics who would be delighted with the term because it doesn't fetishise or mystify literature as a magical process but considers it as a means of material production......
    These critics don't tend to be poets.

    :D
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
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    How many spanks on the spankometer now??!!!!

    :D
  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
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    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
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    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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