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    "Sticks"

    Jeremy is fat. Pig torsos for arms and legs. Jeremy has red hair as if a red mirror were smashed on his head. Strands like rubber bands. Jeremy has tiny tawny freckles where his face should be and a mole in the crease of his upper lip. It tickles his nose whenver he smiles. Jeremy has tried to cut it off with his mother's sewing scissors, but the scissors were too big. Jeremy is in the fifth grade. Fourth graders trip him in the hall. Fifth graders call him ugly, fat, fag, retard, pig, puss, wuss, pussy, wussy, spitface, shitface, dumb butt, bomb butt, lice boy, mole boy, diaper boy, dirt, dirty, one-shirt wonder, fat load, wide load, fat toad, baby, cry baby, ugly baby, fat baby, fag baby, retard baby, pig baby. Sixth graders punch him in the chest. Jeremy was called to the chalkboard. Whispers and giggles followed.

    788+123=

    Jeremy wrote 911 and sat down. The teacher called another student to the chalkboard.

    788+123=

    The student didn't know the answer and had to stay after school. After school, the class caught Jeremy and tore apart his books and clothes, poured honey onto his head, and sent him home naked and shaking. The next day, Jeremy was called to the chalk board. Whispers and giggles followed.

    12-13=

    Jeremy wrote -1, then pulled his mother's sewing scissors from his sock, and stabbed the teacher deep in the throat. The whispers and giggles stopped.
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    setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Radar... is that really YOU in that piece of prose?

    ANYwho. Have you ever read the Novella by Stephen King called RAGE?

    I think you might enjoy it. I certainly do, and often as I read it about 4 times a year.

    Let me know. And dude, that was concentrated angst right there.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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    Originally posted by setaside2
    Radar... is that really YOU in that piece of prose?

    ANYwho. Have you ever read the Novella by Stephen King called RAGE?

    I think you might enjoy it. I certainly do, and often as I read it about 4 times a year.

    Let me know. And dude, that was concentrated angst right there.

    Nope. Not I. Just a twisted, fractured Dali-vision, perverted self image type thing. Whenever I feel a character needs a name, I just give 'em mine.

    I have heard of "Rage". Haven't read it . . . if I did it was a long time ago in a galaxy far far away. I'll look it up, though.
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    NOTHING without you - Nusrat Fateh Ali Kahn

    listen to it as WE speak!


    yayayayayayyyyy


    do you like the little rascels rascles thos kids,

    spanky always said and i love and never knew why until now-

    oh it's saturday
    oh it's saturday
    ha na nanee and a

    HA CHA CHA!!

    i also like listening to it on my media player that looks like the blue germ just one tooth and a right eye that is anything from far eeeeevvvvvvveeeeeeeiiiiiilllllll.
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    Mindmapping is the technique I have developed as a way or means of portraying the bizarre. It is fantastic to tap into these planets that coexist in the mind. In order to gain access to these realities I truly believe any fear of self expression has to be erased. A surrealist is a person with a pathological gift that is so divergent that it appears as an experience based phenomenon.


    are you really legally blind?

    my mother almost lost her sight last year

    i healed her though

    even though she didn't want me too

    are you 16
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    ill go

    i thought they were good questions anyway

































































































































































    yes, change your mind, change your mind
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    BhagavadGita -

    The little rascals fit nicely between my ribs.
    I'm not 16, never was.
    I'm not blind but my penis might make me.
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    "The Spider and the Slug"

    I'm taking a bath
    when the tub turns
    into a giant saber-nippled slug with a giant banana bandana
    and it's waxed with pus
    and mayonnaise (the
    pus I don't mind so much, but mayonnaise is so fattening and

    the doctor told me to lose 14 pounds cuz I was getting bigger
    than the guards who
    were having a tough time
    beating me, and I want to please the doctor since he has a wart
    on his nipple, so I went
    ahead and cut off my
    dick and had the doctor weigh me again, but somehow I gained

    19 pounds, but then the doctor told me to put down the chainsaw,
    and then I found that
    I only had to lose 8
    pounds, so I went to take a hot sweat bath when the tub turns
    into a giant ninja spider
    with an afro and nipples
    for eyes, and I feel special because now the slug and the spider
    have to duel for my honor
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    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    BhagavadGita -

    The little rascals fit nicely between my ribs.
    I'm not 16, never was.
    I'm not blind but my penis might make me.

    no,nonononono. no.

    he won't make you blind, how can he?
    Baba, your stick in the woods have awaken me and will awaken all those i love because i told them it would come true, and now it has. we just have to spead the word.

    YOU - who?
    Baba

    ME - AND you....

    make BabaGita !

    i like that alot.
    do it again and again.
    do it baby one more time OH, YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    falling down,

    getting UP. ~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    100% natural love





















































































































































































    shhh.

    what about a boy?

    what would you name him?
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    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Great. I have my first stalker :D

    I'm pleased that you're pleased. Truly. My cheeks are exploding from blushes. It is foolish, however, to think that I don't have to TRY. It all depends on the amount of LSD and Cheetos, actually. But not cheesy poofs. Never cheesy poofs! Oh, those things make me angry! I hate 'em! I hate 'em! I hate 'em! Those soulless fiends!

    Worry not.

    i alone will remove your cheesyness with my pointed tongue and you will LOVE IT.

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA

    take that dorothy

    shit. where are my red shoes.

    too bad wes c. attle doesn't have twisters like home, huh? :)
    i have to go soon, but i dont wanna
    i dont even remember where i work today

    sigh a sign
    sign a sigh

    off to shower NOW little missy
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    "end"

    my mouth is the crotch from which abortions are pulled

    red rabies red rabies send over dead babies

    ugliness is a crown
    luckily my head is round

    thoughts cowering away
    afraid to be seen
    for what they really are

    calmless.........cleanless.........knowless

    all blather all truth all grinding
    through this cell of skull
    so many things laughing
    while i'm straight-faced
    pointing and laughing
    like the mirror does

    soulless.........tasteless.........safeless

    a viley violent
    and violently vile
    mob of madness
    has lynched gladness
    left it
    livid and limp
    dangling in the breeze
    so other emotions can heed their power

    wholeless.........hugless.........careless

    there's a method to my sadness
    it's addicted to me
    puking chunks of it
    onto every thought
    tainting them in its beauty
    it piles my smiles high
    so i knock them all over
    when i reach for one

    feckless.........blessless.........endless

    abhor the future
    too many clouds
    carpeting its sky
    too much snow
    choking my steps
    maybe i should lie down and stop walking toward it
    and all the demands
    it demands
    and all the responsibility
    to be responsible for
    there's just little room
    for a cradle
    in a slut's mouth
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    CAN IT!!!

    no one wants to read that shit today!!

    xix

    i still love ;you tho
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    Don't need to read my shit:

    Just feel it.
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    "The Pump: Lovers in the Gym"

    She has a pretty way
    the way she
    flexes the veins
    in her right
    forearm
    to spell my
    name.

    I can only
    tense my right
    deltoid
    to mirage
    the image
    of her
    face.

    I smile
    when spotting
    her on decline bench,
    for when she
    squeezes
    at the top, her
    nipples bounce and the
    striations along
    her pecs
    forge the
    form of
    Elmer shooting
    Daffy.

    While I'm
    leg curling, she
    curls around
    me and says, "Your
    hamstrings
    look like
    slugs screwing."

    "Care to
    join them,"
    I say,
    and she
    giggles and
    jiggles her right
    triceps
    into a bust
    of Darth
    Vader.

    Oh, to have her pump!
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    wait wait wait!!


    I smile
    when spotting
    her on decline bench,
    for when she
    squeezes
    at the top, her
    nipples bounce and the
    striations along
    her pecs
    forge the
    form of
    Elmer shooting
    Daffy.

    While I'm
    leg curling, she
    curls around
    me and says, "Your
    hamstrings
    look like
    slugs screwing."

    and you said i was a sick little money?
    pull this gibbon over there!

    it is with some regret, yet great respect I hand the award for "Nauseous Minature Primate of the Year" over to Mr O'reilly

    may he use it well
    Some people have to have the sultry evenings Cocktails in the blue, red and grey But I like every minute of the day.
    INTER-FUCKING-MISSION!!!
    Newcastle-Riverside 02/22/92!!!
    E.rutherford New Jersey 01/06/06
    Athens -Greece.survived !barely-
    Wembley 18/06/07- no words- just smiles!
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    grunts, scratches ass, bows, throws poo.
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    Actually, sultry, your impish, elfish, fetish poem compelled me to post this particular piece. ;)
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    setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Radar you Nauseating Miniature Primate... (with which I couldn't agree more), that was some of the funniest lyric I have ever read. Seriously.

    Tell me. Does Elmer have his hat on?

    You are truly the master of all that is dark-end poetry. or is that potty?

    I can never tell the difference :D

    and I REFUSE to write for Lexus. But thanks for the compliment...er.

    I would rather write for Infinity, the car ad without a car. Usually without narration of any sort. I would be quite good at that.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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    "AD D5"

    I wonder what the smart people are thinking about.
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    setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    PS oh darth Later...

    Got the freshly bound and <sniff> <HACK> <COUGH> glued book.

    You are nothing short of homicidal, neurotic genius.
    Oh and there were some in there that actually touched, and even occasionally molested me.

    You deserve to have your stuff in print. I'm going to talk to a guy I know at the local Hot Topic, because like it or not this is right up your alley. And I think it would sell like fucking MAD there.

    hee hee now I have an ISBN number... this should be fun. We'll see if we can't turn this puppy into some sort of homemaker for you, my friend.

    And stop picking boogers when I'm talking to you.
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    "AD D5"

    I wonder what the smart people are thinking about.

    ...they are thinking that nothing IS as it seems

    ....they are wondering is the world about to change it's mind

    ....they are so filled with hope, as if it will soon be christmas morning and all the presents were made from LOVE.

    ....they are afraid to believe the truth

    .....they need to make love for 24hours with jesus.





    and they are afraid that none, NONE of this is real for her.
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    car commericials with OUT cars are the best.

    but love without a stick,
    sucks like just the rest.

    unbranding my heart
    holding who i hold
    deep inside for the
    smart to find out



    CARPOOL!!!!
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    I like the idea of a carpool orgy.
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    Sharon_Hearts_PJSharon_Hearts_PJ Bristol, PA Posts: 1,383
    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    I like the idea of a carpool orgy.

    if the van's a'rockin'....
    *Rock and/or Roll!*
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    Five more days of Rot.

    "Playtime"

    I WAS STROLLING THROUGH THE PARK ONE DAY, IN THE MERRY, MERRY MONTH OF MAY, WHEN I WAS TAKEN BY SURPRISE BY A BLARING BELL SOUND THAT SOUNDED OUT OF THE HEAVENS OR THE HELLS, I COULDN'T DECIDE WHICH, AND AS IT DID SO A PACK OF VICIOUS ROGUES AND HOODLUMS CAME OUT OF NOWHERE AND YET SOMEWHERE, AND THEY BEAT ME AND TOOK MY WALLET AND MY WATCH AND MY CREDIT CARDS AND MY CONDOMS AND SHREDDED MY CLOTHES AWAY WITH THEIR JELLIED LIPS AND BOUND ME TO AN OAK AND HAD THEIR MERRY, MERRY WAY WITH ME WHILE I TRIED NOT TO ENJOY THE SENSUAL, SENSUOUS, SENSATION--OH, I TRIED!--I TRIED TO PUT MY MIND ELSEWHERE, TRIED TO FILL IT WITH UNSIGHTLY IMAGES OF NAKED ELDERS ATOP EACH OTHER IN A POOL OF POOP SO AS NOT TO SUCCUMB TO WHAT I'M SUCCUMBING TO, BUT THESE THOUGHTS LINGERED OUT OF REACH UNTIL MY EYES, EARS, NOSE, MOUTH, AND FINGERED EXTENSIONS COULD NO LONGER RESIST THESE BAWDY BODIES, AND AS MY EYES, EARS, NOSE, MOUTH, AND FINGERED EXTENSIONS AGREED TO THESE FELLAS' PLAYTIME, THESE FELLAS LEFT ME--OH, YES! THEY LEFT ME!--OH, NO! THEY LEFT ME UNFULFILLED, DRIPPING, AND BOUND TO THIS OAK AS I SQUEALED FOR THEIR RETURN, BUT THEY CONTINUED ON TO THE NEXT STROLLER, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT, UNTIL THE PARK WAS FULL OF DIVORCED BITCHES, TIED TO OAKS, PINES, BIRCHES, REDWOODS, BLUEWOODS, GREENWOODS, EVERY KIND OF WOODS, BEGGING, PLEADING, AND CAJOLING, FOR THE LUSCIOUS ROGUES' AND HOOLDUMS' RETURN TO SATISFY OUR MALNOURISHED PLEASURES, BUT THESE FELLAS CONTINUED ON SPREADING AND SWELLING, SWELLING AND SPREADING THEIR SLAVE CLASS CIVILIZATION TO CITY STREETS, CITY TOWNS, CITY FARMS, CITY CITIES, CITY OF LOS ANGELES, CITY OF KANSAS, CITY OF NEW YORK, CITY OF . . . THEN A BLARING BELL SOUND SOUNDED OUT OF THE HEAVENS OR THE HELLS, WE COULDN'T DECIDE WHICH, AND AS IT DID SO, THE PACK OF LUSCIOUS ROGUES AND HOODLUMS WONDERED DISMAYEDLY BACK TO NOWHERE AND YET SOMEWHERE BECAUSE

    RECESS WAS OVER.
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    setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    One of my favorites, master Radar.

    However, I believe it is S.C.A.B. that qualifies you as a bonified genius.

    Or at least, pretty darn smart. LOL
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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    Four more days of Rot

    "less"

    stomach churned
    lesson's learned

    not to eat
    people's feet

    i bruised my marrow
    with calcium sorrow

    put in a rhyme
    just to stop this line

    i faked my feign
    drained my gain

    you're half a bore
    and all whore

    i'm an ass
    with so much class

    life is wasted
    death is tasted

    trapped and done
    divorced from fun

    remaining thought
    just got bought

    hug me less love me less
    i wanna be more of a mess
    kiss my mess love my mess
    i wanna be more of a less

    stupid brain
    forgot my blame

    a victim of
    your hero love

    the shadows hang
    sharp as a fang

    body is a coffin
    i die in it often

    i got the right to be wrong
    i'm really sick of this song

    i like to wear
    my "i don't care"

    all buttoned up
    to choke the love up

    why should i repent
    everything i meant

    maybe there's life
    on top of this knife

    death got dressed up
    i messed it up, i messed it up

    I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP I'M A FUCKUP SO COME AND FUCK ME UP

    hug me less love me less
    i wanna be more of a mess
    kiss my mess love my mess
    i wanna be more of a less
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    Originally posted by setaside2
    One of my favorites, master Radar.

    However, I believe it is S.C.A.B. that qualifies you as a bonified genius.

    Or at least, pretty darn smart. LOL

    **kneels** Playtime was the first poem I wrote for Rot. I have a perverse sentimental attachment to it.

    There are things I like and things I don't like about S.C.A.B. But I won't say what.

    Genius? You, dear sir, are fucked up.

    Pretty darn smart? You, dear sir, are still fucked up.

    :D
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    setaside2setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    Why, Radar, I love you too. :D
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.
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    Sharon_Hearts_PJSharon_Hearts_PJ Bristol, PA Posts: 1,383
    i have to agree with Marc on SCAB. brilliant. still haven't read the entire book (stupid schoolwork keeps me from having any fun lately!)...but i skimmed through and i'm loving it all so far.
    *Rock and/or Roll!*
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