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  • nada
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • Looking for you.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • Echo Beach
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • birthday
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    that's wonderful writing, just wonderful
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    life's choices and life's changes
    that what makes us come alive
    that what helps us to survive
    my painting on life's canvas
    with blood and tears
    the picture comes alive
    and.....
    every picture tells a story.

    Godfather.
  • My original work
    has me believing in nothing and all,
    things crystalline
    documented and lost,
    documented and lost
    again and again,
    continue the practice breath
    life into life
    between
    no ends
  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    Godfather. wrote:
    life's choices and life's changes
    that what makes us come alive
    that what helps us to survive
    my painting on life's canvas
    with blood and tears
    the picture comes alive
    and.....
    every picture tells a story.

    Godfather.

    My original work
    has me believing in nothing and all,
    things crystalline
    documented and lost,
    documented and lost
    again and again,
    continue the practice breath
    life into life
    between
    no ends

    :clap: and :clap:
  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    as if by that one token
    we came to be here
    I would have taken it
    I would not have thrown it
    out as far as I could
    I would not have cried

    one part of every days stays
    to another part
    everyday dies
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    rollings wrote:
    as if by that one token
    we came to be here
    I would have taken it
    I would not have thrown it
    out as far as I could
    I would not have cried

    one part of every days stays
    to another part
    everyday dies

    and as the days pass
    each day begins and starts as new
    with the promise of life's changes
    and its challengs.

    so each day we remember the last
    but move forward in search of a dream.


    Godfather.
  • Godfather.Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    my instant thought;
    challenges come and and challenges go
    but our dreams go on forever
    they are the building blocks of our future
    so keep your dreams alive.


    Godfather.
  • The breeze
    The melody
    The memories
    Daylight changes everything
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • donnaruhldonnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    Forever is just a word.Forever never comes.
    Just say you'll love me till the end.
  • the fear goes away...
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    On a rainy morning like this one, I'd like to be a painter. To paint all the red lights caught in the water. It's so colorful. Just like light shines more obviously in the dark, it radiates further in water on the roads. It is vigorous color! Red, red, red, streaks on the road. Red, red, red, lights in my eyes too.

    Beautiful color spread out in the water's reflection! A modern color scape. :)
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  • inside job
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • Just for today...
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • wake up
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • epic
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • One in four instant thoughts are cancerous
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    One in four instant thoughts are cancerous
    that aint no shit! i fully agree
    & as of late the poetic play on writing & quick thought here in this thread of the poetry section has become something to be desired alright.

    i wish people gave 100% all the time, 24x7, 365 days a year when it comes to creative writing. bust one's balls, work at it, bleed it & sweat it out. it is a craft; a artform to be taken seriously

    that is all. thank you for reading & understanding
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Where is the ghee? reduced the butter to pure fat,
    alchemist dream persists as I de-cyst-omaticly cease,
    no wonder land becomes the tonic fair
    spare tire becomes flat and lazy
    NO
    not for the ends of this life time!
    Walk away swayed into the dance of self design ,
    creator to thank not self-same bitter retort, sadness
    sadness at not keeping true to self? or is it too true?
    Who am I?
    What the...?
    Skip the sanity to be in the midst,
    mist
    dead skunk in the middle of the road saw the coyote sitting,
    standing still, poised too long
    Okay you are right
    I would have willed long ago sacrifice to say
    time worn tradition, feng shui the wash board union
    So many offended off hand
    sniveling trivia for my tissue
    child's play cannot say what it is to be a woman
    a little less of a mushroom where I am kept in the dark and fed bullshit,
    pissing me off into escape that is not the safest
    Why do I....?
    Such a popular song undone
    in the calling
    game is up.
    Renew reframe re- group re- coup? what was lost?
    Mad-a-gas-car
    Jade
    Jasper
    nomenclature
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Where is the ghee? reduced the butter to pure fat,
    alchemist dream persists as I de-cyst-omaticly cease,
    no wonder land becomes the tonic fair
    spare tire becomes flat and lazy
    NO
    not for the ends of this life time!
    Walk away swayed into the dance of self design ,
    creator to thank not self-same bitter retort, sadness
    sadness at not keeping true to self? or is it too true?
    Who am I?
    What the...?
    Skip the sanity to be in the midst,
    mist
    dead skunk in the middle of the road saw the coyote sitting,
    standing still, poised too long
    Okay you are right
    I would have willed long ago sacrifice to say
    time worn tradition, feng shui the wash board union
    So many offended off hand
    sniveling trivia for my tissue
    child's play cannot say what it is to be a woman
    a little less of a mushroom where I am kept in the dark and fed bullshit,
    pissing me off into escape that is not the safest
    Why do I....?
    Such a popular song undone
    in the calling
    game is up.
    Renew reframe re- group re- coup? what was lost?
    Mad-a-gas-car
    Jade
    Jasper
    nomenclature

    thank you for the writing. i had to look up the word i highlighted. i was lazy though & used the online definition & not a old fashion dictionary. also, the first word that comes up with nomenclature is chemisty...

    1. the devising or choosing of names for things, esp. in a science or other discipline. - online definition

    nicely done
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwick wrote:
    One in four instant thoughts are cancerous
    that aint no shit! i fully agree
    & as of late the poetic play on writing & quick thought here in this thread of the poetry section has become something to be desired alright.

    i wish people gave 100% all the time, 24x7, 365 days a year when it comes to creative writing. bust one's balls, work at it, bleed it & sweat it out. it is a craft; a artform to be taken seriously

    that is all. thank you for reading & understanding

    EEK sorry I really have not the balls to bust nor crafted anything quite that seriously here and do take this thread a bit less seriously and have fun with it and most of what is posted, I was referring to my own instant thoughts being cancerous :oops: I know others have serious talent and dedication to writing here and I do truly delight in reading them as they come in, thank you Chadwick for your comments and vigorous writing style I appreciate them and your writing very much
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    i am very much all for fun & lighthearted fucking around. there is also a time for getting real
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Learn to recognize omens, and follow them
    "...Dimitri...He talks to me...'.."The Ghost of Greece..".
    "..That's One Happy Fuckin Ghost.."
    “..That came up on the Pillow Case...This is for the Greek, With Our Apologies.....”
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Yes, like a detective following a trail. :)
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  • rollingsrollings unknown Posts: 7,125
    tight these feelings I have for you
    run like rivers over boulders down from
    nightfall set on candles
    stringing lights
    me you
    these arms
  • the wolfthe wolf Posts: 7,027
    The lines of communication must stay open
    Let us not waste this time
    While waiting for your pearls of wisdom
    I scratch your back, and you stab mine.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I'm sometimes surprised by how slightly people understand me. I feel like such an open book but I guess I'm not.
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