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  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    There's a question bubbling up.
    Or, rather, an idea that's coming forward to my attention!
    :)
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    maybe there was a snowflake
    could have been
    maybe a bright one for me
    could have been

    maybe there was a woman
    could have been
    maybe a nice one for me
    could have been

    perhaps she was into angel making in the snow
    could have been
    but not anymore
    she moved to hawaii with some dude full of gold & diamonds

    maybe they'll get divorced
    she'll come back home
    one snowy day
    she'll have a tan
    he'll be far away as always

    maybe a snowflake
    maybe a storm
    then she'll remind me how shitty this poem is
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • STAYSEA
    STAYSEA Posts: 3,814
    Chadwick.. I read it all.
    My instant thought is that you should not spend anymore time on "her".
    My Ex still pays my phone bill. We haven't spoken in 3 months. I want to take over the contract, but I don't want to talk to him. And, why not let him pay? He was seeing his new girl for 6 years before he became honest. If you can't be happy with her, then call it what it is.. NOTHING.
    We all deserve happiness. I still haven't found that my self :oops:
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    STAYSEA wrote:
    Chadwick.. I read it all.
    My instant thought is that you should not spend anymore time on "her".
    My Ex still pays my phone bill. We haven't spoken in 3 months. I want to take over the contract, but I don't want to talk to him. And, why not let him pay? He was seeing his new girl for 6 years before he became honest. If you can't be happy with her, then call it what it is.. NOTHING.
    We all deserve happiness. I still haven't found that my self :oops:
    i am sorry for your bunk ass dude's crap. this crap bullshit poem of mine is just that... bullshit & means absolutely nothing. it was written to just try and get writing out. hadn't written in like 5 or 6 days give or take. sometimes i just sit down and write the stupidest bullshit that means zero. this is not even directed at anyone at all.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • I wouldn't be surprised if the wind brought you back
    But I'm not one for predicting the weather.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    eat a brown & purple alien
    have her toes
    direct prayers at sunlight
    for you shall be forgiven
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    what do you got, another cup of some more ordinary
    no thank you I already have I said no thank you
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    tired
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    this is that
    by which you can
    without really saying
    convey things felt without really
    saying
    things without really

    when you're in that space where
    there's only that thing you feel
    you can't say
    and they are one

    the beauty is if
    you are not understood
    but someone understands
    that is the same mesh

    the same thing
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I had this feeling last night
    sitting with people who projected
    that one can almost see the vortex
    the swirling thoughts that surround them
    made me feel as if
    if I got too close, they'd try to pull me under
    drag me down
    into their swirling unhappiness

    I could almost see the water circling the drain!
    there was something in the air!
    bad stuff!
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  • Open up and say what you feel...
    The year is coming to an end
    The new one will wash away your sins.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • donnaruhl
    donnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    You painted me a picture,
    You told me a story
    You wrote me a song.

    Me and my kerchief,
    You and your suitcase.
    I took a walk with you,
    down memory road.

    Sing me back home,
    Sing me away for awhile,
    Sing to me, a song from your suitcase,
    So that I may walk with you once again,
    Down Memory Road.
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    donnaruhl wrote:
    You painted me a picture,
    You told me a story
    You wrote me a song.

    Me and my kerchief,
    You and your suitcase.
    I took a walk with you,
    down memory road.

    Sing me back home,
    Sing me away for awhile,
    Sing to me, a song from your suitcase,
    So that I may walk with you once again,
    Down Memory Road.

    that was nice
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    the nights
    are asleep, hated, or loved
    can't remember when they were
    anything else
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    what of her nighty
    her beautiful body in lace
    black satin wrapped in fire like velvet
    musta been her eyes that burned a hole through my manliness
    she's a devil that one
    lightly her hair fine like air playing against my neck & her own
    all tangled up showing me where i been

    we been down this road before
    lotsa times since
    and the jar of honey warm & rubbed
    touched across her

    the body of an angel
    sin of a woman
    her kiss like flame
    my groin on fire shooting jolts of electric not static but pure magic
    my eyes imploded long ago
    her scent took me over
    her flesh ate my own
    she is like yesterday's sun
    tomorrow's moon
    somehow i been lost in her smiles
    one after another her continuance feeling me out grabbing me
    pulling squeezing me in
    i have been turned around
    thrown to the raw earth a sweaty mess
    a broken down man
    a god damn happy son of a bitch

    her witchy eyes
    tiny looking crystal balls in her skull
    hundreds of years beautiful something like all melting colors
    at sunset & sunrise
    ending & beginning
    her voice of music going its own direction from her mystcal throat
    against one wall back again
    sunk into my spine
    like a rusty anchor of a giant ship out in her murky bog
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • donnaruhl
    donnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    Sonoma night's,In the vintage light.
    We'd howel at the harvest moon.
    Arnold Drive claiming many of lives,
    It's a wonder how we made it to,
    Jack London Saloon.

    So many time's,
    Just a couple of fool's.
    Drinking our wine,
    And singing the blue's,
    Singing the blue's.

    By winter time,
    We made a turn around.
    A baby is on it's way.
    You and I started growing up,
    We knew it had to be that way.

    Goodbye to the moon,
    And old Murphy's Saloon.
    Just a couple of fool's,
    Most of the time,
    Just singing the blue's,
    Singing the blue's.

    Maybe you'll never understand,
    You said as we left the Bar.
    Horris sighed,as he shook his head.
    You know he's gonna break your heart,
    No goodbye's for you.

    While I was driving you home,
    Just a couple of fool's.
    Radio on and playing the blue's,
    Playing the blue's.

    Wishing you luck as you drove away,
    I Love You,
    Love You Too!
    Tomorrow's Easter, Have a happy day.
    I forgot to say goodbye to you.

    I loved you dearly, You were my best friend.
    You touched my heart,
    And now my lonley heart.
    Can only touch a part of your memory,
    Of your memory.
  • USARAY
    USARAY Posts: 517
    today's sadness is tomorrow's joy
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
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  • donnaruhl
    donnaruhl Posts: 2,157
    I wouldn't be surprised if the wind brought you back
    But I'm not one for predicting the weather.

    LMAO That's Great! :lol:
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    they were like two stars,
    passing in the midnight sky of delight.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel