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CHANGEinWAVES

It's time to do something about this... you know you want to.

rollings

Thank you Mr. Godfather

chadwick

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

somehow she is red, warm and my life that goes and comes around
other times fading is where everything else dwells even when i am there
i am not present

wish i was swimmin'
i'd be bloody instead as well
and as tall as a bridge above my head and chest

she'd still be red
gliding around me building a pool
puddles of mess

somewhere i gotta be me
sometimes i gotta be me
mostly i gotta be
all this dark warm soothing fluid
floating me a vessel
floating me a vessel

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

and as large as cells each one a sun
a flag sailing oceans' winds
all my bones dusty as the world
as cold as the deep

wishin i was swimmin' wide and far
the lost desert of solitary tears and pain

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

supersonicyears

c'mon now portly brunettes?? LOL!




edit: oops missed the L

supersonicyears

chadwick wrote:

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

somehow she is red, warm and my life that goes and comes around
other times fading is where everything else dwells even when i am there
i am not present

wish i was swimmin'
i'd be bloody instead as well
and as tall as a bridge above my head and chest

she'd still be red
gliding around me building a pool
puddles of mess

somewhere i gotta be me
sometimes i gotta be me
mostly i gotta be
all this dark warm soothing fluid
floating me a vessel
floating me a vessel

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

and as large as cells each one a sun
a flag sailing oceans' winds
all my bones dusty as the world
as cold as the deep

wishin i was swimmin' wide and far
the lost desert of solitary tears and pain

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

Brilliant writing as usual.

chadwick

supersonicyears wrote:

chadwick wrote:

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

somehow she is red, warm and my life that goes and comes around
other times fading is where everything else dwells even when i am there
i am not present

wish i was swimmin'
i'd be bloody instead as well
and as tall as a bridge above my head and chest

she'd still be red
gliding around me building a pool
puddles of mess

somewhere i gotta be me
sometimes i gotta be me
mostly i gotta be
all this dark warm soothing fluid
floating me a vessel
floating me a vessel

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

and as large as cells each one a sun
a flag sailing oceans' winds
all my bones dusty as the world
as cold as the deep

wishin i was swimmin' wide and far
the lost desert of solitary tears and pain

i'd like to be in water
this way bleeding is the same

Brilliant writing as usual.

thank you very much, supersonicyears
no plan, no reasoning, just go
i dunno if this is brlliant or not
i just do what feels good

rollings

~~~
If wonder and me held,
I couldn't tell you how to fly.
If rain spoke up, I would

Big sky so tall, white and above.
If words held my hair,
I couldn't tell
~~~

chadwick

rollings wrote:

~~~
If wonder and me held,
I couldn't tell you how to fly.
If rain spoke up, I would

Big sky so tall, white and above.
If words held my hair,
I couldn't tell
~~~

for some reason that made me laugh a bit out loud

justam

I still haven't figured out how to get my iphone to SEND emails. :? :P

I'll have to ask my son.

supersonicyears

irony noun (Concise Encyclopedia)
Language device in which the real intent is concealed or contradicted by the literal meaning of words or a situation. Verbal irony, either spoken or written, arises from an awareness of contrast between what is and what ought to be.

rollings

I want you to take your love and
put it up a tree
go ahead
push it on up there
stand back and hope that it
sticks

justam

Visions of future days
lunches and walks
music and talks
visions of comfy chairs
lightning and heavy rain too
bolts all over this home
here, it's grey and rainy sometimes
other times, it's
blue skies and white puffy clouds
visions of future days

justam

Sun come up, it was blue and gold
sun come up, it was blue and gold
sun come up, it was blue and gold,
ever since I put your picture in a frame.

I love waking up with a good song in my head!

CHANGEinWAVES

if it ever happens. let it happen soon. I'm losing my cool.

pandora

i thought the wind was rain...

justam

I'm so grateful that I often wake up with a song in my heart and a reason to smile.

catefrances

boo greyhound. :(

justam

I'll be back on board tonight after I get my own stuff done today.

supersonicyears

Half of my puzzle is missing...

chadwick

supersonicyears wrote:

Half of my puzzle is missing...

the other half is not missing, it just is where you are not